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Reviewer: brookiwnchstr666 (Signed) · Date: 17/10/10 08:39 PM · On: The Truth Really Does Hurt Doesn't It

more soon? please lol i luv it

Reviewer: brookewinchster (Signed) · Date: 24/09/07 08:14 PM · On: The Truth Really Does Hurt Doesn't It

dun dun dunnnnn

Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 31/08/07 06:41 PM · On: The Truth Really Does Hurt Doesn't It

Looking forward to the next chapters, please post soon. I like where this is going.

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 26/07/07 12:50 PM · On: Possesion and Secrets

Ohhhh, I get it! Dean is possessed...this makes much more sense now! And I'm terribly worried for the Winchester boys and Bobby...hope you write more soon!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 26/07/07 12:47 PM · On: The Truth Really Does Hurt Doesn't It

????What's going on???? This is confusing, but intriguing...is Dean working with the demon?...

Reviewer: nicky199172 (Signed) · Date: 23/07/07 12:23 PM · On: Possesion and Secrets

you gotta write more i really need to know what that secret is lol but it's a great story i love it

Reviewer: supernaturalpass (Signed) · Date: 12/07/07 08:49 PM · On: Possesion and Secrets

Suspense! The suspense is killing me! lol, great job!

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 12:05 PM · On: Possesion and Secrets

Wow, what a great start! My heart was pumping hard. I'm ready for more!
~Kayla

Author's Response:
Hi Kayla,Thanks :D
I'm workin on the second chapter now! <3

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 05/07/07 10:13 AM · On: Possesion and Secrets

an interesting start to your story...am wondering if the first part was a dream though...think you need to slow down a bit and set the scene, and give a clear sense of what is going on...like the idea of Dean having a secret that could tear the family apart and Bobby knowing about it...i saw you were looking for a beta, i would be happy to help you. send me an email, if you haven't already found one!! thanks for the read, bambers;)

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 05/07/07 07:57 AM · On: Possesion and Secrets

Not too bad, Becky.....but you've got to slow down A LOT.......and explain what's going on more thoroughly....I suggest getting used to reading the good writers...so many...try devonshire, kwater, bambers, gaelispirit, thruterryseyes... They're the best...you can learn by reading them I just started 2 months ago...you can try mine if you'd like(mesmerized) also suggest finding a writer to be your BETA...they proofread and guide you..
You have to lead the reader by the hand....make them picture exactly what's happening in their mind's eye......It seems you have a plot but move through it properly and bring the rader with you......

Author's Response:
Thanks alot =)
I needed a review :)
How do you go about getting a BETA?
I only got this yesterday so yeah i admit i am a bit rushed..
any help you could offer me?

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