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Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oh no now the you know what has hit the fan poor sam.  Lorraine

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 6

Ha, so Sammy's been found out..hm.. He's not going to be able to lie his way out of this one, as to the reviews.. You deserve a bucket full for this story and I plan on drumming up some interest on your behalf.  Really, really great story - K

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 5

He chuckled to himself. Whoever it was, they'd had a blast and put a few dents in the wall of her apartment - he  he he he he, too funny.

Sam's anguish over his family not believing him is really well done.  We all know of kids who feel, valid or not, that their parents just wont understand what they're going through.  Of course in Sam's case, no one really does understand, but still the sentiment is nicely done - Great job - K

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 6

It`s ok you don`t need to beg for reviews it`s a great story. so Dean is going to be watching Sam like a hawk.  Lorraine

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 3

ah Dean waiting up for him sweet. Lorraine

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

wow what a wonderful idea, feels really odd reading about them all as a family. But odd in a good way. Lorraine

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 4

It would be a miracle if the boys came back from the weekend unscathed.  - That'd be my thought if I left my two boys alone together..lol.  So we've got Sam ducking Dean, Dean being Dean..lol, and Bobby on his way.  Gotta stop reading for now, but I will be back.  Great story.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 3

I wasn't desperate to get away from here Sam. I was desperate to get out into the world, see what it was... what it had to offer."

"I'm just messin with ya. I was totally out getting drunk and having sex."

That's the best line ever.. or well couple of lines..lol.  And though I don't belive Dean's line, I thought it was great.  Loving this story - K

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 2

This is just a terrific take on Supernatural.  I'm completely loving it.  Moving onto the next chapter - K

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 22/10/07 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very nice start.  Just came across this one, I don't normally do AU, but I'm liking this.. thanks for the read - K

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 14

Maybe we could buy Bobby a zoo ticket? - laugh - I love this, poor Sam!  Eager for more

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 14

Just when I thought it couldn't get worse for the Winchesters, it does.  That poor family!  I can't wait for things to start turning around for them.

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 21/10/07 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 14

wow.  just can't think of another word to describe this chapter. I totally love Natasha. She's so adorable. and the ending was just... wow. can't wait to see what the heck happens next. and thanks coz you just totally brightened up my crappy night.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 13

Don't leave Sam in the cuckoo's nest for long!  Can't wait for Dean to help him.

Interesting conversation between Dean and Kevin.

More please!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 12

This is superb!  Did Sam slash his wrists or was it wounds from the monster.  Poor Dean, finding Sam like that.  And the memory Dean has at the end is heartbreaking.  I love it!  Absolutley amazing!

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 14/10/07 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 13

i hope one of the ways he figures out to help his brother is to break sam out of the psyche ward coz damn if that isn't a creepy place! nice job. desperately awaiting the next chapter.  btw, as requested, letting u know i thoroughly enjoyed what you feel

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 12

Wow. This is getting really good.

Reviewer: lindi (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 12

Thank you for another great chapter. Poor Sam and Dean. What will happen now? Is Sam going to be ok? Will he tell Dean? Please update soon.

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

Think we'd all be happy to see whatever notebook sketches you've got.  I'm not sure if I feel worse for Sam or Dean somehow.  To need each other that much and not really know it.....  looking for more

Reviewer: Katieelessar (Signed) · Date: 06/10/07 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 11

Ouch. Poor Sammy. He's going to be beating himself up on this one for a while.

 I simply adore this fic. Beautifully written and everyone is so in character, it's wonderful. Great work and I'm looking forward to reading what happens next!

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 11

Oh no! Even in this reality Sam blames himself! :0( Poor guy. Great job

~Kayla

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/09/07 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 11

Very powerful chapter!  I think the flashback of the therapy session was the most heart-breaking.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 29/09/07 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 11

Oh my. Wow, what great description there...very, very sad. Sorry I haven't reviewed the last few chapters...I finally got to this one, though! Great job! Beautiful writing....this story is getting so poignant and I'm very interested to see where it goes! Great job again, Maygin!

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 10

Ohhh Bad Sammy.

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 25/09/07 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 6

Ooooh Bad Sammy BAD!!!!!

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