Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 06:45 AM · On: You Take My Breath Away

Ahhhhhh--I just can't wait for more.  Good stuff!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm soo glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 30/08/07 12:52 AM · On: You Take My Breath Away

Your pillow's going to be mighty lumpy! So glad to see you back with more of this story. I enjoyed so much about this chapter, especially these lines:

 "Dude. Do you go out of your way to come up with the craziest shit that you can think of?"

and...

  Don't even think about going into that stupid ass cabin, Sam. It's just plain bad news. Don't forget that it tried to eat me.

Great stuff lam, see you again soon! 

 



Author's Response: Thank you soooo much for this! Those were two of my favourite lines too - if it's ok to admit that...? I'm hoping to get the next chappie done quickly - but the best laid plans - think Dean and I went to the same plan-school....

Reviewer: jayni (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 07:58 PM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

please post the next chapter asap!  it's a great story, and i can't wait for the rest of it!  :D

Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know you are enjoying it! Reviews really do help me to write faster...

Reviewer: reece6521 (Signed) · Date: 17/08/07 10:25 PM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

AWESOME. What a way to end a chapter. Update please.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Glad that you are enjoynig it! Hoe to have an update soon.                                               

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 02:04 PM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

" so...sorry.Another cliffie". Me thinks you are fibbing Love Sam careing for Dean and for once Dean letting him. Great update, looking forward to next chapter.

Many thanks Lorraine



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! You caught me - I do indeed love cliffies.... Hoping to get the next chapter done soon,

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 06:35 PM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

Terrific update. The good news, Dean is not paralized, the bad news, well lot of bad news, Dean and Sam're still injured, another storm is coming and now some is on the cabin's roof with a shotgun. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Yep, things are about normal for the Winchester brothers....but then, they can always get worse...

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 06:07 PM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

Fabulous chapter lam. I loved the brotherliness of it, this was a very perceptive line:

Sam indicated the trees with his good arm, and the guilt and apology underlying his words were obvious to Dean and unacceptable.

Sam's taken charge, but Dean is still supervising Sam's emotional state  - as always. And really bad pins and needles can be excruciating. What a great terrible thing to think of doing to Dean! LOL! Please consider this review to be a shovel full of food ...  and spur on that beast!



Author's Response:

Thank you so, so much for the lovely response! Dean will always have Sam's back, whether Sam wants him to or not... The pins and needles were a scene I had been writing to from the beginning... Sorry the update is taking sooo long...

Reviewer: SupernaturalGeek (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 03:02 PM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

Still enjoying it - poor Dean, having the feeling come back BEFORE Sam finished stitching *shakes head* 

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! Yeah - poor Dean, never can seem to catch a break....

Reviewer: mtee (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 11:20 AM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

Great chapter. I love this story!!!!


Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story...

 

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 14/08/07 02:13 AM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

Great! I love the dialogues. So Sam got the "fucking cabin" off his brother and he was able to patch him up somewhat. Huh, so at least some relief for both of them. Pins and needles... oh, poor Dean, that sucks :)  But now the figure on the roof is back and I was wondering when you would get back to that. Winchester luck again, nothings goes easy for our boys. Awesome chapter, love how you build up the tension. More please... SOON! Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely, long review and stars!! Much more of the mysterious figure to come - sorry the update is taking so long....

Reviewer: KimTuohy (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 09:30 PM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

Nice job Lam.  I keep checking every day for your next chapter.  Hurry ! :-)

Thanks!



Author's Response: thanks so much for your review! It really does make me write faster when I know that people are actually checking! Wow!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 08:22 PM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

Oh, too many wonderful quotes lam.. hm....gotta mention I love the dean and sam question and answer explanation...and the figure on the roof, giving me goosebumps always a good thing - Post more....NOW - K

Author's Response: Thanks, Kell! I'm so glad you liked the question and answer bit!! I'm afraid now that if I get dude off the roof he won't seem nearly as creepy.... Posting as soon as I can... ;)

Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 08:18 PM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

Ooooh!!! You are so not nice...to leave us hanging like that. I really am enjoying this story. Sam is getting a chance to take care of big brother. My poor Dean! Down for now, but I am sure not out.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! And for the stars!!! I'm glad that you are enjoying the story so far. I'm afraid that I've developed a taste for the cliffie...

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 07:49 PM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

Ooooh...there is something supernatural going on, isn't there?! Great chapter...suspenseful and painful...hey, maybe after this lovely adventure is done, Sam and Dean could go to a spa treatment center and get mud baths...

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, Shiny! Definitely cranking up the supernatural meter now.... Like the spa idea....More suspense and possibly a little more pain to come....

