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Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/09/09 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 10

Karma's a bitch, especially if you're a serial murdered.  How poetic that Frank was killed by the ghost of one of his own victims.  Love it!!!

A great story, Kel!  I'm so glad I was able to finish it.  Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed Shannon, and I completely understand the whole getting sidetracked thing.  There's so much to read, so little time....lol ;)

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/09/09 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 9

Yay!  I started reading this story ages ago then forgot to check back, but often wondered how it ended.  Thanks to the Shout Box and bambers I've found it again!

Very exciting!  Now it's just a race against time.  I love when you can hear the clock ticking in your mind and you hope you're the first one to reach the goal!

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 03/08/08 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 10

This was a great story..so glad Sam got the girl in the end..lol..I enjoyed everything about this story..I liked in the beginning how you described Dean's distaste for the cabin..Thanks for writing..

Author's Response: Thanks much Mustang, so glad you enjoyed.  I actually stayed there at that campground and I have to admit, the spiders aren't an exaggeration....lol. Thanks for the review Kel

Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 3

Absolutely wonderful! You have a beautiful writing style that just keeps me coming back for more and more ... 

This graf had me laughing out loud (which quite disturbed the beagle napping at my feet).

Watching as his brother gathered up a few things, Dean followed him out onto the porch of the cabin, taking a seat in a beat up rocking chair that had seen better days, he watched as his brother headed for the showers.  Positioning his chair so that he would have a birds eye view of Sam's shower stall, Dean waited, a grin on his face for what he knew would happen next.  As he had anticipated, a curse rang out from the shower, Dean closed his eyes and leaned his head back against the rocker, content to wait.

It really captures the little devil that exists inside all brothers, no matter how loving.

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story! 

Thanks so much for sharing your work. 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the lovely compliment.  And a big thanks for adding me to your fav list.  It's always nice to know that people are out there reading and enjoying.. Hope the rest of the story gets it done for you.. thanks again - Kel

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 13/01/08 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 10

This last chapter was worth the wait. Frank had been taking of by the spirit who herself is now free. Sam is going to have some good time in company of Karen, lucky him and Dean won't be tied to these  murders. Great finale Kel. 

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 10

I like the end of this, Dean's clear, bye bye Frank, and Sam , well, I'm sure he'll entertain himself.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks Angela, yeah I figure even Sam deserves some lovin' every now and again.  Plus I'm sure Dean was off loving all that uninterupted shower time...lol.  Glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 10

Aw, way to bring it home Kel and definately worth the wait! These last lines had me grin there.... well, Sammy deserves a "break" - lol. Thanks as always for your great work :)

Author's Response: Don't know about worth the wait, Dagmar, but I'm happy to know you enjoyed the ending.  Thanks as always for the support - K

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 10

great job, kel...loved the story!! glad frank finally got his in the end!! thanks for sharing...bambers;)

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed B, and thanks for the beta work, without you things wouldn't have gone quite so well for the Winchesters...lol

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 10

Sammy's gonna get laid!! What? No, of course it's not the only thing i remember from this story...;) Anyway, this is it, you finished it, one serial killer dead and one ghost pacified. Good job Kel, let's move on to your other stories!...

Author's Response: LOL, yeah I figure Sam's well deserved.  Glad you enjoyed and thanks for being patient, well as patient as you can be for a story...lol. 

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 9

poor girl! But they gonna find her, right? Yeah, they will... But the cops all over the place, not good, and the grayish fingers, beurk!!!

Author's Response: Beurk...lol.. I'm writing, I'm writing I swear...

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 9

Sam located Karen, that's great news. Now, they must get to her before Frank's return. Suspenseful chapter Kel, can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Thanks Oceane, glad you're enjoying.  The boys are coming to the rescue as we speak..lol.  I just have to write it.  Really behind with this whole vacation thing..lol.  Next time I have to bring a laptop and get some work done...lol - K

 

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 08/11/07 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 9

Great update!  Can't wait for the last chapter.  Goooo boys!

