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Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 12/07/07 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 5

OMG..........................

Author's Response: OMG, you nailed this story or OMG I can't believe I took the time to read this crap?????....LOL.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 12/07/07 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 4

A tatzlwurm ???!!!   okay, kel...now you gotta be pulling our leg.........

of course, you had to make it deadly poisonous and of course there will be no antidote available...now I am worried....



Author's Response: Hey, Hey now this is not of my imagining,  Blame Maggie's website for all the weird but true urban legends and folktail creatures...I don't have enough imagination to make shit like this up...lol

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 12/07/07 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 3

and the speed picks up.....a heck of a lot at this spot ....and no it has NOT been dragging....

Author's Response: Thanks for the imput Jude, I always worry I'm short on action...K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 12/07/07 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 6

wow, great ending. So she sacrificed herself... Sad but beautiful... Thanks one more time for a nice story.

Author's Response: Thanks fredo, glad you enjoyed I always appreciate your opinion...Kell

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 12/07/07 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 6

Thanks for another interesting story Kell! Great read, touching end. Can't wait for your next story - I am always cheerful when I see you posted a new one/an update. Take care :) 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment, and I'm glad you liked it....I'll be updating Snowbound next..Thanks for reading - Kell

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 11/07/07 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 6

Well, I'm glad that you managed to save Sam and Dean - but poor Sherry! This is a really great story - I think it really closely mimics the very ambiguous tone the show often has. You also touch on something the show does in that we can often change our fate/destiny/whatever, but that doesn't mean the outcome will necessarily be an unqualified happy one. Another great one to add to your finished column!

Author's Response: Thanks lam, I loved that it was a bit different from the norm.. glad to see others liked it also.  You're opinion always means a lot.. thanks as always for reviewing and reading - K

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/07 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 6

Great ending. I love the message from Sherry, telling them how much they mean. Good job K!

~Kayla



Author's Response: Thanks Kayla, I always appreciate hearing from you. - k

Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/07 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 6

Awesome ending to a wonderful story!

I'm glad Sherry sent that email so that it would in effect wipe all thoughts of guilty from Sammy's mind in that she gave her life for his.  That it was what she wanted! 

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm really glad the story worked for you...thanks for taking the time to review it really means alot - K

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/07 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 6

Okay I'm all teary-eyed!  This was not the ending I expected...actually it was much better!  Kelly you are SO gifted!  this story touched me SO much!  Somehow I know there's at least a bit of you in this character and that is why it touched me SO!  I LOVE reading everything you write and tho I don't always get a chance to read everything I am really happy I read this as you wrote it and I look forward to reading more of your AMAZING stuff!

Sorry I babbled didn't I?  Hopefully not too incoherently!

Gen



Author's Response: Gen you're always welcome to babble at me..Glad you dug the ending, and though I would not  jump in the way of a three foot long lizard like thing with poison breathe for them, I'd definately be willing to squish a spider and welcome the boys into my home with open arms..lol...thanks for taking the time to read - Kell

Reviewer: supernaturalpass (Signed) · Date: 11/07/07 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 6

I loved it! Such a good ending! You did a great job!

Author's Response: Thanks Pass, glad you dug it.  and thanks for taking the time to review -K

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 11/07/07 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 6

OMG!Sherry sacrificed her life for Sam's, it was her decision and she was serene with it .  I loved her little notes she left for the boys.  That was a poignant and beautiful ending. You did an amazing work K.

Author's Response: Thanks this one was a bit worrisome so I'm glad you liked it... thanks for the review it means so much that you took the time...K

Reviewer: justannanow (Signed) · Date: 11/07/07 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 6

This was so nice. The way Sherry and Sam are linked for so long and the various hunts the boys go on is a good way to show the passage of time. And I love the ending. It's nice to think that others would recognize the worth of the boys and be willing to sacrifice for them for a change.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely compliment.. I'm glad that the story worked for you.  Thanks as always for taking the time to let me know your thoughts..K

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/07 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 5

Your story has me on the edge of my seat.  I can't wait until the next chapter.


Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying and thanks for the review.. It really means a lot - K

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 2

Leave it to Dean to appreciate a chick with a tail............Gosh, kelly, don't want our little dreamweaver near death herself before she saves Sam

 Our poor heroes one barfs, one cleans up...poor babies...awesome as usual, kel 



Author's Response: Thanks so much, Jude.  Yeah I figure Dean wouldn't be able to resist the whole mermaid thing.  It's a good thing he's got Sam watching out for him huh? - Thanks for reading and reviewing as always.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 5

And so you bring us full circle....almost! Unless there's a twist? Maybe Sherri's gonna get in the way somehow and end up being the poisoned one? I see major pain for Sammy and major angst for Dean comin up...

I really like how you are spinning this story out - little bits and pieces that are almost chronological...



Author's Response: Thanks lam, I was worried it was too confusing but everyone seems to like it.. It's a bit different...And yes, here we go, only a chapter or two left.. K

Reviewer: supernaturalpass (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 5

Can't wait for the next chapter! You're doing a great job!

Author's Response: Thanks much Pass, glad your enjoying...Update'll be soon

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 5

So now is Sherry going to be able to help Sam? Lovely update K!

~Kayla



Author's Response: Thanks much Kayla, as always I appreciate the fact that you read it and reviewed...Yep we're winding down now... Update'll be soon.  - K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 5

ow, good good good, a lot of action, and you completed the circle, now we're where the dreams are taking place, excellent. Can't wait for more, i'm completely hooked !!!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 5

Two chapters in one day!  Wow Kelly you're on a roll.  You've got me hooked with this one.  I was working on my ch 10 and decided to check my email for work stuff and there it was a notification taunting me...then whe I saw it was for this story...well I had no choice to read!  And now after this action packed chapter that seems to be bringing us full circle with the dreams...I'm biting my nails in anticipation of the next chapter!  Woohoo KEEP IT UP! *cheering with pompoms and everything!* ;)

Author's Response: Thanks Gen, I may post the next one tonight or tomorrow, I figure the stories rolling so why not stick with it.. Thanks for the review, its always sweet to hear from you - K

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 4

O...K...I think I'm seeing where this is going now...tho I'm not sure why Sherry is all good now...Loved the scene with Sam giving Dean "the look" to get him to try to get the woman to talk!  and I could very clearly picture them hitailing it out of there with the dog on their heels!  Don't worry about the action the build up is as important...it's an art that you have definitely mastered...newbies should be taking lessons from you about timing!

Author's Response: Sherry's part in all of this will come clear soon.  Thanks so much for the compliment, gen.  All I can do is try and hope you guys dig the work.. K

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 4

hey, you just ruined my next ski vaca in the Alps !!!  Now i'm gonna spend my time looking over my shoulder for aTatzlwurm and end up in a firtree ! Ok, great chapter, really love your approach. Will they met in the next one ? And stop talking about food, fifteen minutes ago i wanted mac&cheese, and now i'm dreaming over pancakes and bacon...

Author's Response: Sorry Fredo, must have been hungry when I wrote those chapters and yeah Tatzlwurm's not something I'd like to meet while strapped to skis - LOL  K

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 09/07/07 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 4

"A cross between a pig and a wolverine" - LOL - I've seen that dog!!!

Awesome chapter - looking forward to the lizard monster.... Still love the slow build up - after all, we pretty much all know where we are heading right? It's always better to enjoy the whole trip....



Author's Response: I have drop kicked that dog, lam and the damn thing still insists on snapping at me....lol...thanks glad to see you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 09/07/07 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 4

Doing good K! Every update is so good!!!! This one was better than good...it was great! Keep it up!

~Kayla



Author's Response: Kayla, you always make me blush...I'll update soon ; )

Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 09/07/07 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 4

this is really great so far, i havnt seen anything written in quite the same way before and i am really enjoying it. 

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Maggie, glad you're enjoying it...

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 3

Ha! Mrs. Banning. Sounds like something Dean would say. Good job K! Next chapter sounds exciting!

~Kayla



Author's Response: Thanks Kayla I try ;)  Glad your digging the story....Update'll be soon. - K

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