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Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 18

awww...just plain awesome!! i can never tell you how much i love this story!! very well done!! bambers;)

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 28/08/07 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 17

I was so worried about Sam! But now he's going to be okay....except the whole heroin thing pumping through his veins. :)  I hope that the doctor and Dean are able to save Sam before it's too late!

~Kayla

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 28/08/07 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 17

Chapter 17 was just as great as your previous chapters.  I did not see that one coming that Reilly and the sheriff were brothers.   I can't wait until the next chapter.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/08/07 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 17

Wonderful!  I especially like the ending analogy of the water and the life raft.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/08/07 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 16

Very dramatic!  Good chapter!

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 28/08/07 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 17

aww...very nice!! love reilly confession...thanks for posting!! been waiting to read more!! Dean better save sam!! bambers;)

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 28/08/07 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 17

You certainly didn't disappoint with this chapter. It was great. It was an interesting  addition to have Reilly come to Sam to talk to him.

I felt the sadness from Reilly's words about his brother-he still cared about his sibling.

You have everyone holding their breath with Sam and the heroin.

We're all drowning....please another chappy?????

A true fan!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 24/08/07 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 16

OH MY GOD!! Such a cliffie.

Absolutely loving this fic.

Well done

Bxxx

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 23/08/07 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 16

okay, thought about this story while at work tonight when i saw there was a new chappy...really not happy to see i'll have to wait a while for the rest as that was a very evil cliffie!! awesome job!! just can't say how much i truly like this story...lol...you have to know i like it cause i usually don't gush like this on reviews...bambers;)

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 23/08/07 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 16

This was another good chapter.  It was action packed.  If it wasn't for Reilly Dean would have never found Sam.  I can't wait until the next chapter to see whether Sam survives.   This cliffhanger definitely left me hungry for another chapter.  Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 23/08/07 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 16

nonononono....you can't leave us like this. Sam ...blue...I 'm glad the sheriff got his- kudos to the doctor.

But, Dean  ia already at wits end ,,and now this to add to his overfull plate.

well , you have certainly tweaked the tension up a thousand fold.

 GREAT storytelling. I enjoy your work. Just be aware that half the readers here are trying  to keep it together until the next chapter

AWSOME

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 23/08/07 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 15

OK ... this is too much...Sam ..heroin...that  sheriff killing his own brother...????...

This was an awsome piece of writing-I'm totally on the edge  here.

This has been a GREAT story-your words have turned my visual mind into jello.

Please  don't leave us hanging -this cliffhanger is terrific and frightning at the same time.

Bravo.. a true fan!!

 

 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/08/07 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 15

OH my gosh!!!!  Reilly was the sheriff's brother?!!!!  Amazing---never saw that coming!

The suspense just keeps building.  I can't wait to read more, although I'm going to hate whenthe story is over.

Reviewer: IHeartSam (Signed) · Date: 23/08/07 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 15

fantastic chapter-god the sherrif is  nasty piece of work! he wont be happy when dean gets his hands on him though lol ;) x

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 23/08/07 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 15

oh...man!! So is reily the sheriff's brother!! oh, very cool!! Damn!! that is an evil cliffie, and i should know!! frakin awesome chappy!! And now i am pissed cause there isn't another one!! sooo...get writing now!! bambers;)

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 23/08/07 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 14

another exciting chappy!! i am totally hooked on it!!! great suspence!! awesome job!! bambers;)

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 13

oh, another evil little cliffie!! very cool!! poor Sam and Dean!! and i read on....bambers;)

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 12

what can i say, another awesome chappy!! love this story!! haven't read for this long in a really long time!! on to the next chappy!! bambers;)

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 11

oh, nicely done!! looking froward to the next chappy!! bambers;) 

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 10

awesome...so reilly is help Dean and Sam!! very cool!! another awesome chappy~!! bambers;)

Author's Response:

wow you've read heaps in one go, thanks so much for all the comments :) escpecially since you're probably busy with your own writing. I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 9

ahhhh...very nice!! excellent little cliffie!! was gonna stop reading for the night and get to my writing, but now i gotta know what happens next!! awesome job!! bambers;)

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 8

poor Dean...his car ruined again!! gotta feel bad for the guy!! awesome chappy!! bambers;)

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 7

another great chappy!! awesome job so far!! bambers;)

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 6

i just love this story!! i just want you to know that!! don't get much time to read, but i am always aware when you update, and am glad i have a little time tonight to get back to it!! awesome job!! bambers;)

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 15

Wow! My heart is pounding so hard!!! Wow....what more can I say? Best chapter thus far!

~Kayla



Author's Response: Oh thanks, I was so worried it wouldn't go down very well! Glad you liked it

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