Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 05:14 PM · On: The Laundromat
towels...hmmmm....so much better than clothes for the guys....lets their skin breathe....healthier, don't you think, lam
Author's Response: Oh yes, soooo much healthier! I'm thinking they may have to adopt this look again in a later chapter.... Ghost in the sauna, perhaps.... Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 12:36 PM · On: The Laundromat
Hilarious---i loved the 2 ladies walking in and catching the brothers nearly naked!--(and wouldn't we all like to see them that way! Next chapter, I vote for Things that go bump in the night!
Author's Response: Thanks again for reviewing! Yep, pretty much everyone's dream.... Still counting up the votes...
Reviewer: Sammygirl1963 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 12:24 PM · On: A Vision of Lovliness, Not!
Awesome chapter! Poor Dean getting thown up on---eewww-- so not good!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! It was pretty gross wasn't it? But then, he had to get cleaned up - nobody could expect him to just let that sit on him.....
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 11:07 AM · On: The Laundromat
lol Mrs Conclusion and Mrs Premise! Golden! Not too much dialogue tho I could have done with a more descriptive shower scene ;) and I wish the towel had fallen while they ran back to the car! Keep it up Lam You got me smilin' I look forward to the next installment! I vote for what happened at the library *aggles eyebrows* never know about those librarians!
Author's Response: Hey gengen! You win the prize!!! I'm pretty sure you're the only one who got the MP reference to Mrs C and Mrs P. Sooo in the event of a tie in voting, you get the deciding vote! You'll be happy to hear that it won't be who you would expect to be naked in a library.... Unless you're thinking the naughty factor instead of the obvious factor - ok stopping now, I'm confusing myself! Thanks for the review - hope to keep everyone smiling with this one!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 10:40 AM · On: A Vision of Lovliness, Not!
Naked Dean...taunt muscles...stiff nipples...What can I say other than...Is it hot in here? lol this was great light reading! Hope to read about more nakedness and I think I have the same bias as you!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I guarantee that there will be nakedness in every chapter... Mucho, mucho hotness.... And really, I don't mind seeing Jared without his clothes on either....
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 09/07/07 11:10 PM · On: The Laundromat
showers and laundromat, that's a well-done job ! Exactely what i was waiting for, excellent, description and dialogues just perfect, you need to let a little part at the imagination... I vote for "What happened at the library" 'caus too curious to see how you can drive them to end naked in a library... Thanks for that.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the vote, Fredo! I'm pretty sure I can get them naked anywhere.... Oh to be in Vancouver.... So far voting is tied, so I may have to throw my own vote in to decide...
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 09/07/07 10:57 PM · On: The Laundromat
Ohhh, great one, lam and so made me smile... didn't catch who the ladies were though, I'm going to find it now.. my vote is for Library.. It's a dream of mine to find Sam Dean in my fav of all places - LOL
Author's Response: Thanks K - the smile is the whole point! ;) The ladies are actually from a Monty Python sketch - that just happens to be set (for no particular reason) in a laundromat. She spent 4 hours burying the cat because said cat wasn't dead, but they were going away on vacation and felt the cat would be dead when they got home.... doesn't translate nearly as funny as the original.... Still adding up votes for next chappie!
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 09/07/07 10:50 PM · On: The Laundromat
ahhhhhh. Our boys in towels...I wish I could be a bystander watching everything going down in that laundromat! Good job. And if I had to pick the next chapter....I would go with "Things that go bump in the night" Sounds interesting! :0) ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I often think the boys are just a tad overdressed on the show - I will do my best to make sure that the towels make another appearance in a later chapter too.... Still tallying votes on next installment.
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 09/07/07 06:44 AM · On: A Vision of Lovliness, Not!
That was a giggle. And I must thank you for nearly naked Dean - you made my bout of flu much more bearable with those word pictures - thank you, hon! Jules
Author's Response: Thank you for dragging yourself off your sick bed to review!!!! Soooo good to have you back here too! More nearly naked and actually naked *grins evilly* coming your way as soon as it's validated - I just submitted a new chappie this am! Naked Sammy in this one too.... Couldn't leave "little" bros out now could I?
Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 29/06/07 08:44 PM · On: A Vision of Lovliness, Not!
"Planning on him being hot in the next chapter though...." Aw, honey... is there a time when he *isn't* hot? Looking forward to what you come up with next.
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 28/06/07 10:25 PM · On: A Vision of Lovliness, Not!
