Supernaturalville
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Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 17/01/09 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

In the forum Tree remarked that you were the only Weechester writer that she read so I decided to give your stories a try.  I'm not sorry that I did.  Your characterization of wee Sammy and little Dean is great.  I can feel Dean responsibility weighing heavily on him and just little flashes of resentment while he does the best he can to take care of Sam.  I can also see Sam's growing devotion to his brother, why he would trust his brother even more than he trusts his father.  And I don't hate your daddy Winchester.  So often people write him as heartless and uncaring whereas John in your stories seems like he cares, he just lets his obsession rule him.

Thanks for the great, entertaining read.  I'm looking forward to a day of reading stories that I know I am going to enjoy.

Kim



Author's Response:

Aww bless ya! Thanks so much! *blushes*  This was the first fan fic I ever wrote so it's a little - er - rough in places!

I'm glad Daddy Winchester doesn't come over as an ogre.  I see him as bit a bit - um - distracted, but he loved his kids and did his best for them.

Hope you enjoy the other stories!

Reviewer: supernatch (Signed) · Date: 15/03/08 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very cool!  I love the little flashbacks.  They were very believable!

 Kate



Author's Response: It still amazes me that people like this story!  I'm glad you did though!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 1

OH, wow, creepy ending. Good story, though!

--c



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  This was my first fan fic so I always look back at it and wonder if it's awful!

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: maria noel (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

WOW!!! great oneshot hun....you are extremely talented!!! love it from begining to end...and what a cliffie at the end!!!!

LOVE IT!!!!!!!! 



Author's Response: I still get a real kick out of people reading this story as it was my first attempt at fan fic!  If you want to see how the story continues (which it kind of does!) and you liked the Wee!chester bits, it sort of continues in What If You Don't - but that's a very long chapter fic, so you'd have to have a lot of time on your hands!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 04/10/07 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 1

It didn’t help that you tried to convince me she was a witch, and that the mole was the source of her evil power.” - Too funny and so much something an older sibling would say..lol - K

Author's Response: Aw thanks for reading this, my very first attempt at fan fic!  I'm glad you liked that comment - I think channelling Dean is what got me into writing fan fic in the first place!

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oooh, scary! I like how you connected this all! Hoping for an update soon! If there is an update. Are you done? 'Cause this is awesome and it shouldn't be done...

Author's Response:

Hah - that's all there was of that story I'm afraid!  (It was my first attempt at fan fic!)  Although (insert shameless pimpage here...) it sort of carries on into my chapter fic What If You Don't...

Thanks a lot for reading!

Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 12/01/07 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

"She smiled again, and Dean grimaced as his younger brother smiled back. The little geek. He’d smile at anyone…"

Ha! I just had the most adorable visual with that part of the scene.

“You’re paying for that window.”

Oh Dean and his car...

I really enjoyed this read.

 



Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it!  This was my first attempt at fan fiction so I really had no idea what I was doing!

Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 29/12/06 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was awesome. Well crafted, well paced, well told. All the things I like about a story. I enjoyed the whole experience.

Thanks!



Author's Response: Aw thanks so much! As my first fan fic, I really didn't have a clue what I was doing when I wrote it...  Some might say I still don't...!

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