Reviewer: Daydreamer (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 11- Meet Clare
Oh my god there is so much suspense in this chapter...i am just so eager to find out wot happens next. I really hope that Amba is not responsible for all those murders.
Author's Response: Glad you found this chapter suspenseful! Happy you're eager to know more. Hopefully Amba isn't the one doing it:( Schelz | |
Reviewer: Daydreamer (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 10-Without A Trace
I am so happy now that Sam and Dean will be staying at Amba's place. And i do hope that they find her little sister, Lisa.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviwing Daydreamer, much appreciated:) They might find her sister, they might not...hmm, Lol. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Agoldenrose (Signed) · Date: 23/11/07 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 12- It's Not Over!
Ooh that chapter was so chillin. i was really scared for charlene. and i cant say it enuf dat that naheeda is such a bizotch. i cant stand the cow. and amba's dad joe is such a jerk to amba,and slapping grace like that who does he think he is. his her husband not her father. out of orda. pls keep them chapters coming it is so interesting, chillin,a bit sinister, romantic and action packed all rolled into one. i really love it. love golden.XxXx
Author's Response: Glad you thought so. You really don't like Naheeda huh? No-one does. Lol, every story has to have a bitch!!! Tar for the review and stars. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Agoldenrose (Signed) · Date: 23/11/07 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 11- Meet Clare
Oooh lala perfect discription for sams body. i wish i was amba that very moment waking up to such a fine piece of art. im blushing just thinking about it. it looks like you really paid attention to hell house coz i know i did. lol. sam had aperfect definition.and you got it spot on YUM. good job. golden.XxXx
Author's Response: Love Sam's body...hell house? It's much better now, did you see it in heart? Yum!!! Thanks for the review hun. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Agoldenrose (Signed) · Date: 23/11/07 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 10-Without A Trace
dean gives me so much joke he never want's to spend his game money. that brotherly love never gets old. kinda reminds me of me n my sis she cant lie to me eather. golden.XxXx
Author's Response: I know... 'c'mon dude! I earned that money.' Lol, never wants to give it up. Thanks for review. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Agoldenrose (Signed) · Date: 23/11/07 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 9- Invisible Friendz
i think amba's mum has got a bit of a cheek. and i think the way your so discriptive it's great i can really see the character. ps the story is gettin reall sinister. golden.XxXx
Author's Response: Loving all the reviews at once, glad you like the descriptives and can imagine the characters. Thanks for review Schelz | |
Reviewer: Agoldenrose (Signed) · Date: 23/11/07 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 8- Atonement
oh schelz great chapter.and you have such great dialogue its fantastic.and thats very suspicious and creepy that the man thats dust is the same shabby guy that warned sam.gonna read next chapter. golden. XxXx
Author's Response: Hiya Thanks for the stars hun, sometimes I think I have to much dialogue...talk too much. Lol, glad you liked it! Schelz | |
Reviewer: Daydreamer (Signed) · Date: 23/11/07 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 9- Invisible Friendz
I'm really worried about Amba....and she seems to be missing her close relationship with her mom but at the same time she wishes that her momwouldn't be so controling now that she's older. I like the way u give your readers an insight on the mind frame of your characters. Nice!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review hun, glad you you're still reading:) Amba's safety is still to be determined...thanks again. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Daydreamer (Signed) · Date: 23/11/07 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 8- Atonement
Thrilling chapter....sorry that this review is so short, i just can't wait to find out wot happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you Daydreamer, glad you find this chilling. Don't matter how short or long, just happy you're enjoying my fic;) Schelz | |
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 18/11/07 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 12- It's Not Over!
In the kitchen, Amba and Sam were dying to kiss, I could just tell, they have some hmm mm tension going on. Lol Charlene is lucky that was just a warning, this thing knows how important she is to Amba...Glad it's not over, your writing just sucks me in. Amba trying to send Sam and Dean away, she reminds me of Dean a bit, knowing it's not over doesn't scare her as much as the boys getting hurt does. Niice! Brownsuga
Author's Response: Sorry for late response hun. Glad you liked this chap, thanks for reviewing. Happy my work sucks you in, hope you like future projects. Schelz | |
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 18/11/07 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 11- Meet Clare
Meet Clare indeed! She certaintly made an impression on me, I like odd and she is a very odd looking girl. I like her though, don't know why...okay random:) Amba, a monster...maybe this witch has been watching Amba since before the she ranaway...is it bewitching half the town to attack Amba? I liked this chap. Brownsuga
Author's Response: Thanks for the stars hun:) Maybe you're right, maybe you're wrong, read on to find out. Lol Glad you liked this chap Schelz | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/11/07 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 12- It's Not Over!
i like this chapter is scary and makes you want to read more.
Author's Response: Scary's good! Lol Glad you want to read more, stay tuned for update. Amba has a confession to make. Thanks for reviewing, hope to see an update of 'My Shadow At Night' very soon. Love Schelz | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/11/07 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 11- Meet Clare
i like this chapter, and Clare is very creepy.
Author's Response: Clare is...unique. Lol Glad you liked this chapter, be prepared for more creepy Clare. Love Schelz | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/11/07 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 10-Without A Trace
this chapter is funny the way Dean was being flirty.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it hun:) Thanks for reviewing. Love Schelz | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/11/07 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 9- Invisible Friendz
i like this chapter and Amba she seems confused about her life and herself.
Author's Response: You're right, Amba is struggling with her identity, she hasn't had the greatest upbringing. Thanks for review. Love Schelz | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/11/07 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 8- Atonement
i like this chapter and your making it very mysterious when you dont know who the figure is.
Author's Response: Glad you liked this chapter, all will be revealed soon enough:0) Love Schelz | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/11/07 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 7-The shabby man, M&M's and a sad story
this chapter is good i wonder what the mysterious dark figure is?
Author's Response: I'd like to say you'll find out soon, but there more chapters to come. Thanks for reviewing Sharky. Love Schelz | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/11/07 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 6- Cursed.
i like this chapter it's very interesting.
Author's Response: Very brave of you to read it all in a bulk like this, it's quite long. Lol Hope to keep you interested to the very end. Love Schelz | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/11/07 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 5- Tormented Sleep...
this chapter is good i like the way that you describe the similarities of Sam amd Amba.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks 4 review hun:) Love Schelz | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/11/07 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 4- I had this cousin
i really like Amba she seems quiet and mysterious. what i've seen of naheeda she seems upset at Amba, i hope we find out what for. And i haven't really seen what elenor is like but she seems like a good character.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Sharx:) Glad you like Amba and find her mysterious. Read on and you'll see why Naheeda is so upset. | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/11/07 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 3- Aunt Charlene
this chapter is good to and it's funny the way Dean was annoying Sam.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you found that funny:) Love Schelz | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/11/07 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 1-just a dream?
lovin it sis brilliant chapter.
Author's Response: Thnx hun. Love Schelz
Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 12- It's Not Over!
So It's not over yet, lots of conversation in this chapter, waiting for more. Silvertayl
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Silvertayl, really appreciate it. Shouldn't be too long before I have the next chappy up:) Schelz | |
Reviewer: Synera (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 12- It's Not Over!
Oooo! Now I'm more intrigued. So many questions. Can't wait until the next part.
Author's Response: Glad I have got you interested, I'll try not to leave it too long before I update:) Thanks for the review Synera, and double happy for the stars. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 5- Tormented Sleep...
i like the way you explain what is happening to Amba and Sam and how they are connected.
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