Dean really should not have told Sam to "spill it' at the end there unless he knew Sam was running on empty or he had more clean clothes in the trunk... No WINCHESTER should ever tempt fate.... Great Descriptive abilities here, Lam,felt like we could almost smell the soap and see that sculpted torso..oh yeah...Thanks
Author's Response: How did I miss responding to your review?! Thank you for the awesome feedback - always much appreciated. And by the by - much more sculpted torsos to come....
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 27/06/07 08:53 PM · On: A Vision of Lovliness, Not!
So we don't even know what Sam's vision was? Please don't leave us hanging for long! It's a great start! Please continue soon! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Um?OOpps. I'll have to be more careful in tying up loose ends. The next chapter actually doesn't deal with the vision; just another excuse to have the boys less than fully dressed... Hmmmm You've really got me thinking now! Back to the drawing board.... I'll make sure to add in the answer to your question! Thanks for the great response! This is going to really help with the next chapter...
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 27/06/07 01:06 AM · On: A Vision of Lovliness, Not!
Hehe...my bias is your bias! This was fun lam, go right ahead with my blessing. People could write in with suggestions for locations... next the laundromat, after that who knows? That sounds like I'm talking about something else - minds out of the gutter everyone! And I think I may have just reached a reviewing milestone lam - very happy to have reached it reviewing your story. Thanks again!
Author's Response: You go girl - 500 reviews - WOW! I gave up chasing you a while ago. Life is heating up for me, so I'm getting behind on everything! I may have to ask for suggestions on locations - I've got a few scenarios worked out but would gladly take requests..... Dean, well what can you say... He looks good in clothes and he looks good outta them... Think I have to throw the Sammy girls a bone from time to time though. And thanks for the awesome review!
Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 02:35 PM · On: A Vision of Lovliness, Not!
Ah-HA! You did it AGAIN! The nipple thing with Dean gets me every time. *Gaelic happily stares off into Dean-space* Loved this: "Dean knew he was in chick-flick hell..." Haha! Nice little ditty -- and I love 'em in laundromats. Go for it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I just lOVE it when Dean is naked AND cold.... Planning on him being hot in the next chapter though....
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 02:00 PM · On: A Vision of Lovliness, Not!
found recently several references to laundromat in some stories, and love it ! Chapter two can be all about it... Because there's gonna be a chapter two right ? 'caus first one really good, gross (i can handle crap, or mold, but when it comes to vomit i always call hubby!), and hotness, thank god nobody was driving around or it could have ended in a real pile-up ! And be biased my friend, be biased...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Coming soon - serious hotness at the laundromat! Not just from the dryers - promise. Seriously, the title of chapter two is The Laundromat.
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 12:23 PM · On: A Vision of Lovliness, Not!
darn, some how i readthis and forgot to rate it!! oh, by the way...puking on someone really ranks up there on the grossness factor!! poor Dean!! bambers;)
Author's Response: Can't seem to get away from that puking thing... Actually, it all stems from how hot Dean looks when he is gagging just before burning Ellicot's bones in Asylum - really, I'm sure it's not just me - check it out...
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 10:04 AM · On: A Vision of Lovliness, Not!
ROFLMAO....that was great. I loved the image of naked Dean causing a 40 car pile up........lol or naked Dean doing just about anything.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Must admit Dean less than fully clothed is burned into my retinas... But think how guilty he'd feel if he caused an accident....
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 08:58 AM · On: A Vision of Lovliness, Not!
lol...darn i was hoping some women would drive by and get a look at Dean's hotness in all its glory!!! awesome story!! any time you haveone of the boys stripped down, it is bound to be a success!! Bambers;)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I have such a hard time sharing - except with you guys! Much more strippage to come....
Reviewer: emmahr (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 08:57 AM · On: A Vision of Lovliness, Not!
haha i loved it
Author's Response: Yeah! Thanks!
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 08:05 AM · On: A Vision of Lovliness, Not!
It's a toss up for me,no pun intended lam. Vomit is the one thing that makes me well....vomit, Ugh. But a naked Dean on the side of the road, well now that's just pretty much genius. Gotta love how we like to get those boys clean, even if it's just a spit bath on the side of the road...LOL kell
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I seem to be stuck on vomit for some reason.... My plan, such as it is, is to have the boys less than dressed in as many interesting places as I can think of....
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 26/06/07 07:21 AM · On: A Vision of Lovliness, Not!
I liked it, funny, fast moving, Dean undressed. Hell it's damn near perfect!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it - there's more where that came from.....
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