Reviewer: lam (Signed)
05/03/07 10:04 PM · On:
Great story. I think I'm starting to see where you are going with this - I have to admit that I've read the chapter more than once though, and I just figured it out (I think)... I love Dean's turmoil, and his connection to Max/Annie. Please don't keep us in suspense...
I was trying to be really subtle and not give away too many clues. I am working on the next chapter and it should be up soon. Thanks for reading and especially for your helpful comments.
Reviewer: nochickflickmoments (Signed)
05/02/07 12:14 PM · On:
hey i loved the first chapter of your story and i waited impatiently for the second one
and i like it very much - dean is an emotional mess (love these stories) and i didn't see the end coming
so, keep writing!
Thanks so much for your support. I love getting into the boys' heads. More twists to come, I promise. Thanks again and keep reading! Supernatural rocks!
Reviewer: mlaspike (Signed)
02/02/07 11:32 PM · On:
Great story so far!!! I will anxiously await the next chapter!
Thanks for the cheering on! I'm working on the next chapter now, hopefully will be up soon. Supernatural rocks!
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed)
02/01/07 06:09 PM · On:
Actually I think that was really quite good. I like your Dean and the dialogue is nice. Especially like the flashbacks, long enough but not giving everythnig away.
Speaking for myself, I think I would have made this into at least two chapters just to break it up a little and add some suspense. I'm glad Max is getting some action finally.
I'll keep watch.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I actually was going to try and break it into two chapters, but I had a little trouble uploading and I just wanted to get it posted. I have a little writer's block right now with this one, so it may a little time before the next chapter goes up. Thanks again and I'll keep an eye out for your next chapters!