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Reviewer: whitewave (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 05:17 PM · On: Wanted...Accepted...Home...Safe...

I have been reading this story from the beginning and loving every minute of it.  You had them communicating in a deeper way when they couldn't always use words.  It was wonderful -- loved all the different things you made dean into.  They were all pieces of his character as a person too.  Can't imagine what it would be like to be as sensitive as you made Sam.  Great job with explaining it for me. Love those four word: Wanted accepted home safe -- their relationship in a nutshell.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  It was the silent communication I was striving for..glad that came across for you. 

Laura

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 12:33 PM · On: Wanted...Accepted...Home...Safe...

Glad to know the boys are back to their normal, gorgeous selves.

Great chapter...i'll be sad when it ends.

B xxxx



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Laura

Reviewer: alena (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 11:59 AM · On: You will never know if you are quick, until you poke a mountain lion with a stick…..

I've got as far as chapter 5 now! Great descritption of Dean and then Sam realising that Dean's become a mountain lion and only Sam could get away with calling Dean Buttercup! The fight scene between Dean and the cougar was terrific-

Looking forward to the next chapters!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I hope you enjoy the rest.

Laura

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 11:55 AM · On: Wanted...Accepted...Home...Safe...

WOW..this was GREAT!!!!!!!!

I have loved this story from the beginning... you just keep making it better and better.

I'm glad Dean finally is back to his human form, but the emotions and love expressed in the various chapters is without equal.

I really liked Mitchell's parents and his sister getting what they deserved. The sheriff's comments were a plus also.

You are a compelling storyteller and this was just terrific. And another chapter for us still to come.

Thanks for sharing this great story .

BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 



Author's Response:

You're far too kind.  Thank you for reading and offering such nice comments.

Laura

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 10:34 AM · On: Wanted...Accepted...Home...Safe...

That was awesome. Great to see Dean back to himself and the emotional link with Sam broken but the bond between them is strong even stronger than before. Loved the last scene, both blewing bubbles, very sweet. Can't wait for the last part of this wonderful story bayre.



Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you've liked this.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 02:00 AM · On: Wanted...Accepted...Home...Safe...

I was sooo happy to see that you had posted, and then when I got to the end, I was sooo sad 'cuz it seemed to be the end, and now there's one more chapter.... claps wildly....

I didn't think that I would ever be unhappy to read that Dean was naked....

This is just such a great story... Love Sam's comments on home and Dean's realization that wanted...accepted...home...safe was his mantra too... awesome



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Lisa...yes one more to go!

Laura

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 01:51 AM · On: Wanted...Accepted...Home...Safe...

Wow laura beautiful end to a beautiful story. Whats the next one about? Many thanks Lorraine

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  There is one final chapter.  I started posting my next story, The Game a few days ago.

Laura

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 12:09 AM · On: Wanted...Accepted...Home...Safe...

This is a marvelous chapter!  I love that both Dean and Sam have opportunities to talk to Mitchell's family members.  I also love that the sherriff echoes their sentiments.

The bubbles was a nice touch!  Excellent!



Author's Response:

Thanks Shannon, so glad you liked it.

Laura

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 11:55 PM · On: Wanted...Accepted...Home...Safe...

Lovely end to this chapter, glad there's one more to come!


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 11:17 PM · On: Wanted...Accepted...Home...Safe...

oh, laura, so glad Sam was rescued by Dane Dean but happier still that Mitchell's rotten, unloving, unforgiving family got at least a brief comeuppance......   thanks

oops almost forgot....thanks for bringing our Two-legged Dean back



Author's Response: As always thanks so much Jude.

Reviewer: Magos186 (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 11:11 PM · On: Wanted...Accepted...Home...Safe...

i absolutely without a doubt have loved this story and it's so sad to see it end. BTW...i think it was great how you not only had dean kind of tell off the parents, but i love that you had sam tell off the sister and that whole i have a home speech was so sweet. i can't wait to see what the final chapter holds.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  That scene as been waiting the whole story, it was one I had thought of when I first started this story.

 

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 10:53 PM · On: Wanted...Accepted...Home...Safe...

That was an awesome chapter. And thank you from the bottom of my gutter-girl heart for naked Dean - *happy sigh*

Author's Response:

Aaahhh...you're quite welcome!

Thanks so much Jules...Laura

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 10:44 PM · On: Things that upset a terrier may pass virtually unnoticed by a Great Dane

The only one with rational thought was - THE DOG - damn, I loved that line.

But poor Sammy is in trouble again - can they last one more day before the Trickster's spell is lifted?



Author's Response:

Hehehhee....that't sort of something we say at work a lot, how the dog or cat is in charge, that's where I got it from.

Thanks for reading Jules, I'm so glad you've enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 09:53 PM · On: Wanted...Accepted...Home...Safe...

