Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 8
What a jam-packed chapter! Why are the druid wanna-be's sacrificing Dean at the wrong time of year? Glad Sam vanquished Ronald. That was priceless.
Author's Response: Busy little chapter, wasn't it? Lots of diversion happening. Yes, Sam go tthe bad clown...even though he almost had heart palpitations doing it. More fun coming in the next chapter, and the eppy....Jules
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 7
Wow! The entire resort is in on the conspiracy! Love Sam's misery! I've felt that bad before and it's no fun. YOu reminded me how miserable a person can feel. Fabulous balance of tension, drama and humor!
Author's Response: Oh, so have I. Didn't get so far as to want to make out my will, but I didn't want to move off the bathroom floor. Thanks for that - and thanks for the wonderful reviews. Glad you are still ploughing through the craziness...Jules
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 6
Judging from your beginning chapter notes Dean may get his chance to hunt down Snuggles. Your warnings at the beginning of each chapter are little teasers that make me want to read faster. Before I read the first word I'm already wondering how you're going to torture Sam and Dean with those items. You include so many little things from the show. Your attention to detail is cool (like the gas receipt in chapter 1)! thanks for finishing the puzzles left for us to guess at. I would much more embarrassed by Sam's behavior than Dean's. Oh Sam is going to hate himself in the morning! I thought Maggie was the bad guy in this story, but now I'm reconsidering. Unless that's what you want me to do...hmmm?
Author's Response: Snuggles is on the menu, yes. Loved that comment. And yes, the fuel receipt just bugged me for some reason. I don't know why. I'm not usually that picky. So, I wrote in a scene to satisfy my own curiosity. Sam is going to feel thoroughly wretched in the morning, in more ways than one. And hmm, well, yes, that is what I wanted you to think....lol...Jules
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 5
Dennis and those old gals are great characters! Geez that Wendy sure doesn't lack confidence. Rats---ewww! *shudder* I hate rats! You'v thoroughly freaked me out!!
Author's Response: Oh, my goodness! Sorry - I really am. Seriously, if I read a story like this and it had snakes or spiders, I would be freaked too - I hate the things. But I am sorry that I did freak so many people out - honest, I was only targeting Dean...honest.....Jules
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 4
No wonder Sam doesn't like fast food with his serious clown phobia. I wonder if he's seen the new Burger King---seriously scary! Pie beats salad in my book any day! Again with the pool---something serious is happening. Can't wait to find out who (or should I say what) is behind it. The pace is still on high and my sides hurt from laughing. Great job!
Author's Response: Yes, poor Sam - I did torture him with the clown. Sounds like I would be glad we don't have Burger King out here - we call it Hungry Jacks. And there is no clown or anyone dressed up to represent the company - just the slogan - "The burgers are better..." Maybe Sam should come to Australia - it's safer....lol...Jules
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 3
Why did it have to be what? Evil cliffhanger! Good to see the boys having some fun and acting like brothers.
Author's Response: Clowns....yes, I sort of have a tiny reputation for cliffhangers....don't know why....lol...Jules
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 2
Another hilarious chapter! I can tell I'm going to love this story! Looks like it's Sam's turn in the humiliation fun house. Such inventive ideas---targeting Sam's weaknesses and Dean's passions. I would be so upset to find out my masseuse was just some slob off the street copping a feel. Poor Sam must feel so violated. Okay now we're getting to the spooky.