Author's Response: Thanks V, glad you're enjoying.  I'm working on the final chapter now... - K

Reviewer: katie_kiss (Signed) · Date: 03/11/07 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 8

loving the story! i cant wait for another update!

Author's Response: Thanks Katie, I'm actually hoping to update this week, and I plan on finishing this up soon. So glad you're enjoying. - K

Reviewer: firefly (Signed) · Date: 29/10/07 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 8

Awesome Job. I was so glad to see another chapter posted to this story as it is one of my very favorites. Almost missed it. I just LOVED that Karen thought the boys were partners. Too funny. Hope you will be posting the next chapter soon. Deb

Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying.  I'm going to get an update together just as soon as possible.  I'm thinking there's only going to be a couple more chapters.  Thanks for the review and the stars it always means so much... - Kel

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 20/10/07 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 8

Gripping chapter. It's getting more and more intense. I can't wait for more, please update soon Kel. 

Author's Response: I promise update by Tuesday, after all I can't leave poor Karen in Frank's hands too long. - Thanks as always for reading - K

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 19/10/07 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 8

It's great, Kel!  You have to post again soon!  I hate hanging by a thread! 

Author's Response: Thanks Shannon only a chapter or two left, glad you're enjoying - K

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 8

Sam's just not destined to get to flirt.  I'm enjoying the read, sorry didn't review sooner but got to this point in one sitting.  So, are we letting Frank in that house?

Author's Response: Oh, heck yeah what fun would there be if Frank didn't get inside..lol.  Glad you enjoyed and thanks for letting me know, always nice to know someone's out there reading. - K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 8

luckily i know you're writing the next chapter right now! Cause you know, i need more... Awesome update, and had to laugh, Sam is still very tactful with the girl, not even noticing what she tries to know, and giving the worse possible answers, lol. And this, "Well, she technically wasn't dead yet, but really it was only a matter of hours.", ow, how bad is this...

 



Author's Response: Yeah, well two good looking guys tell you they're partners.. hm.. would give any girl pause..lol.  Next chapter coming up - K

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 8

EEeeeeeek, Kel you gotta put up the next chapter QUICK! Pooor Karen, all confuzzled and now bait...urrrrgh...muuuust reeeaaddd mooooooooore!!!!

Author's Response: Ah Shiny sweetie, so glad you're checking this out.  Next update will be soon and chock full of action so I hope you enjoy - K

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 7

Lol, juuuuuuust her internet connection. Hello...wow, nice twist with Frank, setting them up like that. Love how you're involving two plots here--Rusalka AND serial killer. Nice. I bet the ghost chick gets Frank...totally gonna happen, lol... lovin' it!!!

Author's Response: Shiny shhhhh....don't spoil the ending ;)

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 6

Lol, Dean would definitely say that. Poor Sam, always falling for the chick that gets captured or killed...hopefully she won't get targeted by this serial killer, but I'm guessing that might be what you have planned....??? Are you that devious??? Carry on carry on...I'm rather hyper today, so...hence the babbling...

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 5

Oooooh, Fraaaaaank is a serial killer...can't wait to find out how this figures in...karen, lol...my aunt's name is Karen... Eeeek, lovin' it, Kel...

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 4

Don't forget my pickle? LOL!!!!!! Hee hee...okay, Kel, I just have to say....fantastic. This is excellent s ofar! Dean and Sam, in a theme park, getting wet...wooooowwwwww... there's much hilarity here, and of course...yes, angst. I'm sure there will be angst...unless it's just humor. And we want to save the dead guys...can't have anymore dead guys...but...lol, theme parks... 

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 3

A Rusalka? interesting! Never heard of 'em, but they sound spectacularly creepy!!! Greeeeaaaat chapter, Kel!!!! FRank sounds like a keeper...

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 2

Those run-ins with Frank are sooooooo creepy, Kel! And...um....how does one die by curling iron??? I don't geeeet iiiit...lol, I really don't. I'm guessing it's something weird, but uh...some explanation is necessary...yes. so. veeeery mysterious here!

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