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Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 10:20 AM · On: Secret

too bad this is not going to be one of the episodes.... its soooooo sooooo good.

Author's Response: Wouldn't it be fun if us fans could control the storylines? I'd give up my story in a second if I could personally advise the two actors of course! :)

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 09:28 AM · On: Lay Me Down to Sleep

Oh goodness! I don't think I'll be able to wait so long!!! Well, I hope you enjoy your vacation! Hope you come back brimming with wonderful ideas...!!!! Anyway, love this story! Totally one of my favorites!!!

Author's Response: So glad this story is one of your favorites! Make sure to check out the sequel too! :)

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 09:23 AM · On: Point of No Return

Oh no! You're not...going to kill Sam...are you? AHHHH! It would be an incredible thing but...ahhhh! Well, beside that...I'm really...entertained by this...(not the right words? Too bad...it's like a movie...coolness!) I seriously CANNOT WAIT til the end!!!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 09:21 AM · On: Upper Hand

Yay! More boys action and secrets! Lovely...wonderful...keep up the outstanding work!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 09:19 AM · On: Without You

AHHH! Sammy! What is with you and cliffhangers? Stop it!!! (No, I'm kidding, keep doing them...please...) This is wonderful...

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 09:16 AM · On: Family

Ah, angst. Knew it had to come back sometime. It really adds many more dimensions to this story, though, and I truly love how this has so many layers. It is really beautiful writing, and gives such good visuals!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 09:13 AM · On: Mirror, Mirror

Oooh, Missouri is turning into Obi-Wan...cooool!!!! Sam...training...lessons...eeeeep! SO FUN!!!! I'm sorry, I simply adore this story, though...please keep writing it!!!

Reviewer: aripagetx_uk (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 09:12 AM · On: The Wishing Tree

I wondered how it would be on those first days.... good job

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 09:11 AM · On: Crossroads

Oh wow, this is getting really intense! LOVE IT!!! I like the inclusion of flashbacks...this is so great!!!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 09:09 AM · On: Missouri's Promise

Ohhhh! Poor Sam! Poor Dean! So many choices! This is so very good!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 09:06 AM · On: Path

I liked this chapter! It was cool! Sam, banishing the demons...quips...it's all good...

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 09:04 AM · On: Hour One

Ohhh, what's wrong with Sam? I'm wondering where this is going...great job so far!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 09:04 AM · On: Crush

HA! The hunters are evil! TWIST!!!! Love it...hmm...I like how you took them to Missouri...very interesting...

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 09:03 AM · On: Swing Low, Sweet Chariot

That's kinda creepy, the whole Swing Low, Sweet Chariot thing...somewhat scary an' all...oooh...yay! They have leads! Finally! Ahhh, are you going to kill all the demons and save Dean's soul? 'Cause that would be really cool...although I'd understand if you didn't. Preserving the story's posterity an' all...for the eternal story goodness...

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 09:01 AM · On: Secret

Oooh, I like this twist with Ellen, though I'm glad she didn't go through with it. Cookies!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 09:00 AM · On: Bond

Ha ha, it's great that you alleviated the tension with a Dean-joke...very nice. Otherwise, much goodness!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 08:59 AM · On: Medium

Hmm...have you ever seen the movie White Noise? I haven't...maybe I will...bet it's not as good as our Winchester boys...ANYWAY, I really like this! It seems so much like...warfare...evil YED SOB...hope Sam can take it! Or is their more angst?!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 08:58 AM · On: Break

Another cliffhanger? Wow! Really keeps ya jumpin'...Goodness...I like this thing that's going on with Sam...very unusual...maybe....hmmm...lovin' it!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 08:57 AM · On: So It Begins

Cliffhanger! Man, that's crazy...well, we certainly know it isn't John...poor poor Sammy...so tormented...!!!!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 08:56 AM · On: Rising

Oh no! What's wrong with Sam? Hmmm...this is very intriguing! Promised soldier, of course...ooooh....suspenseful!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 08:55 AM · On: Reality of Nightmares

Ooooh, x marks the spot, huh? Very suspicious...hmmm...hoping to see where this is going!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 08:53 AM · On: No Chick Flick Moments

Awww, chick flick moment! This is great. Love the angst!

Reviewer: merashari (Signed) · Date: 03/08/07 04:53 PM · On: Point of No Return

wow! What the hell is Sam planning on doing? God sometimes that kid has some problems. He really should consult his older bro! < this coming form an older sibling myslef :)

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 07:14 PM · On: Point of No Return

This is really good. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 03:38 AM · On: Point of No Return

I can't wait to see how you wrap up this story.  I have enjoyed reading your story and can't wait for the next two chapters.

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