Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 25/07/07 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 4 Confession
Ohmygoodness! Pooor Dean! May Uncle Davis feel Bobby's wrath...No eating! Just write more please! I want retribution and more of story goodness!
Author's Response: Trying to supply more of story goodness as soon as possible. By the weekend hopefully!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 25/07/07 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 1 Not Exactly Normal
WOW! Fantastic beginning. I've been on vacation to the ends of the Earth--yeah, there actually wasn't any internet access, can you BELIEVE it?! Kinda glad now, because I would have hated to have had to wait for the next post. :)
Author's Response: Good grief, where were you? Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 25/07/07 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 4 Confession
OOOPS!!! forgot your rating....we all need stars... and by the way your characterizations of Gentle Bobby, hyper Sam and tough, protective introspective Dean are soooo wonderful
Author's Response: LOL thanks jude....how do I do that for other writers? Does the number 5 in the ratings correspond to 5 stars? I know that seems obvious, but I've never done it before!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 25/07/07 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 4 Confession
Omigosh...our poor little Winchesters.... So who will beat Uncle Davis ?? Bobby?? John?? or both....?? So glad for your quick updates, Ciel, really a great tale so far....thank you.......
Author's Response: Thanks Jude, I'm working hard on it so it's nice to know you're enjoying it!
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Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 25/07/07 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 4 Confession
Okay, first -- never worry about posting long chapters. If they're like this we'll eat them up. Not you! And second -- fabulous! I really like how you are unfolding the story, bringing Bobby in, telling what happened to them when they were kids. I love the flashback effect so that we can see it and not just hear about it. And your six-year-old Sam is adorable. I just wanted to scoop him up and chew on his cheeks. Such a cutie! While poor Dean... he never really was 10, was he? He went from 4 to 40 in the blink of an eye, no matter what his body said... Keep it up... and bring on this empath!
Author's Response: GS, thank you so much for the lovely encouragement. This is only my second story, so I'm pretty desperate for reassurance! Thanks for providing it.
Reviewer: moenick (Signed) · Date: 25/07/07 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 4 Confession
Its getting good, Cant wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks moenick, more soon.
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 25/07/07 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 4 Confession
Yes that was a crappy place to leave it!!!!! I've been recommending this story to everyone.
Author's Response: Terry, I've said it before and I'll say it again...you're a treasure. But don't you DARE have a go at me for leaving a story in a crappy place! How many times have I torn my hair out at one of your cliffhangers????? lol Anyway, more soon....
Reviewer: supernaturalpass (Signed) · Date: 23/07/07 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 3 Poison Pen
Suspense, my worst enemy! Doing a great job!
Author's Response: Thank you for the encouragement. This is only my second piece of work, and I find I need the reassurance! Many thanks again, more coming soon.
Reviewer: Evergreen (Signed) · Date: 23/07/07 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 3 Poison Pen
Fantastic! I can't wait for more. I can hear the words as if they were coming right out of the boys' mouths. Can't wait for more! Great job! Evergreen
Author's Response: That's a lovely compliment, thank you...it's nice to know the dialogue rings true for you. Thanks again!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/07/07 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 3 Poison Pen
I love your writing style! Your words flow smoothly, expressing action and thought in a cohesive manner. I enjoy bridge chapters as much as the action chapters because it sets off the wheels of thought. I'm even more excited to find out what happens next. You've teased sufficiently. Exquisite!!
Author's Response: What a lovely thing to say! I'm not really teasing, just trying to break the story into manageable...and hopefully interesting...chunks. Next chapter very soon. Thank you again for all of the encouragement!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/07/07 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 2 Anything But Over
I couldn't read fast enough---lots of suspense. By the time I finished reading this chapter I was so tense I needed a valium. Wonderful!
Author's Response: LOL. Hope I'm not encouraging drug use here.....but very glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/07/07 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 1 Not Exactly Normal
Great job! So exciting! I can't wait to read what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to comment!
Reviewer: Phoenix_Song778 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 3 Poison Pen
Just finished the last two chapters. Great stuff! Can't wait to find out why she cursed Dean...keep it coming!
Author's Response: Thank you.... hope you enjoy the rest!
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 3 Poison Pen
Great update, even if it was a bridge to the next chapter. You have me on the edge of my seat. Please don't leave me hanging! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the encouragement, only 3 or 4 days to wait....I promise!
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 1 Not Exactly Normal
Good start. I love the last line.
Author's Response: Thanks Bayre, I'm now heading off to read your next instalment!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 3 Poison Pen
oh, wow.....after the tase at the end I definitely must have more soon.......please update as soon as possible............this is shaping up to be a really great tale..... thank you
Author's Response: No, THANK YOU, for being so generous with your comments. Won't be long....
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 2 Anything But Over
leave it to Bobby to be the caring, loving savior....leave it to Sam to be Dean's protector.......great tale
Author's Response: Have to admit that I love to see Sam being Dean's protector for a change....kind of the point of this story....
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 1 Not Exactly Normal
THAT is sooo not MORMAL..........off to a awesome intriguing start.....i see 3 chapters hope you're not a 1xmonth updater or I might be in the same state as Dean....
Author's Response: I wouldn't let that happen to you Jude, next chapter in the next couple of days!
Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 3 Poison Pen
OMG! OMG! I need to know badly! I have to know, plz write the next chapter, I'm dying to know... Gr8 story
Author's Response: Chapter written, coming soon! Thanks for commenting Andromeda.
Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 3 Poison Pen
Awesome story so far! I can't wait to find out why Dean's aunt wanted him dead--what happened so long ago that she blamed Dean for messing up her life!
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting, you won't have too long to wait! *runs off to write more*
Reviewer: L4LoveLosser (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 3 Poison Pen
yay!! that was a great chapter!!! and we did get some answers so i dont care that it is a bridge chapter...aww poor Dean, he needs s hug!!
Author's Response: He does need a hug...I sort of gave him one in chapter 2, but he was unconscious at the time! Guess it doesn't count....thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 3 Poison Pen
I'm relieved that Dean is all right. Can't wait to know what Dean did to be cursed by this woman. Captivating story ciel.
Author's Response: That's so kind of you Oceane, you won't have to wait too long....
Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 3 Poison Pen
I love the featured section -- I get to see stories I would have otherwise missed. And now that I've read these first chapters, I know I would have been sad to have missed this gem... Some awesome one-liners in this -- dialog and descriptively speaking. Love the premise and how quickly you took us into hurtDean territory. Love that the flashback is coming and your Bobby is visible to me. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words GS. You must know what a thrill it is for me to see a review from you. And if I went quickly into hurtDean territory it's because I love it when other writers do it...and yes, I do mean you!
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 3 Poison Pen
good work
Author's Response: Thank you...twice!
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 21/07/07 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 1 Not Exactly Normal
pretty good so far.
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