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Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 03/03/09 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 16

YES! I love the last part! That's what I've always been wondering! Why in the hell won't people just leave Sammy alone! ;D

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 18

Good to see the boys getting back to normal. Thak you for such a wonderful, educational story!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 17

Oh my stars!!! What a stupendous chapter! I love how poetic and beautiful the part with Ix Chel is. I'm in awe!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 16

Many sides to Dean in this chapter: the boy watching TV, the protective brother, and the hunter.
It's always Sam that gets taken. Waht a girl! Hee!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 15

Good cliff hanger! Jaguar Dean to the rescue?

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 14

I like that you gave us information concerning the treatment of the Maya without being preachy. It was enough to make me want ot look into it a little bit more. I didn't know I was going to get such an education when I began this story. Thanks!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 13

Good transition from the humorous chapters back to serious matters.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 12

Forgot to mention how Dean's knowledge of the Mayan claendar was birlliant!
I love, love, love Danny!!! He's a laugh riot! I especially loved the M&M analogy!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 11

This was such an entertaining chapter!
The playful tone and water fight really drives home Sam and Dean's brotherly commaraderie.
I liked Sam's thoughts concerning Dean's concept of art. Also loved the brother's in front of Apphrodite. Too funny!
Ooohhh! This is getting good!!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 10

I love the differences between Dean's dream and reality! I also think it's funny that Dean is so sharing when normally he would rather cut off his arm than share his feelings.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 9

I love the description of Dean's transmogriphication! An amazing visual!
Hilarious! Jaguar Dean wants to drive? I got strange looks from my kids when I laughed at that.
The museum? Peculiar place, yet I suppose there could be some artifact that Jaguar/Dean wants. I know---just read and find out.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 8

Wow! Sam gets a taste of his own medicine. I like that you brought the promise in form the haunted hotel. It's a good reversal!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 7

Very intriguing chapter! You've sucked me in completely. I can't wait to see how you remedy this predicament!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 6

Excellent! I'm beginning to piece together the clues you're dropping, building the suspence. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 21/09/07 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 5

There's lots of detailed information about the area in this chapter. Either you're a geek-girl at research (Sam's counterpart) or you've been there before. At any rate, good job!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 4

Using the soap opera to bring back Sam's grief was a brilliant idea! It's always the little unexpected things that bring us to our knees.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 3

It's good to see Sam getting a small respite from his grief. Can't wait to find out more about the old woman and Dean.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 2

Interesting. I didn't expect Dean to be on the ground.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/09/07 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

"This was Texas all right--yeehaw." Funny line!
Wow! Amazing! I love the drama of this chapter.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 18

I really enjoyed this story. It was interesting and definitely a page turner.

Reviewer: lindi (Signed) · Date: 19/07/07 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

Loved the story. It was good to see how Sam delt with Madisons death. They never really delt with that in the show.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 18/07/07 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 18

Really cool story. Loved Dean morphing into a jaguar - perfect!

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