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 07:27 PM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

Woo hoo -- great update!  Was quite relieved when the feeling came back in Dean's lower body.  Phew!

I liked the pins and needles part, Dean's reaction, and Sam's reaction.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the lovely review and the stars!!! Yeah - I couldn't have Dean paralyzed - he has too much to do... The scene with the pins and needles was just begging me to write it....

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 06:53 PM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

the figure returns....we knew Dean wasn't hallucinating.......

thanks for the update Lisa....



Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Jude! Yep, Dean wasn't hallucinating, and now the fun really begins....

Reviewer: Purehalo (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 06:12 PM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

Oh am so loving this fic!! It's awesome and i really hope you update soon! Both brothers injured, and in wet AND in trouble!! I could hug you! All written so well and so vividly that i feel like i'm there with them

Author's Response: OMG!!! I was thrilled to see your name! I just love your stories, so it is a great thrill to have a review from you. I'm hoping to keep this one going pretty quickly, but the next chappie might be held up a little due to life... - damn life...

Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 05:46 PM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

oh no.... that creepy figure is on the roof again!!! i gotta say, who or whatever that is creeps me out.  loved the moments between the brothers, and how well sam really understands dean.  

great chappy!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Maggie! I'm hoping that if he gets off the roof, he'll still be as creepy....

Gotta love our bros - two halves of the same coin. I sometimes think that Sam doesn't get enough credit for knowing Dean.

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 05:25 PM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

OH you're killin' me here with the dude on the roof.


Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I hope that's killing you in a good way.... creepy isn't he? It's really bad for me 'cuz I usually write late at night, in the dark.....

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 04:36 PM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

Now that the boys are all settled in I'm guessing the real trouble starts???

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I wouldn't say that they are exactly settled in, but as far as the real trouble starting.... we shall see.....

Reviewer: billabong680 (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 03:58 PM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

O.o Not good at all... At least Dean's not paralysed from the waist down, but he's surely not out of the woods yet (Sorry for mistakes, but like I always say, english isn't my native language.)

 Amazing chapter and update soon lol (I'm almost checking everyday to see if you updated lol)



Author's Response: thanks so much for the review! I really wouldn't have guessed that English wasn't your first language - it's fine. In fact, I really like the great pun in your review - Dean really isn't "out of the woods yet!" Next chappie might be a few days....

Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 03:52 PM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

HA! Your end notes made me laugh out loud. I knew that Dean had seen something up on that roof... hmmm... and dude, the pins and needles thing... gah. My husband had surgery once where the pain pump malfunctioned and he became hypersensative for nearly two days as a result -- worse two days of my life. Couldn't touch him anywhere without the more intense pins and needles feeling... it sucked out loud.

And that's all I could think about while reading about Dean's feeling coming back. Poor baby. *hugs Dean... carefully*

Thanks for the update -- sorry I was so behind. Life. Sigh.

 



Author's Response: *claps hands and giggles* I made you lol! Thank you so much for the review - it does seem to be a very busy time of the year. Seems when I write, I always have a few scenes that just stick in my head and I spend a lot of time joining them up - I was always headed to the pins and needles - happens to my hubby when the cat sits in his lap too long. It's a big cat....

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 03:49 PM · On: Pain Is So Close to Pleasure

Forever original....Forever spine-tingling....Forever pure genius!!!!

ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS!!!

 cant wait for the next chapter to see who the 'figure' is. I love the way you portray the brothers' relationship, and ability to understand how each other are feeling.

 GREAT. Bxxx



Author's Response: Just - wow. *blushes* Thank you so much for what I think is the nicest review that I have ever received. I think I'll print this out to look at on the days when I feel a little down! Next chapter will provide some insight into our mystery figure....

Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 03:45 PM · On: I Want to Break Free

Gah! I knew you were going to do that to us... *grumbles*

Thank goodness there is one more chapter posted...

Oh, and you used one of my favorite phrases: ass over teakettle. That always makes me laugh for some reason.

*hums Thunderstruck while moving to next chapter*



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing! I'm always so thrilled when I see your name....

I'm glad you liked the ass over teakettle - I debated a bit about that - wasn't entirely sure it sounded like the boys.... another reader said she spit coffee on her cat when she read that, so all in all, I consider it a personal triumph now....

Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 03:39 PM · On: The Night Comes Down

Okay, the good thing about getting behind is that I have more than one chapter to read. Hee!

Loved the little aside with the loss of the Impala keys. Nice. :)

Off I go...

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review! Spooky story about that key thingy - I never really see them - obviously know they exist but wouldn't really know where to buy one. Yesterday, I'm in line at the store and they had magnetic key boxes in the impulse buy section at the cash register - made the hair on the back of my neck stand up....

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