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Reviewer: jeanne (Signed) · Date: 13/09/12 10:05 PM · On: One Hell of a Campfire Story

I enjoyed the brotherly banter in your story. I also enjoyed having Dean, and Sam, for that matter facing one of their worst nightmares. I liked your introduction of each new character and the way you kept the story moving along. Good job. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I love writing brotherly banter and I'm happy to see that people enjoy reading it as well. I'm glad you enjoyed the ride.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 13/08/12 08:08 PM · On: One Hell of a Campfire Story

I'm glad they were able to save Dana and kill the demon but too bad Candy didn't survive. I can easily see how this would disturb Dean. Love Ryan calling Dean a super hero and that is the reason to keep his secret from civilians! Thanks for the wonderful story!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the ride. Thanks so much for the reviews.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 10/08/12 06:30 PM · On: What Had to be Done

What happened to chapter 13? It's not posted. I'm really looking forward to seeing how all things play out!!! Please post the last chapter, there is just the word "by" in chapter 13.

Author's Response: I posted the chapter... it just sometimes takes a while to show up on this site. Thanks so much for all your reviews. I'll be starting a new story next wk.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 10/08/12 06:27 PM · On: What Had to be Done

Dang, I was wondering where Candy had gotten off to? Now she has Dana and is threatening kill both brothers! I'm glad that Dean was able to get Pete out of his protective area and let the hellhounds have him. He deserved everything he got from those hounds. Now, I'm biting my nails wondering what is going to happen with the demon Candy!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 10/08/12 06:18 PM · On: A Different Kind of Monster

I'd think Dean is bleeding enough for Pete not to hurt him for some more. He certainly deserves to go to hell for what he brought to the area. He has no remorse for the innocent dying so he can avoid his deal. I dearly hope he gets his just dessert. Looking forward to reading the next chapter and getting all caught up with the story!!!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 10/08/12 05:56 PM · On: Keep On Fighting

So, we are back to the beginning of the story. Dean is in really bad shape (I had to cringe when he snapped his bones back into place). Now he's blacked out again and has some strange man looming over him with an amused smile on his face. I'm sure he has something to do with the epicenter of hellhounds and why they are there. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 10/08/12 05:47 PM · On: Under Attack

Crap again! Looks like Dean just jump into another frying pan after he was able to get out of the last one!!! What in the world is going on. Falling off that cliff is really bad for Dean. How in the world is he going to get out of this? I know it must be incredibly hard for Sam to stay with the campers and paint ball players with his brother out there. Seems like he has his hands full as well. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 10/08/12 05:37 PM · On: Two Battle Fronts

Crap, crap, crap! That does not sound good! Dean has been dragged down to the forest floor by a 3rd hellound! I'm glad that he was able to kill two of them but he's in real danger here. Looks like the demon/Candy did not lure Dean here but was trying to figure out herself why the hellhounds were disobeying their orders. Who or what is behind this. Looks like Tony, Chris, and Dana might wind up being hellhound chow. Chris is one nasty guy. I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 10/08/12 05:25 PM · On: And Things Get Complicated

Gulp! I did not see this cliffie coming! I'm wondering if Demon/Candy knew the Winchesters would be coming or if Dean is just a bonus for whatever they are up to. I'm sure they are what is behind the hellhounds being there. Yowza! I can't wait to read what happens next!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 10/08/12 05:16 PM · On: Debriefing the Civilians

Gulp, is it a hellhound that has trapped Dean? I hope whatever it is, Sam can get it off Dean. I knew that Chris would be a problem. I wouldn't be surprise if he leaves and breaks the salt line. Love little Ryan. Dean is so good with kids. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Reviewer: moncitymom (Signed) · Date: 07/08/12 06:35 PM · On: Keep On Fighting

Oh man you can not leave me hanging like this! Please give me another chapter!!!! Who is this smiling man and where is Sam!! Love, love your writing!

Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 30/07/12 11:12 PM · On: Under Attack

This has been a great story. I'm completely caught up in it. I can't wait to see what is is that is luring the hellhounds into the forest.
Your story telling is great and I look forward to more!
Vikki

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying the ride so far. Don't worry... answers are coming. Thanks for the compliments, they mean a lot to me.

Reviewer: moncitymom (Signed) · Date: 20/07/12 07:26 PM · On: And Things Get Complicated

I love this story! I love your writing! I would love another chapter please!! You really have a great way of telling a story and you are true to the characters. Keep up the great work and also update soon!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and all the compliments. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 14/07/12 07:47 PM · On: Surviving the First Night

I'm glad that Dean was able to kill some of the hellhounds. But seems like there are a bunch more. Wonder what is going on? A spell gone bad? It's a good thing they had enough salt to make their tents safe. If I were those campers, I'd believe everyword out of Dean and Sam's mouths after what they experienced. Looks like Chris could mean trouble, though. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much for all of the reviews. I really appreciate them. I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 14/07/12 07:44 PM · On: What You Cannot See

Man oh man, poor Dean. He has figured it out. The fuglies are hellhounds. Of all the supernatural baddies, hellhounds would be the one kind to bring terror to Dean. I love how he was able to overcome his terror and save the day. Kids seem to connect with Dean. I don't blame the child for hanging onto Dean's leg. I'm glad Dean was able to get the family back to the other campers and set up a safe perimeter. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 14/07/12 07:40 PM · On: A Long Day's Hike

I loved the banter between the brothers. It sounded right on for them. Looks like Dean and Sam are going to have their hands full with the "civilians". Sounds like some other campers are in peril. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 03/07/12 07:35 PM · On: Arrival

Looks like everything will go wrong for poor Dean. I wonder where Sam will be when Dean is running and fighting for his life with his worst nightmare that came true. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 03/07/12 07:26 PM · On: Green Skies and Red Rain

Yikes! What a beginning to your story! Right into the fire! Dean really needs something going his way right now. I hope Sam is near by and can help with the hellhounds. I'm really looking forward to reading more.

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