Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 17- In My Dreams
This is getting creepier by the chapter. And i cant wait till the next chapter is poster.
Author's Response: | Glad you said that because creepy is what I was going for. When are you planning on posting your 3rd chapter? I'm dying here. | |
Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 30/12/07 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 17- In My Dreams
I had to review again because there was other parts I like apart from the dream. Cale is a very dominant and demanding character and for some reason I like her, I get the feeling I'm not supposed to though. I like how the relationship is different to what I expected, Matilda is the oldest, yet she seems to be under the younger one, Cales commads. Brilliant update!!! Can't wait for more of it.
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks a ton- 2 reviews for 1 chapter, how kind of you. Feel free to like Cale, she seems dominant and demanding but isnt there always a reason why people behave the way they do? Thanks for stars once again, very appreciated! | |
Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 30/12/07 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 17- In My Dreams
You are the cleverest girl, I swear to god. Amba in the woods calling for her sister, is it the dream she had earlier in the story? In chapter 7 she spun around and saw nothing, but in this chapter it was Sam behind her, that is f***ing genius...I can't believe how you did that!!!! You're brilliant, every little detail ties up perfectly, and slowly coming together. I wish I could give you 20/20
Author's Response: Sorry for late response, thank you for noticing, I wrote it so far back I was sure readers would forget that she dreamt about it before. I'm so pleased you're enjoying this, melts my heart coz you just gave me a 20;) Schelz | |
Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 30/12/07 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 16- Not Alone
Juicy aint the word for it, this town is swimming in secrets, and that is what the title promised;) well done Looking forward to seeing Matilda and her sister Cale's relationship unfurl. Creepy trio, Clare, Matilda and Cale. Bill and Naheeda are deeper in this twisted tale than imagined. He was a cop back in eighty six...you are a twisted girl, but it keeps me wanting.
Author's Response: Yep, swimming is the word for it..swimming in secrets and people are about to start drowning in em. Glad you look forward to finding out more about Cale and Matilda..lol, creepy trio? I don't mind being twisted if it keeps you wanting more!! Thanks for reading and reviewing hun. | |
Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 30/12/07 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 15- Behind Blue Eyes
Amba's falling in love with Sam, awww that is so sweet. All the parts between Sam and Amba in this chapter were just soo perfect. kissing her lips with the full force of his eratically beating heart...that line really got me. Matilda from the cafe? Interesting...very interesting
Author's Response: I'm glad you like all the moments that Sam and Amba share. Yep Matilad from the cafe... Thanks for the review and stars hun. | |
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 30/12/07 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 17- In My Dreams
first of all, the underwear models comment was brilliant! A bit of action in this chapter with Amba being missing in the woods. I really felt for Sam, he really cares about her. Can hardly wait for the update! Suga
Author's Response: Glad you're still enjoying this fic. I know, Sam has grown attached to Amba and visa versa;) Update soon! | |
Reviewer: staffy08 (Signed) · Date: 27/12/07 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 17- In My Dreams
It is definitly weirder and creepier Schelz. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, good work on this one hun. Mer xxxx
Author's Response: Thanks Mer;) glad you like it and glad your looking forward to the next chapter hun... Schelz | |
Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 26/12/07 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 13- The Night that Haunts Me!
WOW! Perfectly written, leaving me hungry for more as usual Wanna know the truth behind Amba, wanna know it so bad! Way to go, lovie! Wish for you more and more success
Author's Response: Thanks for the stars gawjus;) thank you for finding it perfectly written, truly glad you are hungry for more. Look out for the chapter called something about Amba, reveals all. Well not all, but some. Lol Thanks again, Jay;) | |
Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 22/12/07 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 12- It's Not Over!
Wow I feel bad for Charlene, I suspected her :( Naheeda is terrible, poor Amba nobody understands her the relationship between Amba and Dean surprises me, I friggin' love it, she can go with both boys and that surprises me, too A kick ass chappy as well, will review on the rest later when I get a chance Love ya ma writing queen, *hugs*
Author's Response: Jay, my darlin girl you don't know how much I've missed you:) Don't worry, Charlene will forgive you. lol No body understands Amba, but I'm glad you do, from the start of this story you've loved her, thanks! The relationship Amba and Dean have surprised me too, it kinda just happened but now I'm happy because it works so well. glad you love the idea too:) Review weneva you get the time hun, no rush. Makes me smile to hear from you. Love ya too my kickass friend:) Hugs4u Schelz
Reviewer: Daydreamer (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 16- Not Alone
Wow schelz....this story is becoming more and more interesting, may i add thrilling. Thank u so much. It's 2:13am right now and i'm up just to read this chapter. Now that i'm done i can finally sleep....but it doesn't mean that i'm not anxious for the next chapter....Waiting....
Author's Response: Tar very much, I am glad it has managed to keep you interested. Every one is up late this morning, me and Mer spoke until 4.20am...lol glad your anxious, next chap soon, after christmas:) | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 16- Not Alone
This chapter is twisted indeed but I like twisted and this story is good.
Author's Response: Thanks, you know me;) I love twisted, maybe coz I am just a tad twisted myself. lol Thanks for thinking this is good. | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 15- Behind Blue Eyes
This is great, it makes me want to read more.
Author's Response: | glad you wanna read more, thanks for reading and reviewing sharx. | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 14- What it is to have a soul
This is brilliant cant wait to read the rest, I love the way you've twisted the story like that.
