:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 27/10/07 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 13

Aww, I'm sad that this story has ended. Hopefully I see you around her soon!
~Kayla

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 25/10/07 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 13

naughty beginning....making us think Sam was dead...shame on you....glad he's okay.....
OLIVIA ??????????

Author's Response: she's from my other story :) just a girl that dean MAY have feelings for :P

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 25/10/07 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 12

poor Dean ...all the research and hard work...and he still might lose the brother he loves...

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 25/10/07 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 11

Dean must be so weary of these demons imitating his Dad....
love determined Bobby quietly working in the background

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 25/10/07 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 10

poor Sam....to remember the Jessica he lost...and now to know he too might be gone.......
hopefully Dean and Bobby will get to him in time

Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 3

I loved the end sentence of your first paragraph...so sad because I could imagine it so well!
Great outburst from Dean really well written! Keep it up!
-Bex

Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 2

Oh no those poor 'power' kids they just can't catch a break!
Really interesting, the dialogue is great btw liked the mention of the bustyasianbeauties...always hilarious!
-Bex

Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh woah, ..so I'm guessing this is poor ol' Sam buried six feet under. Man that poor kid can never catch a break!
Great Job!
-Bex

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 10

Wow! Yes the love scene was good. Poor Sam! Please let Dean get to him in time!
~Kayla

Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 9

Damn that is a good story!!! Can't wait too read the next chapter!!!!

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very good visualization.

Author's Response: thanks, i really liked doing my first chaper and im glad you liked reading it :)

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 9

let's hope that is not a popular name in the U.S. hopefully they get there in time........................

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 24/10/07 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 8

all i can say is omg............no!!!!!

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 7

Will they get to Sam in time?!!
~Kayla

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 7

Ooooh, that really IS clever! Hours are winding down, though...please update soon!!!!

Author's Response:
Thanks!!!! i was like, i hope nobody has a go at me for getting it wrong, but i really dont know lol :)

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 7

since I'm from Green Bay i can tell you it will take them about 13-14 hours to drive 850 miles from South dakota............
there is a website called 'city to city mileage' and plenty of U.S. maps on the web to help with locations and make you feel more comfortable with using U.S. locations

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 6

wow! Best chapter so far! I'm glad that your computer problems are all fixed!
~Kayla

Reviewer: soapsuds4 (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 6

oh no!!
poor sam :(

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 6

Whoa! What a cliffie! Oooh, creepy, a demon before the yellow-eyed demon? Interesting! Can't wait for another chapter!

Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 24/07/07 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 5

Been reading the story over at FF. Its really good. There must be something about being buried alive going around. Poor Sam at least your story doesn't include cockroaches. :)

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 20/07/07 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 5

This is really good! Can't wait for your next update!!! (A demon makes it all better...!)

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 20/07/07 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 4

Dean...working in a bar...hee hee...

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 20/07/07 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 3

Psshhh...we know Dean isn't gay...love it when he's made fun of though!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 20/07/07 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 2

Creepy! That's really interesting. This is a cool story so far.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 20/07/07 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, this is really intense...can't wait to read more!

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