Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed)
18/11/07 06:32 PM · On:
Haikus and Dean... Would have never thought them together. I admire your bravery. And somehow you made it work because these express Dean's character really well. Good job!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed)
13/11/07 05:47 AM · On:
Never would have paired Dean with a Haiku - very brave.
And very well done too, each element focuses on a different quality and you've kind of stripped away all the redundant stuff and got down to the bones of the character.
And this review is longer than your poem lol! Great work though!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I feel like this should be a haiku too! It really seemed like the perfect poem for Dean....
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed)
14/09/07 08:18 PM · On:
I think these three poems expressed three very important qualities who make Dean Winchester who he is.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I was trying for just the essential Dean - thanks for letting me know that it worked for you.
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed)
27/08/07 07:53 PM · On:
Hey, this is really good lam! Haikus and Dean...doesn't really seem to fit, does it? And yet...it does...great job with these! It goes so well with his character and doesn't seem sappy or forced at all! Hope you do more of these.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Shiny. Dean is in many ways so spare that he seemed a natural for haikus - besides, syllables I can do, rhyming not so much....
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed)
16/07/07 01:28 AM · On:
That's nice, Lam - you summed him up perfectly. I especially like the middle one, but that's me...
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I was going for the essential Dean - ala the haiku tradition - but got distracted by the pretty with the middle one, I think....
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed)
14/07/07 06:31 PM · On:
Loved "I'm okay always - it's Dean to a T. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks! I think the haiku was invented for Dean.
Reviewer: maria noel (Signed)
13/07/07 11:40 AM · On:
awseome haiki sweety!!! congrats!! haiku are so , so hard to write but this is brilliant!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review AND the original inspiration of your own poem to give it a try. I would love to try a Supernatural sonnet, but sonnets are way beyond me - iambic pentameter and rhyming! Yikes!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed)
12/07/07 07:47 PM · On:
Short and to the point...but expressing everything that is SO Dean...I'm impressed I don't do do poetry either I babble so short (or long) stories are my forte...Great Job
Thanks so much for the review! Haikus seem to be made for Dean....
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed)
12/07/07 07:36 PM · On:
Haiku's are hard to write. Getting all the syllables in the right spots, and making it sound good is difficult. But you've managed to do it almost as if you had no trouble at all! It paints a very good picture of who Dean is.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely response. Haikus are about the only poetry I do do well (Hey J and J would be proud - I just said "do-do"). I'd really like to be able to do a Supernatural sonnet - but that involves iambic pentameter and actual rhyming....
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed)
12/07/07 03:02 PM · On:
Hey, lam...i still remember when Monty Python would say"and now for something totally different!" ......
nice to see you guys trying a different medium.....can't speak of Dean without family, lips, eyes, loyalty.........nice read
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! So easy to think about Dean from so many different directions!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed)
12/07/07 02:33 PM · On:
very nice lam. It's great to see you guys posting taking a chance by posting your poems.. Thanks for the great read - K
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the r&r!