hm.....so daddy's all the sudden playing nice.  I LOVE this story Maggie, do I tell you that often enough.  Can't wait to see where you're taking it. Waiting for more - K

you see, Dean think's too that there's something weird with baby Jake! So happy you updated this Maggie, was afraid than spending your time watching Candy Mountain would keep you from writing!

Soooo, the terrible fight-inducing baby monster.... I've heard of those - it's why I've stuck with the four-footed, furry variety of baby.... I'm trusting you here, Maggie - they really do have to find a way to help Kerri - there will be NO killing her off!!!!!! Great update! I'm going to chat you up on the shout box - you totally got buried... You'd think your screen name was lam......

Love this chapter - thought I had this little guy sussed but not so sure now!

Love the chat between Kerri and the guys - very real and looking forward to more!

That was an intense chapter. So the Korrigan was there or not, they found no sign of it, intriguing. Great work Maggie.

HHMMMMM - very intriguing.... Is it all in Kerri's mind? Is this still related to the painting or is it something else? I'm totally hooked...Can't wait for the next chapter... I love the Korrigan/changling monster...

Don't know how I missed this! Love this chap - Dean's dialogue is just FABULOUS!! Loved the brotherly banter - best I've read in a long time.... Poor Dean watching the family... Poor Kerri - something is definitely up with her... Dean is going to freak if something happens to her... and um, well so will I!!!! Please SAVE KERRI!!! Awesome chapter, M!!!

“Well, trouble, you hit your head pretty hard on that window. I think you have a concussion.”  So love the nickname Maggie.  Just fits really well and I can totally see Dean using it.  Also love that there was no sign of the corrigan.  Tell you what this story is quickly becoming one of my all time favs...thanks for the great update - K

ok i'm definately intrigued.  not that your stories aren't intriguing coz they totally are and this one just keeps getting better and better. can't wait to see what happens next and lemmi just say...poor Kerri. pick on one of the boys or something. you've got a painting draining her "life force" she gets shot...beat up sam once and a while would ya? Kerri's awesome and she totally deserves a break and not in the i'm psychotic and seeing creatures that aren't there way.  :-P  Love her and really anxious to see what happens with her.

"Since when are you all, shoot later ask questions first" Love this line and worried about Kerri. Moving on to next chap.

OOh this is getting just a little dark, I'd be worried if I was that toddlers mom. Love the dialogue, you've got the characterisation down completely.

Haha 'sasquatch' poor Sam!

This is so great, the dialogue is flawless I couldn't help but laugh at "Dude you ever hear of a little thing called, shut you face"

Classic!