Reviewer: katie_kiss (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 4
love the story!! more soon i hope!!
Author's Response: So glad and thanks for letting me know you're enjoying. I'm going to be updating this one next so, more soon to come - K
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 01/08/07 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter. Finally Sam has eyes on a young woman, it was about time. They saved the life of the last victim of the spirit. Can't wait to learn more about this dead girl. So a captivating story, can't wait for the next update. Great work K.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Yup I'm thinkin it's about time Sammy gets some....lol. Thanks as always for taking the time to review - I'll update soon - K
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 01/08/07 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 4
yay, I'm so glad you have updated this story! You've done such a great job. I laughed at Dean and his pickle. So funny. Nice job! ~Kayla
Author's Response: thanks Kayla, you're always so sweet. I'm so glad your digging the story, I'll try and update soon. - k
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 01/08/07 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 4
they're in a pickle and Dean wants when......pickles and pie and peanut m&m s......healthy diet..... great update kelly, thanks
Author's Response: Thanks Jude, I mean really who can resist a pickle on a stick (their great!)
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 01/08/07 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 4
no pie Dean ?! Like the fact that his brother prettyness is not a jalousy factor for Sam but a protection against agressive blondes ! And the brunette just spun his head, good, cause yes, he's alive and deserve some fun too... Even platonic fun... That ghost is a bitch, but wanna hear more from her, and from the other bad guy too. Before august the tenth please...
Author's Response: I'm working I'm working.. I promise to flood the system with updates before I go....Thanks as always K
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 01/08/07 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 4
Awesome chapter - well worth the wait! Loved your explanation for Dean's one night stands versus Sam's aversion to them - perfect! But must you keep taunting me with that horrid shower? Cookies for more.....
Author's Response: Thanks Lam, I'm getting my groove back, so a new update won't be far away... Thanks as always for the review - Kell
Reviewer: katie_kiss (Signed) · Date: 25/07/07 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 3
i love this story! its awesome
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading Katie, Glad you're digging the story.. I'll hopefully update it this weekend - Thanks again, K
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 20/07/07 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 3
damn, gonna have to wait a whole week... We really need to rediscuss that vaca whim...
Author's Response: LOL.......I'll hurry back I promise.
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 20/07/07 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 3
Gotta enjoy the banter between the brothers, they made me laugh, lol. So th ghostly woman who killed the men is related with the serial killer. So captivating K, can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Oceane you're always so sweet to review, Hate to say it you're going to have to wait a while, I'm heading out on a Vacation and will be gone the week, will update as soon as I return - Thanks for reading - K
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 19/07/07 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 3
Awesome "monster"! Love how you've brought all the threads together in this chappie. Of course, the creepiest thing yet is that damn shower - *shudders uncontrollably*!!!
Author's Response: Thanks lam, glad you enjoyed... Yeah, I've been in those showers and trust me when I say the critters are big enough to carry off a small child....lol. Thanks for the reivew - K
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 19/07/07 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 3
Great update K, this story is getting more and more intriguing!
~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks Kayla, I'm going to have to leave you guys hanging for a bit though, I'm on vacation all next week, I'd been planning on finishing, but well best laid plans....right - Lol.. thanks again.
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 19/07/07 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 2
What the hell was THAT??? I like it...can't wait for the next chappy.
Author's Response: Thanks glad you're enjoying. And thanks for taking the time to review, it means a lot. - K
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 19/07/07 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 3
Great, Kelly ....I'm imaginig Dean having a fond expression not about the children playing but because they were "caged" behind glass..... Glad Sam got his dose of shower problems.. looking forward to more of Frank and the rusalka
Author's Response: Thanks as alway for reading Jude, hope the nose's okay...
