Supernaturalville
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/07/12 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oooh!  Very creepy.  I especially like that Dean's voice seemed small and ineffectual amidst the slithering evil surrounding him.

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 07/06/12 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.

I'm sure Frost did NOT have Purgatory in mind... but with a little tweaking - I'm sure his poem could be written a bit more hauntingly to fit Dean's state of mind as he  feels hundreds of malevolent eyes on his back...

The woods arent so lovely... but they are dark and deep and he does have promises to keep- to get back to his brother and who knows how many miles before he can rest...

I just love the ominous feel... Nicely done... you get Big Blue Ribbon hun!

Tree

Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 06/06/12 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

Ooooh! Nice and creepy. Love the descriptions of what's around him!

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