Author's Response: Humiliation fun house - that's a really good name for it, considering what I am going to put those boys through. Glad you are enjoying it so far. The ride gets really freaky later on.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
Laugh riot!!! This is such an entertaining chapter. Poor Dean! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Hello, and welcome. Thanks for that. At least you don't have to wait for the updates...lol....Julie
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 03:35 PM · On: Epilogue
Very nice
Author's Response: Thank you for that - and thanks for sticking along for the ride....Julie
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 01:55 PM · On: Epilogue
That was a perfect ending for a perfect story. I do love humor, it brightens up my day. I'm just so excited to see you're new stuff up! You are such a great writer, and I hope that you write more humor stories!!! Those are great! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Kayla, thank you. I love writing the humour bits, and it really gives me a great feeling to hear that they have cheered up someone else's day too. I do have another humour story on the drawing board, as a matter of fact, and I try to inject a little humour into the other fics as well. I'm thrilled you liked this one so much....Jul
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/08/07 08:41 AM · On: Epilogue
way to go Sammy ! That as one big finale Jules. Awesome job, loved this story soooo much. And very nice ending, straight to AHBL. Looking forward for your next one, hoping it will be soon, or i will have to harass you a bit... Thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you, Fredo. I might just have to make the next one very soon, just for you, in thanks for all those pretty Dean pics you sent me. Wow, you certainly know how to bribe...very effective...LOL. Seriously, thanks, and I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. The next one won't be far away, I promise....Jul
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 23/08/07 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 9
Dear diary... OMG, laughing my ass off! And i knew time would come Dean would be worried about having sex with the girl... Poor guy, sure if you imagine the trickster as in the show... yikes... OK, ready for the big finale, common Jules, bring it on !
Author's Response: I liked the dear diary line - poor Sam. And yes, I torture Dean with that mental image in the eppy too - I'm a bad girl......Jul
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 9
I don't think I'm going to get Naked!Dean out of my head for a long time...especially with Sam's shirt tied around his waist. (Oh, don't tell Sammy I'm cheating on him...keep it between us!) Great chapter! I love the brothers working together and coming up with a plan, though Dean doesn't like the position if puts Sam in. I have that bad feeling along with Dean about Sam going off to the woods by himself, but we'll see if that goes away in the next chapter! Update soon!
Author's Response: I promise I won't tell. And all I have to say is - trust your feelings.....(laughs evilly)....Jul
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 9
Hmmm...I can picture Dean with the shirt tying around his waist and while walking have a nice view of his muscular thigh and...more. Loved the idea how they determined if they're dealing with the real Dean and Sam. When Dean'll have enough to hunt he could be an actor, lol. Hope that nothing'll happen now that they're apart once again. Can't wait for the final chapter.
Author's Response: Now, Oceane - no peeking up his sarong...LOL. And thank you for that thought - I did use it in the epilogue about Dean becoming an actor. It made a great thought for Sam to have as he heard the opening performance. And of course, nothing will happen to them now that they are separated again - honest....Jul
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 9
ooh, nicely done. Dean always has a plan doesn't he? The next chapter sounds promising. I can't wait to read it! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Dean always says he has a plan....thanks Kayla. Not long for the finale now....Jules
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 9
Naked Dean. Naked Dean with Sammyshirtsarong.... Yum... - thanks for that! Awesome chapter. I loved them using their "firsts" to prove they were themselves. BUT is it really Sam? Why did Liam say that Dean had made it back and not Sam? Hmmmm. Loved the Dean angst over doing the deed with Maggie. The ending would seem to indicate that he's gotten over it again, though.... Really looking forward to the big finale....
Author's Response: Thanks Lisa. Did you like the peep at that very muscle packed leg, there? (I did)...And yes, I had to throw in the angst with Dean remembering his little jaunt in the sauna, and how the Trickster looked the last tine.....eewwwwwww.....Jul
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 22/08/07 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 1
Okay, first: this is hilarious. It's always great when Dean is made fun of (he's just so easy to rile!). Second: WONDERFUL writing! So descriptive and moving...great job with that! And three...very, very intriguing...Maggie is quite suspicious! Okay, yup, lovin' this so far! Great beginning.
