Reviewer: Purehalo (Signed) · Date: 17/08/07 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 6
Trickster? Oh hon this chapter was so awesome and so funny!! I love your descriptions and Sam being so high had me LMAO!!! More please!!!
Author's Response: Hullo, hon! You're over here too? Awesome! And yes, you got it - big cyber cookie for you! Thanks for the review, and glad you liked off-his-face Sam. It was fun to write that bit. Hungover Sam next....Jul
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 6
Okay, this is so not fair! Making us wait for the big reveal. I can be so impatient sometimes. :0) Great chapter, things just keep getting weirder and weirder....the fabric softener teddy bears made me laugh so hard! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Not for long, thanks to Fredo. Next chapter is finished, and ready to post. Hope you like it. And things in the chapter after that are definitely off the wall...Jules
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 5
Awesome, awesone, awesome!!!!! I've been dying to read this and life has prevented me from getting to it until now....I hate real life - great chapter!!! Things definitely seem to be taking on a darker tone - You are doing an awesome job littering the clues about, but I am just too dense to be able to figure this out yet.... Not sure who the two nasties are - thinking Dennis is going to be much more than some random kid...? And sugar, hmmm? Poor Dean - a house on your chest pales in comparison to being locked in a closet full of rats - sheeesh!!! Please let Sammy rescue him sooon! Can't wait for all the freakiness to come!!!....
Author's Response: Thanks, Lam - and I know just what you mean about real life - mine has contrived to have me disappear from the boards for just over two weeks now, with work and holidays. And I haven't caught up with yours yet to see if you got my Dean out from under the house. As for the nasties, well, there will be some revelation in the next chapter, if you catch it quickly enough. But there is also a red herring in there too. And sugar? Yes, sugar will be important. Sugar, and deception....who can it be? Freakiness about to begin in earnest....Jules
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 3
Clowns, ugh tell me you didn't bring in the clowns.. argh, I'm going to try and carry on, but you can't imagine how creeped out I am.. K
Author's Response: Uh-oh, another one creeped out by the clown - sorry, sorry...I promise I will warn the next time Ronald makes an appearance. (and he does - one more tiny appearance in a later chapter) Mind the rats.....Jules
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 2
"Hey - at least you'll make one hell of an impression.".. ROTFLMAO... Too funny. And now though I was planning on reading one chapter I'm instead heading towards my third.. gotta find out what happened to the pool...K
Author's Response: All will be revealed - but not just yet. Soon, though. Our favourite Geek boys is onto something. Thanks for reading, and the review - I love them. Almost better than chocolate.....Jules
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 5
Wow, that's certainly creepy to say the least. First the clown thing and now rats? Thanks for the warning :0) ~Kayla
Author's Response: That's okay - got caught with the clown, so I'm making sure I post warnings now. (hope no-one is afraid of steam trains, or I am really going to be in trouble...)...Jules
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
"Man - weren't you ever told not to look a gift horse in the ass?" Too good, thanks for the read - K
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, and welcome to the craziness....Jules
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 5
Yay, Jules got a new chapter up!!! And what an incredible one it was! I really enjoyed it and I have one part that made me laugh out loud: "Uh-huh." Dean rubbed a hand across his chin. "So, what were you doing in her bedroom?" "Scanning." "Well, that's a new name for it." Sam scowled at his sibling. "With the thermal scanner." Great writing sweetie! Oh, and the rats...you seriously creeped me out with that. I could totally feel them crawling over me as I was reading it.
Author's Response: Yes, I did, and another chapter is ready too. Got to love holidays. Even though my aunt and I both got sick and had to come home early. Glad you liked the thermal scanner lines - I added those at the last minute - just felt it needed something. And of course, Dean would not let the opportunity for teasing go by when he found out Sam got caught in Wendy's room. Sorry for the creepiness - but I did remember to post a warning this time....(begs with creek-water brown puppy dog eyes)
Reviewer: SupernaturalGeek (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 5
OMG! Poor Dean! That cook SO needs to die horribly.. Now would be a good time for Sammy to come to the rescue - can't wait for the next one! ;)
Author's Response: Sammy is right in the room, and with the volume of noise that Dean is capable of making, there is no way little brother won't hear the screams...lol! The next one is ready for posting, and will be up very shortly. Thanks for the review, hon, they are gold to me....Jul
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 5
awesome chapter, so happy when i saw you updated ! And guess what, i have absolutely no problem with rats or italian cook ! But now i have to wait again...
