Hi Jacq,
Nice little one-shot, told from Dean's point of view. Good, intense description, I could almost hear the old boards of the mill shifting and falling as the building collapsed. I like the way that Dean hears but refuses to acknowledge that he hears Bobby. The little details are great, too, like all the wrong numbers Dean gets before getting Sam's voicemail. And the pizza special added a dash of Dean-humor to the mix.
Sue
Author's Response: Thanks Sue, tried have a little humour in the end, I admit it wasn't beta-ed, no-one around to do it for me anymore apart from my alter ego lol, but it seemed to flow ok, thanks for the stars too, love the stars! :)
Jacq
