Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 25/02/08 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 3
*gulp* ... *pant pant pant* wow, I'm really glad I didn't read this at work! Hee hee hee. Like we all haven't imagined how Dean would be in bed!! I think you captured him perfectly. Glad you posted this.. -- c
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 25/02/08 04:57 PM · On: The Laundromat
this line had me laughing hours later... "We are never doing our laundry anywhere else, ever again." The two older ladies kept stealing furtive glances at the boys. --c
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 3
*thud* oh.......my........gosh...... heading for a cold shower now. Agree with the other sentiments - Dean is a giver. And man, can he give.... wow..........*thud*
Author's Response: So THIS is what happens when I write exams.... Another set coming up in April - Lord knows what will happen then!!! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 01:25 AM · On: The Laundromat
Hmm, another one that I missed reviewing - gee, I'm getting rusty in my old age. Mmmmmmmm, naked Dean........... *sigh* Always a winner in my book. And for a special bonus - naked Sam.........*sigh* Didn't get the significance of the two ladies - umm, Monty Python, perhaps? Ugh, give up while you're behind, Jules.... Nice work, Lisa *grins*
Author's Response: Totally not behind, Jules - it WAS Monty Python! Hubby and I have quite the chuckle over their "rat bags"..... Thanks so much for the review!!!!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 07/01/08 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 3
*fans self furiously* Is it just me, or is it hot in here....... "Don't be surprised..." his hand was on the door, he ducked his head, looking up through his lashes and smiled again. And then he was gone. I love your closing......it kinda ends sweetly...i just had my shower before reading this, but i think i should have another one before going to bed...LOL
Reviewer: Arafel979 (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh my...popped on to see if you had updated another story and I found this little piece of Heaven! LOVED that she talked him into staying for that extra hour and those last words of "then he was gone."-perfect! Love your stuff!-and yeah, I'm going to call hubby now and see if he can come home early tonight!
Reviewer: Amy Leigh Evans (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 3
*o* Wow.
Reviewer: POOKEE (Signed) · Date: 20/12/07 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 3
lam, WOW! ALL I CAN SAY IS THANK GOD FOR UNWINDING FROM POST-EXAM AND PRE-CHRISTMAS STRESS!!! *DRINKS ANOTHER SHOT OF TEQUILA* GREAT PIECE OF WRITING OR SHOULD I SAY FOREPLAY. MANY CHAPTERS HAVE BEEN WRITTEN REGARDING DEAN'S TENDER AND FULFILLING LOVEMAKING BUT NONE EXAMINED THE REASONS BEHIND IT, THE CULTIVATION OF IT, BUT YOU NAILED IT (EXCUSE THE PUN). MASTERFULLY WRITTEN, CARRY ON WAYWARD AUTHOR, POOK *GOD I NEED ANOTHER SHOT OF TEQUILA*
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the great review and the stars!!! Loved the pun..... hmmmm tequila - that sounds like a plan!
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 19/12/07 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 3
You haven't been around so much lately, and then you show up with THIS????? Holy wow woman!
Author's Response: Ciel! Thanks so much for the review! I've been crazy busy these last few months - 2 jobs and law school full time.... I'm blaming this excursion into a new realm on exam stress - that's my story, and I'm sticking to it....
Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 19/12/07 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 3
Bless, don't be shy, they never see any action! I think you have D to a T. "she could tell that he was totally in this moment", yep that sums it up! DIx
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely review and the stars! It's always great to hear that my vision of Dean is in line with everyone else's - that's what I'm trying for!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 19/12/07 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 3
damn was i happy than hubby came home only fiften minutes after i read that! Cause i never enjoyed cold showers... And well, i think he was happy too...
Author's Response: Glad you liked it Fredo! Thanks for looking it over and giving it the thumbs up! Just a little xmas present for the Amazons and their families....
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 3
okay, very long cold shower needed, lisa!! was going to wait to read this but, well...i just couldn't wait...and now hubby is sleeping...and i need a cold shower, damn you!! great job!!! bambers;) did i happen to mention i now need a cold shower...frigidly cold shower!! lol!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Bambers!!! And stars!!!! I know you get told this all the time - but you really do rock... A little xmas present for the Amazons and their family.....
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 3
lol....wow lam.....you're amazingly....versatile....lol.... heh heh heh....lovin' it.......
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and the stars!!! See what evil mid-term exams will do to an author....
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 3
i need a shower and i seriously have this strong urge to watch that certain route 666 scene again... oy... that enough review fer ya? *grins*
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm still blushing but I'm so relieved that people enjoyed it! I really liked that scene in Route 666 - but you probably already figured that out....
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 06:50 PM · On: A Vision of Lovliness, Not!
That was hilarious and a delight to envision.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! The point is for these to all be light-hearted for a change....
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 3
WOW....I mean...WOW. I mean, uh, THANKS :-0 Hubby sends his thanks as well ;)
Author's Response: Heheheheeheee! Still blushing here.... God - can you imagine what I'm gonna come up with after finals in April? These were just mid-terms.... Thanks for all the feedback Kel!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 10:23 AM · On: The Laundromat
What a laugh riot! I don't have a favorite part because they're all so darn good! Those lucky old ladies!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 10:19 AM · On: A Vision of Lovliness, Not!
Dean bathing on the side of the highway. Now that's something I wish I could see. I'm sure you do, too!
Reviewer: Katieelessar (Signed) · Date: 11/08/07 05:55 PM · On: The Laundromat
Haha! That was great! I vote for 'Things that go bump in the night' for the next chapter. It sounds promising...:) Loved this story!
Reviewer: ThePasserby (Signed) · Date: 09/08/07 09:45 PM · On: The Laundromat
"What happenned at the library" -definitely. Kepp em coming.
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 12:53 PM · On: The Laundromat
Ohmygosh! Funny! No, I don't know where the ladies came from. Where did they come from? Please write more of this!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for letting me know you thought it was funny! The ladies are from a Monty Python sketch - probably a little before your time?... Really funny stuff if you're not familiar with it. I'm trying my hardest to get back to this and get another chapter up...
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 12:51 PM · On: A Vision of Lovliness, Not!
Ha ha ha! Dean, undressed, on the side of the road. Boy, would I cause an accident if I drove by that...Man, that's hilarious. And totally awesome.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Kinda makes you want to take a road trip and find that highway, doesn't it???
Reviewer: iriseyes (Signed) · Date: 12/07/07 01:39 PM · On: The Laundromat
dialoge was great but not nearly enough description. i think " what happened at the library" sounds good. as always just good to read.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I think it will be library next! I'll try for a little more description in the next one....
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 12/07/07 01:27 AM · On: The Laundromat
Doesn't matter which you write first, as long as you write! Great dialogue, tasteful description,(VERY tasteful, I'm proud of you!) and a hilarious scenario. Thank you so much, I've been looking out for this!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely review. I'm sooo glad you found it funny! I drove by a 24 hour laundromat tonight and had to really control myself from going in - it did make me laugh!
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 05:24 PM · On: The Laundromat
Hahah Man i would never of thought to do that to anyone. HAHAHA good job!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I have many evil thoughts - about the boys.....naked.....
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