Author's Response: Not for long, hon, the next chapter is ready for posting. Thanks for being patient while I was away. I had two weeks of absolutely manic work, and then a few days holiday away, but I'm back now, and writing furiously. Glad you had no prob with the rats - but I have seriously creeped a few people out with that scene. Who knew? Rats and clowns.....oh, my...Jul
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 15/08/07 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 5
Why dont I ever see tweety birds? Cant write, too busy laughing....I need more!!!!! Please
Author's Response: More is coming very soon. Glad you liked that line - it came to me quite a while back, and I just had it typed on the page sitting very lonely all by itself until I wrote the rest of the scene around it. My poor Dean...Jules
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 30/07/07 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 4
Sam has been attacked by Ronald McDonald, too funny, lol. At least this time Dean saw the same thing than Sam, no pool once again. What's going at this resort, can't wait to know. Captivating story so far.
Author's Response: Yes, someone is playing with their heads, and it's only going to get worse before Sam figures it out. Let the festivities begin! Thanks for reading hon - glad you are enjoying it....Jules
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 27/07/07 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 4
This story always brings a smile to my face! I am a little disappointed though, that they won't be swimming again...the visual of them in swim suits...Wow. ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks, Kayla - and don't worry, I have wet Sam and naked Dean planned for later chapters - coming soon, actually. Glad you like - and thanks for the review!...Jules
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 27/07/07 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 4
Yes, the clowns scared me and you ought to be ashamed! Bad Jules...very bad Jules! (I'm not that convincing, am I?) Great chapter...I loved Dean being scared of the Italian cook...so funny! And Sam's nervousness about telling Dean about the killer Ronald McDonald...I was laughing at my poor boy! (Sorry Sam!) So, the real fun is about to begin, huh? I can hardly wait...
Author's Response: Oops - you'd better stand in line behind Fredo to beat me over the head about the clowns. Seriously, I was given a clown figurine as a present from work, and it sits on my bedside table - not creepy at all. He's rather cute, actually. And yes, the real fun is about to begin - and it's poor Sam that brings it on, when he finally figures out who, or what, is doing all this...Jul
Reviewer: d6l2j7 (Signed) · Date: 27/07/07 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 4
I must tell ya that the disappearing swimming pool is a little disturbing! I have come to the conclusion that coming to this place was a very bad idea! Sammy and Dean should leave ASAP! But of course that isn't gonna happen right! Can't wait till the next chapter.
Author's Response: No, that isn't going to happen - the boys will stay till the bitter end, whatever that may entail. And the disappearing pool is mild compared to what is coming. The boys are in for a wild time in upcoming chapters. Thanks for the review, hon.
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 27/07/07 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 4
Awesome, awesome, awesome!!!! Ronald Norman Bates McDonald LMFAO!!!!! Love that Dean never goes anywhere without his .45 and it is such a comfort to Sam. I begin to wonder if that is saying something about them or me? Great banter between the boys as always. I'm thinking that something here is playing on the boys nightmares? Desires? Can't wait to find out!!!!
Author's Response: You're on the right track, hon - someone is playing with their heads, and playing on their fears. Think hard, and you might just be able to twig onto what I am up to. Let me give you a tiny hint - sugar plays a part.... Glad you liked the Norman Bates reference. And wouldn't you just want to be Dean's pistol? (mmmm, tucked into that waistband - thud...)
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 27/07/07 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 4
did i mention that i suffer from exagerate and irrational fear of onions... OK, seriously, great chapter here, many good lines and touching brotherly moments. Almost choked myself during the dinner part, Dean Winchester, hunter and killer of supernatural monsters, almost murdered by a lettuce ! And i would ask my money back if in a supposedly luxuous resort the pool keep disappearing every night, hell, what if i'd wanna have a midnight bath. But they didn't pay, so move on to the next question that would worry me, where and with what did i really have sex if the sauna doesn't exist either... So, the fun is about to start huh, can't wait ! And for the onions, really i may suffer an abnormal and irrational fear of them, when it's hubby eating them !...
