Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/01/13 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 1

Also, I love that even though this is Dean-centric you mention that she never thinks of one without thinking of the other, like a matched set.  Yet she so easily offers comfort and can see the man Dean is and the man he tries to hide.  Very perceptive.  She sees the forest and the trees.

Author's Response:

Thank you :0)

I know I am sometimes unfairly biased towards Dean...okay always...but I know that the Winchester world is absolutely about both brothers and she...the voyeur...You! cound see that too. 

B xxx

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 29/01/13 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

oh my.... wow!  What can I say... just... wow!!  That took my breath away.  Your descriptions are so perfect, so real.  I could picture every nuance of emotion on Dean's face, feel the voyeurist guilt of the main character (she was me, right?), the realization that I was honored to be able to witness something few people had ever seen, the tension, the awkwardness, the comfort pouring from her to him.  I can see it so clearly and even more importantly, I can feel it so accutely.  You, my dear friend, have an amazing gift!  Thank you for sharing it with me.

Author's Response:

Shannon.

 Wheeeeee! You made my day, such pretty, flattering and lovely words!  And yes of course she was you, I absolutely had you in mind when I sat her on that swing-seat.

Thank you, thank you 

B xxxxxx

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 25/01/13 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well written.  I could feel all the emotional turmoil.

Author's Response:

Thanks Ness, glad you enjoyed it.

Bev x

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