:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 4

You are a master of suspense!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 3

Kerri's house is a character just like the Impala. It has its own purpose and personality. It's an extension of Kerri. Such an ingenius idea!
Oh you make me laugh! It was hilarious that Sam said Christo to the baby, but more funny when Dean told Kerri what he'd done. And Dean asking him if he was high---belly laugh! I can see it in my head---great job!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 2

I'm glad you mentioned the footstep theory from one of the previous episodes. It was a cool way to not only give us the mindset of Sam and Dean, but it also compares them to their father.
Wow! So the creature switched places with the real Jacob. That mom is going to freak when she finds out. Nice little tease at the end.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

Finding a baby in the woods---now that's a unique storyline!
The conversations between the brothers are great! Especially the one in the Impala. These two are in over their heads!
There's nothing more wonderful than napping with a sweet, warm baby in your arms. Although, this baby probably needs a change of clothing by now.
Good description of the house. It seems symbolic of the changes in Kerri's and Dean's lives as they've grown older.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 5

Ohmygoodness!!!! What a cliffhanger, devon! I love your little tidbits of info on old lore...beer in an acorn?? Hmm...can that recipe be bought on eBay, maybe? I would laugh...anyway. Wrote more, please! Get better first though. Then write your little (slightly bloodthirsty) heart out...hopefully not too much bloodthirstiness...don't want them Winchesters injured...or Kerri! Keep her around, too!

Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 5

aaaaah! Cliffhanger! Hope you can post the next soonest!

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 05/09/07 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 5

oo that's so creepy! and seriously, totally stupid of the brothers to leave Kerri alone with the baby. I mean she only has one working arm so one of them should have stayed with her. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 5

OMG!Dean's sixth sense was right, Kerri and little Jake're attacked by the Korrigan. What a suspenseful end to this chapter, can't wait to know what'll happen next.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 5

okay, now that's very very veeery bad! How the hell did he get into the house? And is this Jake really the real Jake, still not sure about it. The brothers come back, get rid of the Korrigan, everybody thinks everything's allright, and then Jake's not Jake, and everything blows to hell again. 'cause you definitely could be machiavellian enough for that!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 5

Great update Maggie, Really. I can't get enough of this story. Thanks as always - K

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 5

Great update. Now did you have to leave us with such a cliffhanger? Dean's feeling about Kerri being in danger was right. I really hope he and Sam get back to her house in time... please! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 24/08/07 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 4

Ohhhhhh goodness! Very exciting! I love your explanation of how there's just too much damn fairy lore for them to make any sense out of it--that's always what I thought (except I was never hunting any sort of creature--just looking for a good read). It's kind of funny, because you'd think fairy tales would be sooo easy to research! They're really not, are they... anyway, have fun wherever you're going and be sure to come back with another chapter!!!!

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 23/08/07 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 4

hopefully, kerri keeps silver bullets in the house...good update,Maggie

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 23/08/07 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 3

Korrigans...sounds like an Irish band........

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 4

Dean was right. The Korrigan knows that Jake is with Kerri, they're in danger. So a captivating story, great work devonshire, can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 4

ow, good ! Exciting, Kerri's gonna have some visit... Dean should definitely listen to his guts, or stomach, or whatever internal organs screaming to him to turn around ! More, asap, please !

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 21/08/07 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 4

You'd think that Sam would have learned to trust Dean's instincts by now..... It's always bad when Dean has that feeling....Suitably great, wonderful, and creepy update!!!
Have I mentioned recently how much I love Kerri??? I love her rolling her eyes at Dean's getting stuck on the hot chick - so a BFF moment...

Author's Response: aawww BFF, i love that. thank you so much :)

Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 09/08/07 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 3

cute, i love it!! especially jake
waiting for more!!!!

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 3

What a captivating story. They're going to have the visit of a pair of Korrigans in no time. Can't wait to know what'll happen next.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 3

excellent, really love this story so far.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 3

Ha great finish to the chapter Maggie... Loved it - Kell

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 3

Fabulous gets better and better, please update soon. Many thanks Lorraine

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 3

Oh, this is becoming more and more interesting! I love how you show Dean's memories of the past and how much Jake resembles little Sam. Great work so far. Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 3

Uh oh. This doesn't look good for the Winchesters! Great update!
~Kayla

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 3

Is Korrigan the Irish term for changeling? 'Cause that's pretty cool if you dug that up somewhere...this is really interesting. Changelings. Huh. Cooooool!!!!! Hope to read more soon...!!!

Author's Response:
good catch, shiny. yes, a korrigan is the celtic version of the changeling, but there is a whole lot more to them too. very, very interesting.
:)

[Previous] 1 2 3 4 5 [Next]

You must login (register) to review.

Affiliates