Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 14/06/09 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 20

Lovely way to tie up the losse ends!  So is there a sequel?  Obviously Mary is involved in something and it sounds like she may be on an opposite side of the fence than her sons.

Reviewer: tsweeny (Signed) · Date: 04/07/08 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 20

     I enjoyed this story probably because it was a little different than most.  I especially liked Bobby, Missourri, and Pastor Jim bring in it.  I liked that Dean gradually came around to being the awesome big brother that we expect him to be.  I hope that you will continue this story soon  

Reviewer: cheri (Signed) · Date: 14/06/08 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 12

This story has me so hooked! It's fantastic!

Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 15/02/08 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 20

amazing story.. i know i'm a little late with the review, but thought you should hear a little praise for your writing. i would love to see another story in this version of the lives of the winchesters. i think it would be a real bestseller...

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 20

Happy New Year to you also, Maygin.  I will say just once more that I loved this story and you completely knocked it out of the park.  I will also go on to say that like my friend Fredo I will be waiting in anticipation of a sequel. 

Thanks for the terrific read - K

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 18

Oh wow!  Amazing!  So much action and bonding between the boys.  I luuuuv it!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 19

no, no, no, i don't wanna see this story ending. Could you maybe consider a series out of it?? Explaining for example why the simple mention of a yellow eyed man seemed to convince Mary so easily?... Awesome, really great awesome story.

Reviewer: Anybody out there (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 19

I've really really loved this story, have read the epilogue too, but saw there was no reviews on the final chapter so figured I could say some nice little words here instead;)

I think this story is awesome. The idea of Mary being still alive is not new, but your idea of how evil could still affect the family is so good. And you've captured all the characters so well. Love the tension between the brothers, the way they still love each other (cause that's what siblings do, right), but don't have the close relationship they have in the tv-show. And at the same time both crave the other's trust. I mean Dean still want to play the big brother, he just don't know how, and Sam though he is the only one knowing about the things that goes bump in the night (at least he thinks he is, obviously Mary knows something, loved the way you brought that in, by the way) he still seems a bit innocent (like the Sammy we know) and longing for big brother taking care of things. 

Like the way you give us insight in both the "normal" family life and Sam's hunting at the same time. And you even mange to bring Bobby and Jim into it, how awesome is that. And as a huge fan of the show, I have to say I'm happy that you let my favorite brothers rebuild their relationship:) It was also realistic.

And the end.... am I smelling a sequel here? Please say yes!! *giving you the puppy eye look*.

Only thing left to say is: great job, Maygin:) 

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 20

Wonderful ending!  I loved the stuffed lion sent to Natalie and how that made her feel not alone.  Sweet moment.

Thanks for sharing this great story, Maygin.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 18

Well if that chapter is any sign of what happens when you take your time, then by all means take as much time as you need.  Loved it loved it, the boys memories, the action, all of it was just perfect.

Tell you what should you decide you wanna go ahead and make a series out of this one I am on board.  Thanks for the terrific read and I look forward to more - Kel

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 18

wow, awesome!! And so happy to see you're back, i missed you! Super chapter, loved the little convo about the monster in the closet and the magic lightsaber. Can't wait for the finale!

Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 18

What a nice twist! 

I will follow your story!  Please update soon!!

Regards!

Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 18

OH.  MY.  GOD.  !!

This is absolutely b&**%£y brilliant!  I was so hooke have just read the whole lot in one go... tell me you are posting the rest soon!!!

So clever that SN hadn't touched the whol family just Sam... poor old Sam!

M&Ms to get you to write more now!!

LOL Dix Bucks, England