Upgrade mean to Evil, you really know how to pile on the pressure, Sam in a mudslide, Dean bleeding, dying for a wee and now needing a snorlel, great work Many thanks Lorraine

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely response! I have discovered the joys of an evil cliffie....

 I really look forward to updates on this story. I love it. Then, of course, I especially love hurt Dean. There's just something about him. And c'mon, a house. He really had to have pissed off someone. Can't wait for the spookiness to start.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know how you are enjoying the story so far! There really is just something about hurt Dean....*sigh* Lots more of that and a little spookiness thrown in too!

Oh that was so great! Kept getting to places where I KNEW you were gonna end the chaptet but you didn't! *big smile* still a cliffe but appreciate the amount you gave:)

Keep it coming!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the awesome review and stars!!! I was really tempted to end it at several points, so I'm glad you appreciated that I didn't!!! ;) Really, really tempted to leave it after Dean saw the figure on the roof for instance.... see I could be way more evil - people were ready/wanting Dean to get out from under the house so.....

OH MY GOD! please hurry i love this story and i just can't get enough!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to tell me you are enjoying the story! Lots more to come - as soon as I can!

 

Sammy's not fooled.  He knows Dean is in a precarious situation and he is indeed going into shock. 

Despite Dean's best efforts to put up a front, Sam knows his injuries are becoming an issue, and they don't even know how bad his injuries are that are hidden beneath the cabin yet.

As bad as things are with Dean being pinned beneath the cabin, Sam's mind racing through all of the possible and most likely probable things that could go wrong, things could quickly go from bad to a whole lot worse.  (Hurry SAM!)

It's funny that Sam seems to know the occation that prompted Dean to buy the magnetic key holder - even though Dean never told him. Those boys know each other too well. (LOL)

Dean had had his usual evening exercise of being tossed about the cemetary.  (ROFL)

Well, things just got worse!  Now Sam is caught in a slide! (you're scaring me here a bit)

Poor Dean.  He's so frustrated he tried beating up the house with his fists.  (Ouch!)

I had to chuckle though......

his arm was bleeding again and due to his little hissy fit, his knuckles and hands were bleeding too. Damn house..... (Hahaha! Hissy fit...hehehe!)

Don't Tread On Me......Dean, Dean, Dean....you sure can pick the music......ironic. (LOL)

Well, he**.  It's raining.  That's NOT good.  The mud is softening and becoming soupy.....(bad for many reasons) and now he has to keep from drowning on the rain that's coming off of the roof and running directly in his face.  Poor guy just can't seem to catch a break.

Another GREAT chapter!!!!!  This is one of my favorite stories!

Author's Response:

Another GREAT review!! Thank you SO much for these juicy response - nothing inspires me to write the next chapter faster! Yeah - that damn Winchester luck... I just love the interaction of the boys and how much they love each other and know each other and protect each other - etc... You can probably tell I'm a Deangirl, but I could never write a story without Sam playing a big part because you really can't have one without the other....

OMG!! I have to find out what happens to Dean. One of my favorite stories. Plz update

Author's Response: Wow! thanks for the review - I'm so glad that you like it! Hope to update very soon... Always more about Dean....

Write faster missy, I'm cracking the whip here lol! Who the hell was on the roof???? And I loved this line from Sam, because it sounds so determined:

and started back up the mountain to get that fucking cabin off his brother.

The last line of the chapter is a cracker too, because even though you let the reader know that this was the case, Sam didn't know until now. I forecast more angst! Love this story lam, see you again soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review Ciel! I'm so glad that you like it! Pissed off/determined Sammy is my favourite. Oh yes, a little more angst, a little more mysterious figures, and a lot more ouchies! Running as fast as I can before your whip.....

Great Chapter.

Looking forward to more.

Thanks so much :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to let me know you are enjoying it so far! Lots more to come....

no, lam, the girls will never accept DW dead from the waist down.....

How are you going to help them find some better luck??

Author's Response: Thanks Jude! Awww, you know I love Dean, right? Like all of him.... Maybe a rabbit's foot?

