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Reviews For Burden
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 18/02/09 11:42 AM · On: Rising

OH AWESOME!!!!! I'm pretty sure this just makes the story even better! Nice little twist to it! ;D

Author's Response: I'm glad that you are liking it so far! I hope to continue to entertain people with twists and turns while staying true to the boys and the show. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 18/02/09 11:37 AM · On: Reality of Nightmares

....leaving Sam and Dean alone..UH OH!!! ;P

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 07:25 AM · On: Open Your Eyes

No, no, no . . .  THANK YOU for takeing your time, mind, space, liberty, and THAT GOLDEN HEART that you carry for giving us this majistic literature.

 

RATING:) 300+++++++++++++



Author's Response:

Sam:

  Just noticed the wonderful and well thought out reviews that you have so graciously left for me. I haven't checked often with getting married and I assumed that no one would bother to leave reviews on an older story. So VERY glad that you did. Comments from readers are the best. Keep reading and I hope to update the third and last story in this series soon!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 05:23 AM · On: My Soul to Keep

You have generated a more than postive rpg, and story liner that I don't think anyone can ever be able to conqure. Thank You.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 04:48 AM · On: Marionette

This is simply unbelievable to go to this such standered.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 04:33 AM · On: Lay Me Down to Sleep

You have done a production to a wonderfull masterpeace like Romeo and Juleit. I think William Shakespear would be happy, 'cause I know I am and I don' t even know you. Thank You!!!!!!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 12:55 AM · On: Point of No Return

Damn it SAM! I think Dean may have given him the wrong med. Anyway, this is a tale that I can try to express it in so many ways, but I know there is a word for it.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 12:42 AM · On: Upper Hand

Which is great , but its still dangerous! For anyone whom is able to have powers like that it could be successful or deadly. I do like the way you had made all three put focus on the new analogy that Sam himself found out and probably go from that together. Ranking: 250++++

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 12:30 AM · On: Without You

You are definitly a great composer. As I read, I followed the steps Missouri was giving Sam and it does work. I have never tried it before, but I will say that I felt the whole image and scene taking place as if I was a witness to this tale. Now, that's strange. Its happened to me a couple of times before that I have read other materials from all writers. If all of you trully knew what has happened to me after an accident that I showed have not made it and stay among the living. This is masterfull. My rating is different, when it is something that I would like to make a copy they range from a hundred to three hundred and higher, but thats me. Thank You!!!!! You are doing a . . . . what word could anyone say to a story like this! You are one of my fewest honorable story tellers that I like.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 10:57 PM · On: Family

If Missoure, can help SAM from the situation that he is battling then I hope it works. 'cause someone is probably going to get hurt or SAM might lose something more than the unity and belife of other around him.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 08:54 PM · On: Mirror, Mirror

What big role does SAM have. He would never be a leader to them or even help them out. At what lenght will they keep assulting him . . . till he's dead or hurt to bad that he can't defend himself anymore and Dean may end up dead.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 01:07 PM · On: Missouri's Promise

What an ASS . . . how can the boys ever rellie on him when ever he wanted to be near him. Why do these voice give him negativity and to hurt him.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 12:42 PM · On: Path

There mom is a good spirit, and she told SAM to leave right away she is not bad. So, what else is there to be done? They almosted killed SAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 12:34 PM · On: Hour One

Okay, this is getting a little out of hand and as a profesional writer that you are you are doing a good job of that. That evan my temples are starting to act up. Damn, theyv'e tried to kill him with his brother there that was not cool.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 12:27 PM · On: Crush

Good timing boys, and lets hope that nothing happens to bobby, and I do think Ellen called them!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 12:10 PM · On: Swing Low, Sweet Chariot

Okay, did his mother say that there friends where comeing or demon friends?

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 11:48 AM · On: Secret

She has to stay out, or there will be a huge devistaion for all.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 11:38 AM · On: Bond

NOW!!!!! Thats the true brotherly WINCHESTERS i now to love and admire though.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 11:32 AM · On: Medium

I think Dean should at least give it a thought and I know it is dangerous that maybe if he was there as well as the others that SAM would be abnle to comunicate with them so everyone can be alert.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 11:27 AM · On: Break

Okay, there has to be another safe house that no DEMON may know of or have a knowledgable acsse to get to SAM . . .  this was just a warning of how close they could get to sam. This is getting better then what I'v e read before.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 11:19 AM · On: So It Begins

Okay them SOB's are so going to get there ass's qudreply kicked maybe five time's more since I'm reading this. I don't know, but when I read good stuff like thisd. I can sense your vision of what you are trying to protray and that's a bit scary for me. Scared!

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 11:11 AM · On: Rising

This is getting to be a big surprise and dangerous to everyone especialy for Sam. Does Bobby have a Devils Trap under the rubble of old junked vehicales? Is Dean going to be able to help his little brother? I do hope so.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 10:57 AM · On: Reality of Nightmares

This is getting to be interesting to me thank you for humering me.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 10:46 AM · On: No Chick Flick Moments

This is going to be a big issue that I feel that you may have SAM go after this Dead Deal assignment without haveing the others know about it.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 10:38 AM · On: The Wishing Tree

How can someone revers a deal of death from a demon. Unless, they all new whom had the deal and if it was safe to take back. If its this Lilith then that is a demonized BI*** that I don't think that even SAM, BOBBY, ELLEN or any hunter would be able to kill.

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