Awesome chapter once again Laura!

 I'm kind of sad to know this story is coming to an end, I have enjoyed it so much.  But at least Dean is finally back to himself and Sam is no longer having to suffer from the feelins and despair of others!

 Can't wait to see how you end this story!



Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 07/10/07 09:34 PM · On: Wanted...Accepted...Home...Safe...

LOVED the last chapter, and Dean waking up naked, too funny.  I will be so sorry to see this one at it's end - thanks for the read - K

Author's Response: Thanks Kel...one more to go, I'll be sad to see it go too.  Oh well...lol

Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 04/10/07 09:15 AM · On: Things that upset a terrier may pass virtually unnoticed by a Great Dane

BAYRE,

GREAT AS USUAL.  DEAN AS A DOG IS THE BEST - MAYBE 'CAUSE I'M A DOG PERSON.  THE REACTIONS, DIALOG AND DESCRIPTIONS OF DEAN'S "DOG - LIFE" REALLY PAINTS A "BELIEVABLE" & HILARIOUS PICTURE.

I LOVE THE FLOW OF THE CHAPTER, KINDA WARM AND FUZZY IN THE BEGINNING AND THEN TAKING A FAST IMPALA TURN TO CRAP AGAIN!

CARRY ON WAYWARD WRITER!

 POOK  

 

 

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much.  I'm a dog person too.

Reviewer: reece6521 (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 07:02 PM · On: Things that upset a terrier may pass virtually unnoticed by a Great Dane

Dean the great dane! I love that image nearly as much as I love this story. I hope dean can get sam out before the bad guys come back. If it comes to a fight I hope they kick their backsides good and proper. Dean can always bite them and having a dog that size land on you ALWAYS hurts.

Author's Response:

Yes, a dog that big landing on you hurts... I can say that from personal experience...lol

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Noelani618 (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 05:04 PM · On: Things that upset a terrier may pass virtually unnoticed by a Great Dane

LOL.  I loved this chapter Laura.  The car chase was great as was the commentary Dean had going.  hehe loved the "damn opposable thumbs" coming back.  This should be very interesting in deed to see how he gets Sam out.  Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 02/10/07 01:39 AM · On: Things that upset a terrier may pass virtually unnoticed by a Great Dane

Great car chase Bayre, another terrific chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: alena (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 03:13 PM · On: An Arrangement…Not a Deal…More Like a Bet

I've just found this story and I love the description of Dean and Sam's 18 1/2 minute snot fest! i also liked the way the emotional link Sam has was built up. looking forward to reading the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I hope you enjoy the rest.

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 29/09/07 06:04 PM · On: Things that upset a terrier may pass virtually unnoticed by a Great Dane

What a journey, I'm tired just reading what they're going through. So a captivating story bayre, can't wait what'll happen next. 

Author's Response: Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 29/09/07 12:21 PM · On: Things that upset a terrier may pass virtually unnoticed by a Great Dane

Another awesome chapter! Loved the car chase. Poor bouncing Dean though. You really have to give Dean a chance to really experience the head out the window - doggy phenomenon... Can't wait to see how Dean is going to save Sam. I'm really hoping that by the time heroin-boy's parents arrive, Dean is back to normal and can give them a piece of his mind....As always, patiently waiting for mmore........

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 29/09/07 12:00 PM · On: A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than he loves himself

YOU USED HAMLET!!!!!! Woohoo!!! I was feeling really bad that I'd missed this chapter, but now I get TWO on one day!!!! This was just AWESOME!!! I love doggy!Dean as much as cougar!Dean and    dragon!Dean - who would have thought that was possible???? Damn - those floppy ears, getting in his eyes, and acting as mini-blankets - awwww... Loved this line - "He tried to feel sorry for the guy, almost got there for a second or two."  And "dogly possible"? LMAO!!!!

PLLLLLEEEAAAASSSEEE tell me that the vet isn't going to help herself to the essential Dean while both he and Sam are out of it???? I'm really afraid that they will send Sam to the hospital when he doesn't wake up and then how will Dean find him??? On to the next chappie - lucky me!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hehehehe...yes, couldn't resist the Hamlet line.  I'm so glad you liked doggy Dean, and the story.

Laura

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/09/07 09:20 PM · On: Things that upset a terrier may pass virtually unnoticed by a Great Dane

I love the Dean's response to Sam's threat of having Dean neutered.  I just can't stop laughing.  Now everytime I think of that today I'm going to laugh!

Only 1 1/2 days left?  Good for them, bad for me.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad to make you laugh today.

Thanks for reading.

Laura

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 28/09/07 03:25 PM · On: Things that upset a terrier may pass virtually unnoticed by a Great Dane

great update! As always in this awesome story. Poor guys, they may wonder if this week will ever end...

Author's Response: Thanks so much fredo!

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