Author's Response: | thanks sharx, glad you like the twists, plenty more to come. | |
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 16- Not Alone
Matilda from the cafe? the shy timid one. Cale seems very dark, poor Matilda, shes the older one but Cales in charge. I'm gobsmacked that Eleanor has all those pictures of Amba, lisas face gone, is she the one who has Lisa? This is brilliant stuff, as soon as I think I might know who it is, something else is revealed. Very jiucy stuff indeed. Poor Amba was so happy when Joe showed up, he's so hard!!! Amba loves her glasses but she's willing to take them off coz Joe don't, horrible man. And then to end the chapter with a BANG!!! Our reckless driver bill was a cop, actually a dectective, so many twists and turns slowly unravelling, boy I cant get enough of this story. Another riveting chapter!!!! Suga
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review, glad you're paying attention. You'll soon see that everyone has a role to play...yep, I try to leave you guys wanting, glad you thought you liked the end of the chapter. Riveting???Thanks a lot | |
Reviewer: Daydreamer (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 15- Behind Blue Eyes
Wow i wonder wot Clare and co are up to....and where is Bill? There are so many mysteries....cheers Schelz for posting this chapter....waiting on the next one.
Author's Response: All be revealed....glad you're still with me, update soon as I can! Schelz | |
Reviewer: Agoldenrose (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 15- Behind Blue Eyes
See now it must of been hard for Naheeda to have seen her dad. but it's not Amba's fault that he's a killer. and there's Naheeda kinda taking out on Amba coz she don't know how to handle what she saw herself. but Amba don't even know. and that Linda goodman was such a good book. it's funny how Amba and Sam are not sharing there feeling's but yet thinking the same things about eachother. trust Dean to be making joke's all the time. aw it's so sweet Sam telling dean bout the kiss that him and Amba shared. Claire is just so shifty i can.twait to see that all unfold. and that Cale is quite weird too. pls don't leave me hanging to long. agoldenrose XxXx
Author's Response: Glad you're still with me, thanks for the stars and this chunky review golden. Glad you liked this chapter;) Schelz | |
Reviewer: Agoldenrose (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 14- What it is to have a soul
Oh my claire's attack was really freaky. uh and Dean is just so dreamy holding her against his strong chest. lol. and poor Sam the THONG on his hand was a classic. Naheeda should be so embaressed with her house in that state. OMG are you telling me that Naheeda has been acting like a salty bitch cos she can't forgive herself and taking it out on Amba yh makes alot of sence. an i like the way Dean put it "well being a bitch isn't helping". OOH now what's going on there Bill is Naheeda's dad so what the hell was he doing. he could of killed his own daughter not to mention the two girl's that did loose their live's in the accident. and now poor Amba wont forgive herself n Naheeda wont let her forget it eava. interesting chapter. agoldenrose XxXx
Author's Response: Would love to be in Deans arms, but in better circumstances. Lol I thought that was funny too, when he told Naheeda acting like a bitch wasn't helping. Thanks for review | |
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 15- Behind Blue Eyes
I love how every character has great significance, they start of being a cameo. Then BOOM, thats why they're in it. Naheeda started off being the girl that answered the door to the boys and now her father and her tangled in the whole mess. Love the part where Sam was watching Amba's enticing body, the way you write is incerible...' her womanly curves trapping him in his impure thoughts of her.' You can really write passion, I can see there is passion between Sam and Amba. Just great!!!! Suga
Author's Response: Thanks for the stars, glad you continue to like the story and appreciate characters. All have a purpose! I'm glad you like the womanly curves bit...glad you find it passionate, I do try. | |
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 14- What it is to have a soul
Sorry, I had to let it all sink in, Bill is the driver that hurt Amba who turns out to be Naheeda's father. Excellent! Genius twists Schelz:) Suga
Author's Response: Oh phew! When I saw 'WHAT??' I was thinking oh no 'WHAT?' Glad you're liking the twists, hope you continue to read. Believe it or not I wrote this story when season one was showing, after skin. Its taking me ages to post but the end is worth it...promise If not up to par you can send the computer demon after me | |
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 14- What it is to have a soul
WHAT???
Reviewer: staffy08 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 15- Behind Blue Eyes
I'm sure the end is worth the wait. Another great chapter Schelz. Merrie x
Author's Response: Thanks hun, glad you're still enjoying it. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Daydreamer (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 14- What it is to have a soul
Wow!! What a revelation....i wonder y would Bill want to kill his own daughter and her friends....or was it him? Plz post the next chapter i can't wait!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing D.D, yup it was defo Bill...I will be posting the next one as soon as I get the one after that back...am I making sense? It'll be up soon!!! Schelz | |
Reviewer: staffy08 (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 14- What it is to have a soul
Another great chapter Schelz. Gimme more (before you shoot me, no I don't like Britney, that line just popped out). ;) Merrie xx
Author's Response: Ahh, Glad your reading this and liking it. I am planning to start posting once or twice a week coz its taking me ages to finish this. You like Britney????What??? I'm just kidding, thanks for reviewing hun:) Schelz | |
Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 14- What it is to have a soul
First of all, love the title of this chapter. Your so fabulous, the secrets just keep piling up and plot just thickens more and more. Fantasic update!!!! Kitten
Author's Response: Glad you like the title, and thanks for calling me fab. Yup, the secrets are piling up, I might have just a few more up my sleeve too. lol Thanks for review hun | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 13- The Night that Haunts Me!
This chapter is good and i like the way you've twisted the story by making Naheeda and Amba have different stories of the night.
Author's Response: Thanks Sharx, glad you're still reading. Love Schelz | |
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