Author's Response: You're scared of onions and you run a cafe???? Bet Dean would definitely not get his extra onions if he stopped by...lol. And Dean always said that healthy crap would kill someone. Death by salad. And the answer to the sex question will be revealed very soon....stay tuned, hon, and thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm a glutton for reviews. And yours always bring a smile to my face. (and I know what you mean about the other half eating onios, and their devastating results - yikes!)...Jules
Reviewer: SupernaturalGeek (Signed) · Date: 27/07/07 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 4
Wow, that was awesome! Loved Dean finding Sam in the shower and the comment about 'It's me - has been for the last few minutes' and then him taking offence that Sam saw him and screamed! LOL! Also liked the scene in the dinning room - poor Dean, so out of his depth with the posh food and Sam praying he wouldn't actually ask for a burger! And it was really sweet when Sam saved him from choking - just a little scene but it really reminded you of the brotherly-ness that always shines through (Did I just make a new word there?..) Really enjoyed it and can't wait till the next one! I'm especially keen after your last comment about a wet, naked Dean.. *slides off chair and onto floor as image runs through head*
Author's Response: Michaela - I like the new word - brotherly-ness. And yes, naked Dean is coming very soon - in a chapter or two. So glad you like it, hon, and it was great to chat to you the other morning. As for the burger, that scene just about wrote itself in my head one day, and I just had to get them into the dining room to include it. I could just see the woebegone look on Dean's face as he got his burger...Jules
Reviewer: SupernaturalGeek (Signed) · Date: 24/07/07 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh wow.. Dean in trunks.. In the pool.. And swimming.. *is heap on the floor* Thank you SO much for that mental image Jules! Definitely one I'll be carrying around with me! Loved the brotherly banter and really curious about what is going on at that freaky hotel?? Very funny but very suspenseful as well - look forward to the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: well, if you liked that one, Michaela, just wait for naked, tied down Dean in an upcoming chapter...thanks so much for reviewing, glad you liked. Next chapter is up.
Reviewer: supernaturalsam (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 3
Yay, an update! I absolutely love this banter between the brothers...you have me laughing the entire time here! And I always knew Sam could take Dean in a swimming match! (Oh, thanks for the Sam in the pool and Sam in the shower visuals...you know how much I love them!) But Ronald McDonald? I hate clowns just as much as Sam and I may be a little freaked to take a shower now! Now hurry up with the update! I have to see what happens to Sammy!
Author's Response: Thanks Stephanie. Glad I made you laugh. And Sam does have that height advantage after all... More Sam in the shower coming up in the next chapter - someone warn Fredo - lol! And yes! You got that it was Ronald! No-one else has so far - or if they did, they didn't mention it. Well done, you!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 3
Dean and Maggie're having a wonderful time together, lucky Maggie. I enjoy so much the playful banter between Dean and Sam. After seeing the pool disappeared, Sam is attacking by a clown!!!What's going at this resort, can't wait to know.
Author's Response: The mystery deepens. It will get worse before it gets better. Yes, lucky Maggie (why do I want to scratch her eyes out...) Thanks for the review hon - I love them.
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 3
Okay, that was, well...creepy to say the least. I loved the playful banter between Sam and Dean. It's perfect! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks Kayla - it gets creepier....Thanks for that - I think I've watched Tall Tales and Hell House quite a few times for research for this fic - just to make sure I get it right. Glad you like.
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 3
Okkkkaaaayyy - so Dean's having a good time - tastefully done that scene by the way - but wth is up with Sammy? A clown doing the Psycho routine? Disappearing pool? He's sooo not having a good vacation!!! As always, loving this story and the detail you put in it! Will try to wait patiently - but cliffie dude!!! Please update soooon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Don't worry - things won't stay pleasant for Dean for very long...(evil laugh)... Cliffie - was it really? Hmm - well, yes, I suppose it was a tiny little cliffie....
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 22/07/07 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 3
damn, put a warning, girl suffering from coulrophobia here ! God, i was all, oh the pool, oh the sauna, oh Sammy and the girl so funny, oh Dean and the girl so lucky, and you come up with that end ?! Breath fredo, breath, my heart is racing and i might even have let out a little scream. Ok, i will be here for the next chapter, i can do that, gonna need a intense psychological preparation, but i can do it...
Author's Response: Oops. But I have to ask - me being an Aussie and all - what the flip is coulrophobia? Please explain... My, my, my you were a busy little girl, weren't you - running all over the fic like that - lucky for you the pool and the sauna are right next to each other - lol! And you screamed! Wow - I'm impressed. And I will warn you next time....
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 2
I would've like to see Sam in those pair of swim trunks, sound sexy as hell, lol and his little adventure with the fake masseuse and ladies in the sauna, poor Sam. Awww... Dean why didn't you listen to your brother. The pool's gone????!!!The plot thickens indeed. Can't wait for more. Nice work Jules.
Author's Response: Thank you, Oceane - yes, the plot will keep thickening until one of the boys finally figures out what is really going on in the resort from hell. Thanks for the review, hon.
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