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Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 14

You certainly kmow how to keep the suspense building. I couldn't wait to get to work and open up to see if you had posted. this is a great story-I love especially how Dean has been through out this story.

please keep the updates coming -

it's just that good , and I can't wait for the next chapter.

thanks for sharing your talent.

 

Reviewer: moenick (Signed) · Date: 19/08/07 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 14

Can't wait to read the rest. This is really freaking interresting.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 18/08/07 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 14

Wow! What an amazing last couple chapters....my heart was pounding so fast. Im ready for more!

~Kayla

Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 18/08/07 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 14

Great story!!! Please don't wait to long before posting the next chapter. The suspense is a killer. You're doing a great job. Keep it up.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/08/07 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 14

Gotta love how Reilly has become their guardian angel!

A lot happens in this chapter.  the tempo really picks up.  Love it!

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 18/08/07 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 13

This was another good chapter.  I am really liking this story.  I can't wait to see why the sheriff killed Reilly and what happens to Sam and Dean.

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 17/08/07 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 13

Well that's not good at all for the brothers.

Nice chapter.

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 17/08/07 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 12

Great chapter, I'm enjoying your descriptions of the brothers and what they're feeling.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/08/07 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 13

I love the way you weave a plot!  The diamond ring adds even more to the puzzle.  Hmmmm...

Shooting Dean!  Now that's completely unexpected.

Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 17/08/07 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 12

I'm glad you didn't have Dean know Reilly was trying to help them.  I think his conclusion is more believable considering Sam's earlier statements.

But I also think that it's cool that Reilly is looking out for them.

Great story so far!

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 17/08/07 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 13

Forever original....Forever spine-tingling....Forever pure genius!!!!

That was such an amazing chappy!!! I'm at my wits end though because I don't know how long I can survive without knowing whats going to happen.

OMG!!!....must calm down....breathe slowly LOL

 Please update soon

Bxxxxx 

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 17/08/07 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 13

Oh dear, the tension is building up! How can you leave us here? Is Dean ok and what happened to Sam? I like this more and more and look forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 17/08/07 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 13

OMG ... you can't just leave us THERE!!!!!!

this just keeps getting better and better... cliffhanders....action...revelation...

you're the best!!!!!

thanks for the excellent read.....

 

 

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 17/08/07 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 12

I liked this chapter.  Thanks for the update. I can't wait until the next chapter.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 12

Thanks for the update! It was really good!

~Kayla



Author's Response:

thanks for your reviews!

:)

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 13/08/07 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 11

I didn't want to stop reading to write . Great story and each chapter just makes you want more.....so....more..??!!!!

it figures a sherriff would be involved - the boys never get a break.  Reilly's ghost- at first I was annoyed  at him hurting Sam-I see why he was so persistent. Great writing.

Please  hurry with the next chapters, I'm eager to see where you take this.

Bravo!!!

 

 

 

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 11

Wow, you got that update up fast! Thank you, but I am already anxious for more!

~Kayla

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 10

I've been reading too quickly to take time for comments, but had to stop now.  Reilly's ghost leading Dean to Sam, guiding Sam to sovle his death----excellent!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start!  Good emotional expression and your descriptive action is amazing!

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 09/08/07 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 9

Sam is going to be okay, right? I mean, I'm worried that Reilly is going to get to him!

~Kayla

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 29/07/07 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 7

of course Sam is checking himself out!! He is just so stubborn I could slap him! Nice job!

~Kayla

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 29/07/07 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 7

It made perfect sense to me.  I like!

Laura

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/07/07 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 6

ok, now that's bad on so many levels... And i like it !

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 24/07/07 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 6

A sheriff is in all of this now too? Why do things have to be so hard for the Winchesters? Nice update!

~Kayla

Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 24/07/07 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 6

Poor Sam, I felt sorry for him...Dean should know better and listen.

Good chapter.

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