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Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oooooh, interesting start, Kel! A water wraith...heh heh heh...
Love how disconnected it is from the beginning to the actual job they get--can tell this is gonna be one of those WHAT??? stories....great job!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 7

Good chapter. Love that Frank stole Dean's knife---and not just any knife, but THE knife. At least they know it's missing. This is going to get good!

Author's Response: Thanks Shannon, yeah, well knowing it's missing and finding it before it's too late is going to be the problem - K

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 7

Hey Kel, finally catching up on all the new chapters. Oh, this was good! I loved the fun moment between the brothers. Dean can be so bad :) The knife missing from his bag will mean trouble. The tension is rising! Looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: Yeah, can't imagine it's good for our boys that the killer now has Dean's knife....hm. Guess I better get something posted now that you've finished catching up..lol - Take Care - K

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 7

The killer wanted to set up Dean but Dean and Sam figured out. Hope they'll find the guy before he kill again. Great update K, can't wait for more.

Author's Response:
As always Oceane, thanks for reading. I love that you always leave a review, it makes everything I do worth it to find that people are enjoying my stories... thanks - K

Reviewer: firefly (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 7

Excellent story so far. Frank seriously creeps me out. And now he has Dean's knife, so not good. Look forward to reading more. Great job building suspense. Debbi

Author's Response: So glad Frank creeps you out..lol. That's always a good sign, and thanks for the stars I'm really glad you're diggin the story, new update on it's way - K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 27/09/07 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 7

well, that's now bad on so many levels. A new murder indict, just what Dean needs! And Sammy's so clear when he talks to a girl, lol...

Author's Response: Yeah, Sam's one smooth operator, so glad you enjoyed and thanks as always for the R&R - Kell

Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 26/09/07 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 6

This is a good/unique plot. Good descriptions (describing the "sticky, messy" kids at the park. There was a very real rapport between the two brothers. I like the Frank character – he is really creepy & you make his thoughts very clear & a little scary & demented. I've gotta say, I was a little hurt in chapter 4 when Sam said he doesn't like girls that short (I'm a Sam-girl & I'm only 5 feet). Of course, you did make up for it by having him interested in Karen (which is my name). So we're even. Nice suspense, letting us think it was Karen who died – I felt so bad for Sam in those moments. Very good writing & can't wait to see what happens!Good description in chapter 2, really set the mood and clearly displayed Dean's feelings thru his actions: Dean didn't bother to stifle the growl that emanated from him, turning towards the bunk beds that lined one side of the cabin he laid his gear on the bottom one. Totally ignoring Sam, he pawed through his clothes trying to find something clean.

Author's Response: I just want to let you know that I'm thrilled, you're enjoying this story. Also I love that you review, a lot of times people forget just how important it is for writers to get feedback, it really makes the work easier...lol. So thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy the rest - K

Reviewer: katie_kiss (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 6

loving the story and i cant wait for the next update!!

Author's Response: Thanks Katie, I'll upate this week.. So glad you're enjoying - K

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 6

Nice update. Now the boys know they're dealing with dual threats.

Author's Response: Those poor boys we drop so much on their laps...lol. Glad you're enjoying - K

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 07/09/07 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 6

So glad you didn't kill Karen. Hm, I'm wondering about a connection of the ghost and the possible serial killer. The tension is rising. Another great stroy of yours! Thanks :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much Soelnnelchen, So glad you're enjoying. I love finding out what people think, makes the writing even more fun - K

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 6

Poor Sam, he thought for one minute that the body was Karen's. There're a connection between the killer and the ghost girl. Terrific story K, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Aww.. Oceane so glad you're digging the story. thanks as always for reading and reviewing - K

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 6

Whew! Marvelous job faking me out! I hoped it wasn't Karen, but I really wasn't certain. How tricky!

Author's Response: lol, my pleasure, I figure even Sam deserves a break sometimes..lol. thanks for reading - K

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 5

Oh no! I hope he didn't kill Karen. Poor Sam can't get a break--he really is cursed!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 4

I'm glad Sam has found a nice, cute girl to hang out with. That boy needs a little more female company.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 3

Now don't forget to curse Sam. he doesn't get near enough blame. Love that part!
You really do your research, comingup with the most unusual paranormal villains. Thanks for the Supernatural Sesame Street! It keeps your stories unique!

Author's Response:
Supernatural Sesame street...lol. Yeah, well you have to love a really good baddie, and hey thanks to the internet we all get to share in the fun...thanks for reading - K

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 6

awesome job, kel!! really glad it wasn't karen!! keep up the awesome work!! love it so far!! bambers;)

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 2

Amusing point of view about sleep away camp. I always knew there was something evil about it!
Great end to the chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks yeah, I know from past experience, sleep away camp never a good idea - K

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love that the villain has so much remorse after he's killed! Not your run-of-the-mill psycho killer.
I have a feeling that Dean is going to hate Sam's plan.

Author's Response: Yeah, that's pretty much a given Shannon.. lol. Glad you're giving this one a try..hope you enjoy - K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 6

great update, i was so afraid you killed Karen, would have been so unfair for poor Sammy. But well, you killed Cat that time, so i know now everything's possible... Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:
Yeah, but I didn't have the heart to beat Sam down, after all how many woman does he have to loose.. glad you enjoyed - K

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 06/09/07 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 6

Great update, thanks Kell! Had to read it right away. Aw, the tension is building up nicely. If you write fast, I might even catch another update of this or one of your other stories before I leave - lol. Take care :)

Author's Response:
Alright so I'm on a time crunch huh, well Glad you liked the update, and I'm going to be updating Fall River soon, maybe in about an hour, if the kids cooperate.. thanks as always for reading - K

Reviewer: katie_kiss (Signed) · Date: 03/09/07 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 5

wow! loving the story! i cant wait for the next update!!

Author's Response:
Wow, Katie you're going right down the list this morning.. Thanks I so appreciate the reviews - K

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 28/08/07 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 5

The killer struck again, I hope the woman wasn't Karen, that would be terrible for Sam. Terrific chapter K, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: We'll see Oceane, we'll see. I'll update soon, I promise. - K

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 28/08/07 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 5

Just caught up with this one, kwater. What a great story! Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much Vanessa, I'm a bit behind on this one, but I hope to update more regularly from here on out.. Always appreciate the review...K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 28/08/07 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 5

ah, finally got my V update! And great update! Loved the kitchen scene, Dean waiting for Sam and make him talk, excellent. So, Franck, crazy serial killer huh, very practical those voices as excuses to kill off people! Looks like we know now who's seeking for vengeance... Mooooore Kel, quickly!

Author's Response: I'm getting my groove back, Fredo. Update will be a lot quicker than I've been..lol. So glad you enjoyed....K

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 28/08/07 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 5

Great chapter Kelly! I think that Bambers is also being an evil influence - do I smell a serial killer here???? I guess we know now who is going to be looking for vengeance, eh? Loved the scene of Dean waiting for Sam in the dark - perfect! And I KNEW that damn shower was the home of evil itself!!!!

Author's Response: So glad you liked lam, Don't worry too much I don't think Frank could ever compare to Charlie..lol. Thanks as always for reviewing - k

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