Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 26/01/09 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 25- Wide Awake
The end?!!!!! NOOOOOOOO..^^..hehe..lovely story. ;D
Author's Response: Hey again :D I'm very very glad you liked this story. It might be the end, for a while anyway. Thanks a lot for reading & reviewing. Schelz x
Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 25/01/09 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 23- Black Magik Woman
OMG OMG OMG OMG I'm speechless, I'm so...DAMN! It was so annoying when the boys and Amba kept missing each other! SECRETS ARE KILLING ME! Very good chap...
Author's Response: Hehe I like your reaction :D Just breath nice and slow, I don't want you passing out. Thanks for the review and stars. Schelz x
Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 25/01/09 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 22- Me, Myself & Cale
I don't believe it, this story is like a snow ball, it starts off slow and as it grows it gains speed. :O Excellent chapter, I clung on to every word that was written because I could picture all the actions. I wish all your chapters were this long. Dean made me panic, when he started thinking about what would happen to Sam and Amba when it was all over, that scares me. Sam hunts and she's so fragile at times, it's not the kind of life she can handle and it's not the life Sam would want to offer her. Damn it Dean.... I love the sweet moment with Sam watching Amba while she slept, falling asleep holding his hand....aww! Fantastic twist with the sisters and friend Clare, didn't expect that at all. Niiice! AND OMG IT'S GRACE!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hey Kitten, so glad you're still able to enjoy this little mystery of mine. It's a great compliment to me, to know that you clung to every word because they created images for you. I worry for Sam and Amba too, you'll just have to wait and see what happens to them. :D OMG is it Grace? It ain't over til the witch sings. lol Schelz x
Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/09 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 21- It's her they wanted!
This is awesome, I can't believe it, I never saw this coming. Fantasy, this story has had my head spinning, I wish I could write like that. Poor Charlene!!! Sorry I haven't been around, changing jobs has been a challenge. Kitten
Author's Response: Hi, glad this has had your head spinning. Thanks for leaving a review and those pretty stars. No worries about being late! Schelz x
Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 29/11/08 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 23- Black Magik Woman
OMG! OMG! What a cliffie What would that baddie do? *bites nails* Oh Grace, I hated you My God Amba is one torn sweetie Poor love *hugs her & Sammy* Don't you dare delay the update, sugar *hugs*
Author's Response: :D Hey J, *snuggles* thanks for the review and the loyal support of Amba and Sam, even though they don't give in like you want them too. lol, the stars are always appreciated too, love ya x
Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 08/09/08 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 22- Me, Myself & Cale
Wow! What a chapter! I loved it a lot & I'm dying for the next chapter Ten stars, hon
Author's Response: The stars are golden, thank you! Glad you liked it and don't worry, the next chapter has been posted hun ;)
Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 21- It's her they wanted!
A long chappy but very well written I hate Naheeda but I pity Matilda & Cale; poor girls Charlene is dead, OMG! Too many deaths I hope nothing bad happens to Amba till the end Keep it up sweetie & hurry up with a fast update
Author's Response: Thank you for sticking with me Jay;) I kinda like all the screwed up characters in this story, Cale especially. Poor Charlene, unfortunately, gotta go where the muse leads! I can't promise anything, but I hope for you and Sam's sake nothing happens to Amba either ;) Sorry it's taken so long for me to reply and post another, but I promise the last couple chaps will be up soon. Schelz x
Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 20- All the things you said.
Poor Clare, that's where she got that scar from? I'm sorry I hated her Cale is the character we love to hate, i wanna see more of her, can we please *puppy eyes* Excellent as usual *off to read chapter 21*
Author's Response: Yuppy! I'm sorry too, because I hated Clare at first. lol I'm glad you love to hate Cale, shows that she's getting a reaction out of you which is an accomplishment ;) You'll see more of Cale. Thnx for review hun
Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 20- All the things you said.
I kinda feel sorry for Clare but at the same time she deserved it because of the way she was goading Cale. Like the insight on the extra characters! Eleanor and Noah know something about Grace, Jo and Amba?!? I want to know too. Creepy with Amba and Allan!!! like the cliff with Cale and Dean... Want more, soon, plz.
Author's Response: Very pleased you like the insight into my extra characters. Yuppy, Eleanor and Noah, well everyone has secrets and knows secrets in that town... you'll know soon, promise! Still creepy huh...I like it! Glad you liked the Dean/Cale cliff ;)
Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 21/03/08 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 19- Execution
Loved it!!! So the guy in the earlier chapters turns out to be the passerby that pulled Amba out of the lake. Great tie-ins... Very creepy, spine chilling cliff! Kitten
Author's Response: Thanks very much, glad you like the tie-ins and you're still here to grace my story with your encouragement! Creepy, spine chilling... I can live with that ;)
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 14/03/08 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 19- Execution
Execution?!? Wow this is really getting good, I have to know more! What's going to happen next?
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you think it's getting better and need to know more! You'll see what happens next, posting another chapter tonight. Just four more chapters to post;) Schelz x
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 14/03/08 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 18- Something About Amba
Excellent chapter! brilliant writing and great detail. Love Amba's flash back, very cleverly done. Didn't see that coming and neither did she. Love how you revealed who the culrpit of the horrible painting was... I'm starting to understand why she keeps to herself. Suga x
Author's Response: Thanks so much Suga! Means a lot to see what you think as the chapters go on. Ta for the stars too, glad you liked Amba's flash back! Schelz x
Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 19- Execution
My GOD! She's already dead *shivers* I'm so excited you can't leave me like this, I wonder what's gonna happen to Sammy Please update soooooooooon Love ya
Author's Response: Yep already dead!!! *shivers* thats a good sign;) I'm glad to get this review from ya hun, needed a jolt to wake me up. I've finished this, just gotta post it, which I will...can't leave you hanging like this can I?!? Thanks for the stars! Will update A.SAP Love ya too
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 19- Execution
Wow this is getting really suspicious.