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 19/07/07 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 2
This sounds like another great stroy :) I am already hooked. I love amusement parks and it seems a perfect setting for a hunt. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: You're always so sweet, glad you're digging the story and I'll update soon - Kell
Reviewer: jp123 (Signed) · Date: 18/07/07 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
look's like we have another great story in the making. looking forward to more. Thanks
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying, and thanks for letting me know, I hope to update soon. - K
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 18/07/07 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 2
That was great. Poor Dean, he doesn't like where they stay but at least the food is good, lol. Dean bumped into the serial killer. Who's this woman, intriguing. Captivating K, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying, and thanks for the kind review...Yeah, can't say I blame the guy, no bathroom, no air conditioning..Ugh....LOL - K
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 18/07/07 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 2
"if not the wraith, then maybe Sam" ? loved that line....could imagine the 'glare' Love the childhood memories......of course our heroes are "above average" so our serial killer just bitten off more than he can chew!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Jude, glad you're enjoying and ofcourse everyone knows that Dean stands out in a crowd..lol
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 17/07/07 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 2
i double Sam here, what the hell was that ? And tell me i didn't read a sentence talking about spiders the size of hamsters... Well, I like the unusual context, and i'm very curious to see where this is heading for...
Author's Response: No not another spider story, Fredo, so you can relax. And Yeah, I'm a bit curious myself...lol
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 17/07/07 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 2
Okay , i'm keeping my eye on this. Legless ghosts are creepy as hell. I'm looking for some new feature stuff. make me proud.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, hope you enjoy...K
Reviewer: Evergreen (Signed) · Date: 17/07/07 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hey, I went to school at Bloomsburg. I've been to Knoebel's tons of times. Great selection for location. I look forward to more. Thanks, Evergreen
Author's Response: It is a great park, I was just there last weekend...lol. I'm going to be sticking to it as much as possible, but may change a couple of things for the story - Glad you're enjoying - K
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 17/07/07 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 2
Do you know, I'd actually forgotten about this one? Awesome chapter! Is it a water wraith? An avenging spirit? Is creepy-guy a serial killer? A serial vengeful spirit? I loved Dean and Sam at the amusement park and the ref's to Sam's love of them growing up. Of course, Dean would love the greasy-crappy food - the only reason I go to fairs! I'm totally with Dean in being creeped out by sharing those nasty campsite showers - eeeewwwwww!!! And I think you may be obsessed with spiders.... I had a huge daddylonglegs crawl over my shoulder the other day - I was standing up at the time, so just imagine how long the damn thing was on me.... yuck!
Author's Response: Well around here you can't use any kind of campground or state park bathroom without a host of the creepy buggers crawling all over you...that's spiders I'm talking about not creepy killer types..lol Glad you enjoyed and I'll try and update this one a bit quicker..K
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
Do you ever stop writing K? I don't know how you come up with so many different, amazing stories the way you do! This one looks very good! I'm excitied to see where it goes! ~Kayla
Author's Response: I'll tell you what Kayla, stories are never the problem, the work is finding the time to write them down..Years as a secretary help though, I'm a fast typer, thank God - Glad you liked it and I'll update as soon as possible. I just spent the weekend at the park in question, so I'm behind--K
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 06/07/07 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 1
ok, Kel, come back right now, this park is dangerous ! So you're not on vacation, it's job research ! Nice start, a lot of things, water wraith, crazy killer... Want more, as always. Oh and if little Jessie put her sticky cotton candy fingers around a Winchester's leg, handcuff the guy, bring him home, and call your friends !
Author's Response: Will do Fredo, though I'm pretty sure I'll be running into slightly over weight dads, with short tempers and a beer gut...I'll keep my eyes open - K
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 06/07/07 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 1
What a start K. Someone is killing women, something and a wraith is killing men, lot of work for the Winchesters. I'm looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, it's always great to find you reading and reviewing my stories... it means a lot - K
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 05/07/07 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good God - another story? And yet, you don't ever write crap.... This one is hot out of the starting blocks! So, why don't they know about Sandy? Why do I think the park is keeping it a secret and it's going to totally screw Sam's plan....? Gotta tell you, I really thought we were heading for some skinny dipping at the beginning....
Author's Response: Thanks, I think? Yeah, it does seem kinda of like a skinny dipping type of story.. thanks as always for reading...K
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