Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 31/01/12 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great!  I was a little surprised too about Dean knowing Dungeons and Dragons.  Pawn if off on research-- that's the Dean way.

I thought it was funny that John was wrong about the mimic monster. 

When I started reading, I didn't expect Sam to laugh either.  How cute that the tip that gave away the monster was the way it said his name.  It's those little things that matter most. 

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  When I first came across the Mimic Monster, I didn't know it was related to Dungeons & Dragons--found that out as I was researching.  Then of course, I knew I had to work that in somehow!  I'm really happy to hear you liked this!