Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/04/13 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 3
cool! I was going to look him up but you gave me the details I needed. I have to keep my review brief since I'm on my kindle and can't type with my fingernails. Love all the pain and anguish Dean's suffering from! You have me hooked. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm very curious to know what's controlling the wildlife amd how they're going to gank it. I'm sure you have an interesting way for them to figure it out (or you will when the time comes). Also, I'm a big fan of flashbacks telling the back story. You're next post will be when? I enjoy the bits of humor interspersed with the tension.
Author's Response: Ummm that's kinda it! It started as a little 500 qord piece and grew to that but was on;y really intended as a bandage-fest! Oopsie! B xx
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/04/13 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 2
Another fabulous chapter! Your chapters are so easy to submerge myself in. I love the sympathy Jody and Sam feel for Dean. I also liked the unspoken communication between the brothers and the similarities in what they do and their expressions because of their unique bond: "...surprisingly similar, slightly shifty but unapologetic grins." I especially loved the no socks part. It's those quirky little details that put the scoop of ice cream on the pie! Best of all is that touch of vulnerability that breaks through when Dean is beat to hell. "... was drawn instead to Dean's panicky gaze. he was pale in the dim light and soft shadows smudged his skin, bruising his already dirty face. He was breathing rapidly but each inhalation was shallow and she saw pain darting across his face as his wide green eyes held hers. She moved quickly to the bed, alarmed at his distress..." Poor baby, I'll hold his hand while you bandage. After all, someone has to comfort him and ease his pain.
Author's Response: Hi again. I don't really have a foot fetish...it's more a healthy interest! I love a vulnerable Dean, makes me all warm inside. And yes, he'd appreciate you holding his hand, I know, having read as much hurt-Dean as you have, you'd be expert at it! :0) B xxx
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/04/13 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 1
Yay! I love me some hurt Dean!! You have an almost magical way of describing the feelings and emotions of not only the Winchesters but those around him and giving them insight into the hard life they live. Your unique perspective from a third party describes the Winchesters in ways that otherwise wouldn't pack the same emotional punch. "Realizing hurt and pain was commonplace to these men..." "Dean nodded, recognizing the grip Sam was proposing and Jody realized this was far from the first time one or the other had needed to do this." "...unhappily but purposely shifting Dean onto his injured leg... crying out in pain as he lurched onto his other leg." And Sam standing on the sideline, able to do very little to ease his pain, and riddled with guilt and anger. I can't wait to read more! Sam tugged harder, unhappily but purposefully shifting Dean onto his injured leg. The pressure woke the neuropraxic nerves in Dean’s thigh, lighting them on fire and he opened his eyes, crying out in pain as he lurched onto his other leg.
Author's Response: Hi Shannon. Thank you hunny. I too love to hurt that lovely boy, he suits bandages so well doesn't he? And I just find Sheriff Mills a wonderful compassionate character. Thanks for reviewing, UnGen is so quiet of late. B xxxxxx
Reviewer: Maureen Nesbitt (Signed) · Date: 02/03/13 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 3
Fantastic story, I love nothing better than reading hurt Dean stories, so this one is right up my street, poor thing, I really like Jody too, thank goodness she has managed to survive being friends with the Winchester boys. Thanks.
Author's Response: Hey Maureen. Good to hear from ya, I was beginning to think no one was about anymore. The site seems so quiet. I'm glad you're enjoying it. It is really just a bit of a bandage Dean but I wanted to have a go at writing Jody. She's a lovely character so I hope I've done her some justice. Many thansk for reviewing, Much appreciated. bev x
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 01/03/13 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
*waves hands frantically* I volunteer to bandage Dean up! We've got a huge first aid kit, courtesy of my aunt...all the supplies and stuff left over from my late grandfather. It's so full I'm scared to even look in there half the time, but I know there's all sorts of dressings, primapore, bandages, antiseptic - we're good to go. I'll quell my fear of the big plastic box for Dean's sake. Hmm...cougar, eh? Looking forward to a bit of backstory from that one. How did the boys get in its way - or more to the point, how did Dean get in its way - lol. Poor Deany-babe - he seems to have forgotten how to duck. Jules
Author's Response: Hey Jules. I love the sound of that box...like the Pandora's box of the medical world! Umm, you might be dissappointed as your not really gonna get the cougar's back story as this one really is just a bit of a fluffy bandaging Dean story. I wanted to have a go at writing Jody and this is what came out. Oh and yup, my Dean never really bothers to duck as I admit I sorta like him sore and vulnerable...terrible of me I know! Many thanks for reviewing, no one seems to review anymore here. :0( Bev x
Reviewer: bitnblue (Signed) · Date: 01/03/13 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 2
Love it so far! If you want a little help with bandaging, let me know - I work in the medical field and deal with bite wounds daily.
Author's Response: Hi there bitnblue I'm pleased that you like it and sure pop over as there's loads more suturing and bandaging to do yet :) Better get my facts straight then huh? :) Birdie
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