Reviewer: Falon (Signed) · Date: 16/09/12 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 1
I really enjoy this. You captured Dean's voice and his frustration. His need to tell someone...and while there is no one alive, of all his dead family and friends, he chooses his father. Why, because he thinks he can help but also because he think the man should have told him more...about sammy, adam. angels, the campbells...but he does love him and looks up to him. Still wants to please him. I get this all from your writing. Unique idea with lots of feeling. Keep going!
Author's Response: I just saw this review now, so I apologize for being so late to answer (RL has been a beast lately!) I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I think Dean really needs someone to talk to, especially with some of the things he can't talk to Sam about, and he never had anyone else to turn to except his dad. And he still has a lot he wants his dad to know--his worry, frustration, anger and pride over everything that's happened in the past few years. Thanks so much for the review, and I hope you enjoyed the rest of the story. Nancy
Reviewer: galen (Signed) · Date: 02/09/12 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
You did not disappoint me. Wonderfull writing and clever. I have read a few other stories you have authored and have really enjoyed. Hope you post more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, and I'm glad you're enjoying. I'll try to keep writing (RL permitting...) Hoping that season 8 will be more inspiring!
Reviewer: supernaturalfan (Signed) · Date: 26/08/12 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
Keep posting..these are great. And yes..I recognized every episode. Can't wait to read your other chapters..and whatever else you post. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Take care, Jane
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the vote of confidence, Jane! Next chapter coming right up. (I've got a stack of long, long stories I never posted. If anyone wants to read 'em, just send me an email!... though you might check back if I don't answer in a day or two, since my emails sometimes don't show up...)
Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 26/08/12 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 3
These chapters have been great. I just love figuring out which eps these are about. I really hope you keep going! Hope to read more soon! Thanks, Vikki
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Vikki! My time and energy levels are a bit on the low side lately, but hearing that people are enjoying (and waiting for more!) keeps me motivated. Nancy
Reviewer: galen (Signed) · Date: 26/08/12 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love this concept and please keep going with it. This is very creative and well written. I cannot wait for the phone call about Sam jumping in the pit or being souless. Great job
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like this (I was a little doubtful.) Season 5 should be up soon (and season 6 right after that) so hopefully you won't have to wait too long. Thanks for taking the time to review!
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 24/08/12 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 3
Gulp, that last call really was tragic in a way. Dean's self esteem, self loathing really came out in that call. I'm sure if Dean had to kill Sammy, he kill himself next. Yikes! I'm really loving these calls Dean is making it to his father and the progression Dean makes in the "relationship" with his father really shows in the calls. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks for all your reviews, Moira, and I'm so glad you're enjoying this! I think Dean's relationship with his dad changed (up and down and all over again) during the series, but he still felt the need to talk to him in times of stress. (I'd guess probably joy, too, except there's been very very little of that, especially lately!) Hope you like the rest of the story!
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 24/08/12 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 2
Wow, the last two talks were really sad. Dean's view of Christmas and Sam's are miles apart, Dean is trying to convince himself that the holidays were good. And the last one, god, you can really feel how frighten Dean is about going to hell.
Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 24/08/12 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 1
I really enjoy these "phone calls" or Dean's conversations with John. I believe he had these kind of conversations with John even after John's death like he did in the Dijnn world. I look forward to reading more.
Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 20/08/12 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 2
These are really good and I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for writing, and glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 18/08/12 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hi there, yes do keep posting readers are less at present but we are out there lurking in the background. More reviewers would be good too for everyone (for other folk reading this), that's what I find anyway, back to 'Hey, Dad'... I really enjoyed reading this as a reminder of various stages they've been through, and I did get every episode so well done. Yes I can see that Dean would keep in touch with John, even after his death. It would be interesting to see what else Dean needs to say to John further down the line. Nice one Jacq
Author's Response: I'm just as guilty as everyone else, because I've always been a dedicated lurker and almost never review (hangs head in shame...) I'm really glad there are folks like you who are willing to encourage us! And I'm glad you enjoyed this. I'll post season 3 next... Nancy
Reviewer: Leigh Ann Wallace (Signed) · Date: 18/08/12 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 1
It's a good story. I definitely recognized the episodes. And sure, keep posting. I'd like to read them. Are you posting anywhere else?
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement. I used to post on DeanDamage (there are a few stories there that aren't here) but they seem to be mostly defunct now, and the one time I tried to set up an account on ff.net I got some nasty malware that scared me off. *sigh* I do have a backlog of stories (and quite a few half-finished ones) that I should do something with. Any suggestions? Nancy
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