Reviewer: MissHannah (Signed) · Date: 04/06/12 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 7 Empath
You definitely have a way with words. It was awesome, I teared up a little :) Wonderful insight to Dean's personality. Thank you for writing this :D
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 22/12/10 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 7 Empath
Dear Ciel. I was having a rummage round the site looking for a good read and I came across your story. What a well written piece. I loved the fact that you took a difficult subject and handled it in a forthright and sensitive way but without fudging the issues. And in all that you kept the boys and Bobby's voices clear. Nicely done. Bird xx
Reviewer: F92 (Signed) · Date: 28/01/10 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 7 Empath
i loved this whole story,but the last chapter was just amazing,it made me tear up !this story got me thinking that if every one had their dean then maybe people would turn out good. so great job ! keep it up! thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you for such a kind review F92.
Reviewer: dixie (Signed) · Date: 17/01/10 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 7 Empath
I don't know if you stopped writing (pity) or perhaps changed your name (?) or maybe don't even watch Supernatural any more (although I hope you do) but I just had to say, after all this time, this is still one of my top ten favorite stories! Sheer excellence!
Author's Response: I definitely haven't stopped watching Supernatural, though we are, frustratingly, a long way behind the US. As to writing again..... I guess you should never say never! Thank you for the wonderful review dixie, I very much appreciate it.
Reviewer: Star (Signed) · Date: 04/08/09 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 7 Empath
I feel like cryin now! Dean! This was so deep. The link of dean's protectiveness and love for Sam with the gifts of an empath were astounding and well written. i love this story! This is brilliant and well thought out. beautiful and thought-provoking. I also love the line where Bobby say the only person who doesn't have to be scared of Dean is Sam. This is awesome!
Author's Response: What a lovely review. Thanks Star!
Reviewer: Keta (Signed) · Date: 17/03/09 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 7 Empath
wow.. this was beautiful! amazing story..
the very end of the story - omg.. The Dean's love for Sam.. putting it all together, his every act in life, protecting Sam, everything. Thank you!
Author's Response: That's very kind of you, thanks Keta.
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) · Date: 01/01/09 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 7 Empath
*applauds* Well done! I really like the idea and the way you utilized the concept was very clever. I regret only that I didn't read this story sooner. An awesome tale--I really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: And I regret that it has taken me so long to respond! Thanks for your kind words Dream Painter:)
Reviewer: TuckerCat (Signed) · Date: 04/09/08 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 7 Empath
Have read the story again. I really enjoyed first and each reading of it. I just wanted to let you know I think it is great.
Author's Response: What a nice thing to say. Thanks TuckerCat!
Reviewer: thirdwatchfanatic (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 7 Empath
Great job! Well thought out! It's always nice to read these things when the author has a good grasp on the show. A couple minor vocab errors but all in all, wonderful work!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks thirdwatchfanatic. If you get back here, please point out the vocab errors. I'd be interested. Thanks again!
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 12/07/08 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 7 Empath
What a wonderful story. Dean would do anything for Sam, but I also think Sam would do the same for him. You painted them perfectly in this story. Thanks so much for writing.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it mustang!
Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 6 Full Circle
I love it when he tells Sam not to "kill him" lol.
Author's Response: Thanks for leaving chapter-by-chapter reviews Ebbtide. I appreciate it!
Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 5: Promises
Bobby. Love Bobby. Sam's reaction was so intense...and I love Dean's "Okay". Like, if Sam's there and alright then everything would turn out. Good chapter!! ;D
Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 4 Confession
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooo!!!!! Dean....AW, DEAN! Nooooooooo! Woah. Talk about your cliffhangers. ;). Nice job on the chapter. Well written.
Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 3 Poison Pen
Aw, come on Bobby. Dean isn't reeeaaally going to kill anyone........right? Great chapter, I loved it!
Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 2 Anything But Over
Oooh! Possessive Sammy. Me likey. ;).
Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 1 Not Exactly Normal
Wow. What a great beginning. Wonderful chapter. I love Sam in this story so far. :).
Reviewer: jackfan2 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 7 Empath
Aww, that was just an absolutely WONDERFUL ending! It had all the great elements of a supurbe Winchester fic; friendship renewal, hope and brotherly love/companionship. Excellent work!
Author's Response: Wow jackfan2! Thank you so much for the multiple reviews. I'm sorry it has taken me so long to acknowledge them, but they were a truly lovely surprise this morning. Many thanks!
Reviewer: jackfan2 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 6 Full Circle
Jim's reaction was amazing.. then the line, 'Beat him to paste' I had to smile. And now Sam's going after Gunerson.. GO SAM!
Reviewer: jackfan2 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 5: Promises
Ah! He called Jim. Good Bobby, good Bobby... Poor Sam.. I felt for him. I'd've done the same thing; thrown up until I thought I'd die from it. This story has me by the short & curlies and it's fabulous!
Reviewer: jackfan2 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 4 Confession
Wow.. powerful stuff. Well, no wonder Lenora and her husband got their asses kicked. .. well, I'm guessing that's what John did when he found out .. he did find out, right? Or maybe Bobby took care of it for him But seriously, I loved how you had Dean just spilling it all out there at the end, coz I have a 10 year old and that's how they get when they're diving into a story they think they might not remember. You got a 10 year old pegged. Excellent chapter.. yet again!
Reviewer: jackfan2 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 3 Poison Pen
Empaths.. i've heard of them. I remember a Star Trek episode where Kirk is injurred and an empath cures him. Cool idea to impart that into an SPN story! I don't know who I feel sorrier for; Bobby, for having to break Dean's trust, or Sam, for living all this time int he dark unknowing of this secret. The cousin of Mary's who's a witch, well that was just brilliant too. I loved how you had her empath her death onto Dean and .. well, it was all just so uber cool.
Reviewer: jackfan2 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 2 Anything But Over
OH dear God.. what just happened? And at the end.. holy crap! This really is an amazing story! I'm left on the edge of my seat at the end of each chapter so far and my heart is racing with Sam's. The chant was cool, I could feel my self uttering it possessively too, along with Sam and Bobby. Well, glad I got another chapter to read..
Reviewer: jackfan2 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/08 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 1 Not Exactly Normal
Holy CRAP! What a way to start a chapter! I mean.. I was sitting staring at the keyboard thinking "WTF!!!????" You simply took my breath away and piqued my interest by about 100%. Can't wait to see what comes next!
Reviewer: lillelouis (Signed) · Date: 14/06/08 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 7 Empath
This is love. Pure and simple. Every word in your story is brimming with it. Many people have sympathy, but few can proudly say they have empathy. That is often up to those around you. And you my dear have empathy... You are a very wise person in my book. If your personality is anything like your words in this story you must be a remarkable person and any one who knows you should praise the stars for their fortune. You can tell them I said that :) This is the first story of yours I have read, but I will definately be adding to that list. Great story :D :D :D
Author's Response: What a lovely review! Thank you for all the kind words ... and for taking the trouble to leave them here for me.
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 18/05/08 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 7 Empath
Excellent!!!!!!!!!! what a great story of why Dean is so protective of Sam. i love how you added why Dean started to sleep with the knife. Uncle Davis needed his ass kicked more than once if you ask me..........to bad Bobby never found him. love how you added Paster Jim and the need for Bobby to tell someone. loved the connection between Dean, Sam and Bobby. Always believed Bobby was more than a friend. like Bobby said in the season finale for Season 3 "family just doesn't mean blood boy." so true. again great story Renee
Author's Response: Thanks for leaving such a detailed review Renee. I appreciate it!
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