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Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 10/01/13 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 14

What! You're not writing anymore? My world just got a little darker. I will truly miss your stories. You are one of my favorite authors on this site. I guess I'll just have to reread your other stories.

Thank you for being such an entertaining author. I have really enjoyed reading what you write.

I hope you continue to write somewhere, your talents should be shared!

Take care!

Vikki



Author's Response:

Hi Vikki!  I have another story to post that is a challenged, only a short one that I wrote last year, and there may be one more in the future.  If you are ever on fictionpress I am there with original stoires!

Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 09/01/13 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 14

Hi, I'm sorry to see this story coming to an end. But you go out with a bang, great latst chapter. I gotta say that you almost fooled me, for a moment I thought the demon was back, but it was just a cat, LOL! Thank you for sharing this great fic with your readers!

Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 27/12/12 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 13

This chapter was great! I have really enjoyed this story. Thanks for such a fun ride.!

Vikki

Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 26/12/12 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 13

Hi there, sorry for my late review, RL has intervered lately with my free time, but I've managed to catch up with the last 2 chapters you've posted. Ha, I can't believe how you put the Winchesters through the wringer in this story. Love it!

Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 03/12/12 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great chapter! Lots of great one-liners: "It's coz you can't get it up on your own, isn't it?" LOL. Also Dean's:
"Is anyone else hungry?" made me smile. The angst is there as well obviously, great build-up to the finale!

Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 29/11/12 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 11

This chapter was fantastic. I loved the twist at the end with one of the witchy demons in Joanie.

I'm really looking forward to getting killed very bloody! The more blood the better!!

Thanks so much for such fun stories. I know they will always be a fun ride!

Vikki

Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 23/11/12 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 10

Still loving this story. Thanks for sharing!

Looking forward to more, hopefully soon!

Vikki

Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 23/11/12 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 10

Thanks for the update! I really like Joanie, she seems a real trooper, dealing with everything that is happening quite well.
Congrats on your acceptation for the competition, I'll try to leave a review for you, alright?

Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 14/11/12 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 9

Another great story. It's all coming together now.

I'm really enjoying it, Can't wait for more!

Vikki

Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 14/11/12 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 9

Ha, and here I was thinking that we'd be nearing the end of the story. Well, not before a new threat is on its way. Thanks for the update, your efforts in posting chapters regularly despite RL troubles is much appreciated!

Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 10/11/12 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 8

Oh, oh....... the boys are in dire straits! And just when they thought to get some rest after all that happened at the cemetery. You're putting them through the wringer, aren't you? I love it, so I hope you can post the next chapter soon!

Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 07/11/12 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 8

I'm still reading and still loving it!

More, please!

Vikki

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 05/11/12 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 8

Gulp, seems like the boys are in trouble again. I'm glad that Joanie is alive, but I wonder what her connection is, and is she possessed, too? Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate your review....and I can't say much about Joanie without giving things away!!!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 30/10/12 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 7

Wow! I just got caught up reading all the chapters, and I must say, this is a really thrilling, tense filled story. Loved the scene of the boys torching the bones and the spirits leaving the girls. But the demon(?) at the end? What is his goal? I'm sorry to see Joanie die (I assume he killed her). Looking forward to reading more (and some more hurt Dean? Pretty please.). 

Author's Response: More to come soon!  Thank you so much for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it!!

Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 30/10/12 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 7

Weird indeed, I gotta tell you, I still have no idea where you're headed with this story, but I'm still enjoying the mystery tour, LOL! Oh, and bonus points for this: What do you want to do with the rest of the night?" Too funny!

Author's Response: I love the boys one liners!  Makes the show!  Thank you for reviewing!!

Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 29/10/12 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 7

Another great chapter. It just keeps getting better and better. Looking forward to more.

Thanks,

Vikki



Author's Response: Thank you thank you!!!

Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 24/10/12 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 6

I love it! I'm a witch, this is so cool!

I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to see how I get ganked this time!

Thanks again,

Vikki



Author's Response: You are so loyal...gotta find a way to slot you in!

Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 23/10/12 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 6

Hi, thanks a lot for the update!
OMG, the body count for your story is getting mighty high, there won't be any teenagers left to kill for the demon if Sam and Dean don't get the case solved soon. What's up with the blue lights? Nothing good,that's one thing I know for sure. Look forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: YAY! A review!! tHANK YOU!  next chapter very soon, I hope!

Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 19/10/12 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 5

Hi there, somehow I missed your updates for the chapters you've posted in the past weeks. I really like your story so far, I've still got no clue who's the baddy, so I'm looking forward to more to come! And what's up with Dean, not too badly hurt, I hope?

Author's Response: New chapter up soon...and not too much hurt in this one...

Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 19/10/12 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 5

Finally the hurt Dean you promised. This has been a great chapter. I'm really enjoying this story.

Can't wait for more!!!

Thanks,

Vikki



Author's Response:

I don't hurt him too much in this story...I got accused of whumping Dean all the time! But I thought you guys liked that!....

(I DO like whumping Dean....)

Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 10/10/12 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 4

Just checking in to let you know I'm still reading. I'm really enjoyng this story. As for where it's going?  I'm clueless. I really am just along for the ride.

Looking forward to more!

Thanks again!
Vikki

Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 07/10/12 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 2

Hi there! Sorry for my late review. Having said that, I gotta tell you that this story rocks! I really like the mystery and it's quite spooky! LOL at the Playboy bunny hunt, I bet Dean would love a hunt like that!

Author's Response: We really should write a playboy bunny hunt for Dean, lol!

Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 03/10/12 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 2

Finally!

You're back. I've been having withdrawls!

These two chapters are a great beginning. I can't wait for more!

Thanks for sharing such great stories!

Vikki



Author's Response: Hello!!1 I missed you too!! Thank you for remembering me...and giving me stars!! YAY!!!

Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 30/09/12 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 1

Awesome start, this chapter gave me the goose bumps! Look forward to more to come!

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm so flattered you took the time to review, hope you follow the rest!

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