Reviewer: sassygrl0982 (Signed) · Date: 14/03/13 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 4

i like where this story is heading.. so please do continue.. I look forward to reading more soon hopefully.

You have a technique for structure within the story and the characters also. But i feel as if you are only going about an inch deep into personalities so it doesn't hurt to delve slightly deeper.

Hope to see more soon!