Wow!  Another well written chapter.  The humor and brotherly banter is awesome!  It sounds just like them.Great details and descriptions and I really liked the introspection.  I love the detail you put into your story.  The facial expressions, their surroundings, feelings etc.  It really brings the story vividly to life.Humor:  Yeah, it's what makes Dean such an irresistible little scamp."Hey, Dean! Look what I found." Dean craned his neck to see his brother.  (good visual)"What?" "My bag!"  Hahahahaha!  ROFL - hahaha, ahem...I know, I know.....(I’m ashamed to admit) crude humor still gets me though. (What can I say, I have three brothers….it’s very familiar.)
      "Too much information, Dude."  (hehehe…smirking)"Dean," Sam groaned, "Does your mind ever crawl out of the gutter?"
(Yeah, it's that much funnier because I can picture the indignant look on Sam's face right about now.  Hahaha)"God, no! Where would the fun be in that?"   (Yes, that's our Dean)If that cabin is shifting/moving.  Dean's in massive trouble.  Even if Sam can't see it, I'm sure Dean can feel it, seeing as it is perched atop his body. Scary thing is, it has shifted twice now in a relatively short period of time, although imperceptibly.  Any shift could mean the difference in getting air in his lungs and not.The fact that the cabin is no longer on a solid foundation, but is now resting in mud, the sheer weight of the structure itself will cause it to begin sinking further into the mud as time goes by.  Dean could be slowly crushed.  Better hurry with that jack Sam! Creepy factor and angst is rising……’Dean didn't think he was going to enjoy his time alone with a house perched on him in what was left of the fading daylight. Didn't really make much of a difference if you could see what was coming for you if you couldn't get away anyway.’  (that’s a really scary thought…..*shudders*)I got a kick out of Dean’s ‘big brothers are NOT afraid of the dark’ and that he had to admit to Sam that he didn’t want to drink anything because he didn’t want to have to pee.  Awkward!  "I'm just gonna sit here until you take a drink, man."  Dean may be stubborn, but he’s got nothing on Sam sometimes."Um, Dean?"  "What?"  "Dude. Do you have the keys?" "Shit.”  "In your pocket?”   "Yahtzee."  "Shit."  (Yeah, same place as the extra ammo….oops)   Hehehehe…now Dean has to admit to Sam that he actually followed his advice and got a magnetic key holder……hahaha!if you say I told you so ever about this, you'll be walkin' for a very long time."   "Think how slowly you'd have to drive if I was walkin'," Sam pointed out.  "Point taken. You can ride in the trunk."  "Whatever, Dude.”  (LOL.  Good try Sam. ‘A’ for effort, but, you just can’t out-snark the snark-master. Haha)"Maybe I could build a fire for you before I go.”  Dean’s eyes were wide with horror.  "Dude! You are sooo not building a fire next to a wooden structure that I am stuck under….LOL yeah, that COULD turn ugly and with their luck, it would.It looks reasonably stable for the moment, anyway. But you never know…Sometimes there are after flow…  "You're a regular ray of sunshine, there bro..."  (LOL)  I bet he feels better now, Sam, thanks!

Yeah, Dean’s definitely going into shock…The fact that he can’t feel any part of his body that’s trapped below the house is really, REALLY BAD!  The nail through his thigh is going to make it so much more complicated if Sam tries to pull him out.  Especially if neither one knows about it.  (And the wound in his thigh is bleeding.)  That boy is just all kinds of screwed!

Sorry, I tend to ramble....but great chapter!!

Author's Response:

You get the cookies for best review! Wow! Please ramble away - I check for your reviews! It is so good to hear that people have picked up on the lines that particularly jumped out for me and enjoyed them.

I also love that you are thinking ahead - yeah - that nail is gonna be a problem....

awww man no CPR! jk. very good! do u know how long i've waited for this chapter! every day i've been logging on hoping it would be up and it was today! yeay! good job keep writing! :)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Sorry about the cpr.... more coming soon - I hope! Keep checking....

That was a wonderful chapter!! 


Author's Response: Thanks Mtee! Hope you like the next one....