Author's Response: He is so easy to tease, isn't he? And you have Maggie picked from the start? Good catch! Must be your hunter's training. Thanks for that review - I love reviews! Hope you enjoy the ride...Julie
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 21/08/07 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 8
Oh dear - thanks for the warnings :) This was just too much - lol. Great writing! Sam really had his hands full in this chapter. Oh and how dare you leaving us like this? Dean naked, Dean tied up, Dean to be purified??? MORE please SOON! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review - glad you are still along for the ride, especially since it has gotten so freaky. More naked Dean to come, and then the eppy....Jules
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 8
Terrific chapter. Sam got his hands full. He woke up underground, killed Ronald, the clown, yeah..., nearly hit by a train and now he's only inchs from the surface. Go Sammy, go, Dean need you. Poor Dean, hit by a taser, drugged, woke up tied up to an altar and naked. I don't understand those women, they don't want sex, they want Dean for sacrifice, what a waste. Evil cliffy Jules, please update soon.
Author's Response: Yes, that was a busy little chapter, I must admit. There was a lot happening in there. And yes, crazy women - must be menopause or something....lol...Jul
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 8
woohoo, Sam 1, Ronald 0 !!! But huh, Dean 0 , frisky women... Was that a cliffie ? WAS THAT A CLIFFIE ! Jules Jules Jules, i'm going to the States kicking some authors asses next month, i could make my next trip toward Australia, be very careful...
Author's Response: Well....I suppose, yes, that was a cliffle. But, but - I gave you naked Dean - would you really kick me, hon? (bats creek-water brown puppy dog eyes)...and I got rid of Ronald....Jul
Reviewer: Purehalo (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 8
You got him nikkid. I love you
Author's Response: I got him nikkid. And I left him nikkid for a nice amount of time, too. Pity I couldn't have done the entire epilogue with him nikkid (did consider it...)..thanks Pure, hon - chat to you soon when I make it back to Follow The Line and catch up on what I have missed.....Jul
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 8
no fair! You are so evil to leave it here! Please tell me that you have the next chapter written! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Umm - probably a bit late to tell you, but yes, the next chapter is written. And posted. And already hoovered up, I think...Thanks Kayla, for the reveiw - and I'm delighted you love it so much....Jules
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 8
I have to say, Jules, you certainly did warn us...things definitely got freaky! Sam got rid of the clown! If there was some way I could hug him, I would do it right now (maybe you could work on that for me...lol). That tunnel system was freaky as well! And the little old ladies are behind it...I never saw that one coming! Great twist! No, let's get Sam out of that never-ending hole and save Dean's ass...naked ass, that is! Great job!
Author's Response: Yes, I'm getting a bit paranoid about the warnings since I scared the living crap out of Fredo with the clown.... Hmm, Dean's naked arse....nice imagery. Thank you for that...(wanders off dreaming of Dean's naked arse...) LOL ...Jul
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 8
Just FREAKIN' AWESOME!!! Naked Dean. Naked Dean in a field. Naked Dean in a field, tied up. Naked Dean in a field, tied up, and on an alter.....Wow - kinda liked that bit.... "Stick that between two all beef patties on a sesame seed bun, asshole" - this may be Sam's all time best line EVER - LOL!! I'm almost sad to see Ronald go... Hey! No warning for Sammy with his pants down???? LOL!!! I can forgive you for the cliffie for two reasons: 1. You've been posting this really fast, so I'm assuming that I won't have to wait too long and 2. You've left me with nakedDean.....
Author's Response: Lisa - I got a review on the sn.tv site that had me falling off my chair - the girl said she could picture....something...bouncing...as Dean ran toward the trees. Hmmm....well....and yes, Naked Dean - about time we had some nice eye-candy. Yes, I just had to use that line in here somewhere. And I forgot about Sam with no knickers - the Sammy girls had their skin feast earlier on, and I was just concentrating on naked Dean, tied hand and foot and limmed by firelight......ok, I'm good, now....Jul
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/07 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 8
ahhhh you're killin' me. Very good
Author's Response: Killing you????????? Oh, no - I've killed a reader....(hangs head) Seriously, glad you are enjoying it - I love writing humour. The world needs a laugh....Julie
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