Author's Response: Yes...suspicious indeed. Thanks for review! | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 18- Something About Amba
I wonder what the secret is, and Sam is right Amba is hard to undrestand.
Author's Response: Secret?...it's secrets...the town is drowning in em' Amba is quite complex but it's only because of all she's been through, she makes it a point to keep a huge part of herself safely locked away. It's not her fault ;( | |
Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 03/02/08 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 18- Something About Amba
Angst builds more & full action packed chappy but dear Sam, listen to what Dean says...you gotta jump her to the bones, you are a too-good-to-be-true couple I so want them to kick Naheeda's A$$, I hate her! She's so mean to Amba, grrr! Rock on
Author's Response: Hey Jay Angst AND action packed?? Well thank you very much!!! Sam should listne to his older brother shouldn't he? Hehehe. Aww...a too good to be true couple. They would be sweet together wouldn't they? Now now!!! I take it Naheeda has gotten under your skin? Hehehehe Good xxx Schelz | |
Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 03/02/08 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 17- In My Dreams
Poor Amba, she's been through a lot Don't worry baby, Sam is gonna be there for you Cale is extremely weird, I wonder if she's the one who made Amba dream those weird dreams Dying toread more, love ya :)
Author's Response: Poor poor Amba, but yes!! Sam is there for her...a yummy friend to hold on to. Cale is very weird, she's extremely hard to read and kinda scary. Lol The culprit of those freaky dreams...can't spoil it for you, wait and see. Glad you want to keep reading, love ya too. | |
Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 03/02/08 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 16- Not Alone
OMG Cale is really weird! I like her character, though! Always had a thing for strange & mysterious female characters Heading on to read mooooooore!
Author's Response: Glad you like Cale, I like her too. I like strange and unnerving characters too. Thanks for reading and reviewing hun. Hope you continue to enjoy it. | |
Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 03/02/08 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 15- Behind Blue Eyes
Sam & Amba, you guys are just soo... Can't really say anything, am speechless after that chapter Good job as usual, hunni :)
Author's Response: I know...frustrating!!! Maybe something will happen soon..hmm. Thanks for review and stars hun;) | |
Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 03/02/08 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 14- What it is to have a soul
God Naheeda is creeping me out1 And Clare's reaction was very weird A lot of dialogue but amazing chappy & more secrets build in creating a greater mystery surrounding Amba, she's very strange & that mysterious air around her makes her a more interesting character Way to go hunni, A+ as usual
Author's Response: Jaylan, missed you loads;) more is to come about creepy Naheeda and Clare. I know, soo much dialogue, I've been tryna cut that down. LOL I'm glad that her strange and mysterious nature makes her more interesting for you. Thanks for the stars...and the top grade;) | |
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 02/02/08 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 19- Execution
Good chapter girl!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Laura, means loads to me when you review;) Schelz | |
Reviewer: Daydreamer (Signed) · Date: 07/01/08 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 18- Something About Amba
When Amba said she could see people who were already dead, that just made imagine her saying "i see dead people" lol. Finally some more secrets are being revealed. Sam and Amba obviously love each other....and i think she wanted to tempt him....calling him for no apparent reason while she's half dressed. lol! Waiting on the next chapter.
Author's Response: | Yeah, more and more secrets will be revealed. I don't know that its love yet, but there is definitely something strong between them. She does have a bit of a cheek doesn't she? Lol telling Sam they should remain friends while she stands in a towel. Thanks for review! | |
Reviewer: Daydreamer (Signed) · Date: 07/01/08 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 17- In My Dreams
Oh my God i wonder if cale is responsible for all of what's been happening. And i wonder who was whispering all those thins to Sam and Dean. I'd like to say more but i'm anxious to read the next chapter. Cheers.
Author's Response: | I wonder...I guess you'll have to keep reading to find out if Cale is responsible. | |
Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 06/01/08 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 18- Something About Amba
Flaming hell!!! Are you serious? This just gets better and better. I love the way she told them, she didn't say it out, she told them a story. And the painting, never expected that but it was genius the way you revealed who did the horrible painting. Amba is turning into a tease, I don't think she means to but it was really funny when she told Sam they should be friends and he said fine but thought --- Then maybe you shouldn't be running around almost naked in front of me...just a thought. LOVE IT
Author's Response: | Glad its getting better for you, and love how subtle she told them her secret. Yup, can you believe it? No? Good coz thats what I wanted, to shock you readers with the culprit of the painting. | |
Reviewer: Agoldenrose (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 17- In My Dreams
oh Schelz that bit about the underwear models was fantasic.lol well the spirt of a witch aint that just great. well da boys can handle it. and Cale really is freaky there is sumfin wrong wit her also that black smoke above Amba's bed is worring. i hope nuthin hapens to her. Whoh well that was a very chilling chapter.the voice that keeps saying to leave coz Amba belongs to it I DNT THINK SO. poor amba tho i really feel for her and how da hell did Amba get down from da window plus how did she know that madelin was dead b4 she called the boys. dun dun dun Pls dnt keep me waitin too long. but really awesome chapter as always. YOU ROCK. LOL. agoldenroseXxXx
Author's Response: | Thanks, glad you liked that part. Yup, the spirit of a witch and I hope the boys CAN handle it..Lol chilling chapter, what a compliment;) | |
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