Reviewer: Themis (Signed) · Date: 31/10/08 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 9
Please, please, please !!!Don't tell me you forgot this story !! Please ? ;-))
Reviewer: beth9874 (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 9
it's V.Good update soon please
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 03/04/08 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 9
Dean is in for a rougher time in the future right?? it's like building up to a very intense climax.......
Author's Response: I hope so. Should be a very bumpy ride for all concerned.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 03/04/08 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 8
I was surprised by Max's dad's genuine affection for her welfare. Or is he just more concerned with her part in the ritual?
Author's Response: That's the question, isn't it? I guess you'll have to stay tuned to find out. Thanks for the comments.
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 8
Poor Dean..and yeah it was uncool of John to parallel his situation with Dean's and Cassie's......i'm very very absolutely sure that Dean will still help them out even without playing with his sympathies...
Author's Response: Dean's like that, always will help, even to his detriment. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 7
Interesting. Do you think Dean is used as the medium because he is closer to Maxine? Or is it just a random thing?
Author's Response: Good question, the answer will come through by the end. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: supernatural16 (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 7
awesome can't wait for the next chapter c x x
Author's Response: Thanks for your patience. I am working on the last chapters now!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 7
Don't promise an end. I like the journey! Great chapter! Sounds like both Max's parents were nut jobs.
Author's Response: Thanks, but some people get anxious that I'll never finish the story. For me, one year to write a story is fairly usual. I have to be inspired and sometimes that takes awhile. Thanks again for your support!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 6
Good chapter! Short, but sweet---well, suspenseful. Good thing they didn't do the seance yet, they may need supernatural help to find Max.
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 7
great update! hope to see more soon :)
Reviewer: supernatural16 (Signed) · Date: 01/12/07 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 6
awesome cant wait for the next update c x x
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 6
Hey! Nice to see you posting ~ but no worries.... Contrary to the posting on the homepage, I don't mind waiting for new chapters!!!! I've really enjoyed this story from the first posting and will be patiently waiting for what I know will be the next awesome chapter! Please don't listen to the negative discussions and post at your own pace!
Author's Response: Thanks, Iam. I appreciate the sentiment. Keep checking back.
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 14/11/07 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 6
ugh! i hate cliffies! please please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, Cherry. I just posted another chapter. The next one's in my brain, itching to come out, so look out!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 5
Hey, I'm so glad your back it gives me hope that I'll finish writing my story one of these days. Its been so long, I had to go back and re-read before I started the new chapter. Forgot how good this story was. The thoughts/flashbacks with John, Annie, Cassie, Dean, Cassie's father, Annie's father get a little confusing when they are at the same time. And everytime I hear John's name I keep thinking its John Winchester. I like the gritty way you write Dean and the text messaging from the great beyond was funny. Hope to see more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, Got! I realized that after I started writing the John part it might be a little bit confusing. Sorry about that. For some reason, my stories seem to take a year to finish. Thanks for your kind words and your patience!
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 5
Enjoying so far!
Author's Response: Thanks, Danrac! I appreciate your feedback.
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 5
Sooo glad to have you back. Great chapter. Love Dean possessed by John's ghost. Hopefully, it will help him to work out his issues over Cassie.... Really hope that the next chappie will be soon? I will be happy to see it whenever you get to it though - I know how much "life" can get in the way....
Author's Response: Iam: Thanks for the quick response! There are definite parallels between John's life and Dean's past. More details will come out in the next chapter. I will try a lot harder to finish more quickly. Thanks again and I appreciate any other suggestions!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 5
You're clever! Lots of hints in this chapter for Jared and Jensen, Texas, the southern twang when tired or drunk. Very funny!
Author's Response: Thanks! I thought that Jensen seemed to have a slight twang when he spoke sometimes. I thought I'd throw that in. They are too cute! I don't want the story to get too dark. Thanks again!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 4
Now I'm really curious! Something must be about to happen because I don't think a glock can chase away a "borrowing" sprirt. Was it Max's dad who got he involved with the cult? And did he do the same thing with his wife? He mentioned she and Max shared the same special quality.
Author's Response: Thanks for your response! Really, John's spirit (inhabiting Dean) needed the gun for something and so grabbed it out of the trunk and took off in the car. Unfortunately, Dean was along for the ride! The spirit ran out of energy to keep control over Dean when they got to the steel mill and Dean "woke" up. I hope that clears any questions up on that. Max's dad definitely has something to do with the cult, but maybe not what you think. More details to follow in the next chapter.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 3
Things are starting to add up with Dean, Watson and Max. Now we just have to solve the mystery of how and why she was chosen by the cult (or whatever it was). Love Dean's sarcastic wit! Only a Winchester would think a gun appropriate for pain relief.
Author's Response: I'm trying really hard to weave all the pieces together in a way that I hope is not too obvious. Dean's a wonderful character, although I may beat him up a little too much. Thanks!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 2
Another amazing cliffhanger! This story just keeps getting better and better!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I don't a chapter ends well unless it's a cliffie (a la Nancy Drew/Hardy Boys mysteries). Every chapter ends finsing our heroes in a tough situation. Thanks again!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
WOW! A lot happening in the first chapter! Intriguing idea for a story, too. My guess is that Watson is dead and is affecting Dean to look after Max. I'm eager to see how Max came to be in the clutches of whomever held her captive and what the mysterious, horrifying sight is that continues to haunt the Winchesters. Was it an entire group of pregnant women and only Max made it out alive? I know, keep reading.
Author's Response: You got it. The cult was sacrificing the pregnant women for some reason. That's when the Winchesters showed up and rescued Max. Hopefully, your other questions were answered in the next chapter. Thanks again for your review!
Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/07 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 4
i love tis story but do you know when the next chapter will be otu?????
Author's Response: I'm sorry for the delay, I'm really swamped at work and it's taking all of my energy. I'm thinking alot about where I want the next chapter to go, so when I have some time, it should come out pretty quickly! Again, thanks for reading and for your patience!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 27/04/07 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 4
Glad your posting again. Good chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, Got! Thanks for your patience. I'm going to try really hard not to make this story into a year-long epic. Thanks for your R&R!
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 27/04/07 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 4
I was soooo glad to see your post! I have to admit that I had almost given up on you. This chapter was well worth the wait - even if you have ended it with a very evil cliffy! I hope that it is truly Dean going for the Glock, though I can think of no reason why he would need it right now.... Please up date soooon; I'm dying to know more about what Dean needs to save Max from - could her Dad have had something to do with the cult that abducted her? And poor Dean needs help dealing with the loss of his own baby.
Author's Response: I am sooo sorry for the delay. The ideas are there, but I wanted to make sure that they are a fantastic read for you all! Dean's loss was something I will definitely address again. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 31/03/07 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 1
I like your storyline its a little different than the usual Dean angst. I read it when you first posted.....Anxiously waiting for the next chapter...post soon.
Author's Response: Dear Got: Sorry for the delay, I assure you that I am working on the next section. It's taking a little longer than anticipated b/c I want it to be fantastic! Thanks for the encouragement and keep reading!
|
