Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 01/01/12 11:56 AM · On: Chapter One: Reasons for Moving

Gulp, I wasn't expecting that ending at all! Yikes, I hope Mary is alright. I like how you introduced Jo and Bobby. I have a feeling Dean is gonna need Bobby more than ever. This Dean seems so disconnected and lonely. I'm really looking forward to the next  chapter.

Author's Response: I am glad that you enjoyed the new chapter! I wanted to dive right into the main story plot, so I introduced it at the end of the chapter. You'll see if Mary is alright by the end of the story. :) This Dean is very disconnected and lonely. I feel that although losing his mother was extremely painful, losing his father would be five times worse. Young boys are typically close to their fathers, and I could picture John as the type of father who threw the football around, took him to sporting events, taught him about cars, and generally spent a lot of bonding time together. Therefore, I tried to keep Dean fundamentally the same personality-wise, but also tried to make him more disconnected.