Wow! This is such a well written, action packed, great idea of a story! I love it so much!

~Kayla

Author's Response:

Thanks Kayla!

That is such a nice thing to say and it makes me happy that you think that! I hope you continue to enjoy this and another update is happening in another few minutes!

oohhh...awesome start!! can't wait to see where this leads...i've seen those time of death things on here...cool to base a story on that!! awesome job, bamabers;)

Author's Response:

Thanks, bambers!

I've always been fascinated but those sites and I thought it was a good idea for a story. Happy that you are enjoying!

owww gooood ! Can't wait to see if you'll gonna give us that freak shoe accident or save your ass by making the Winchesters save Monica's...

Author's Response:

Thanks, fredo!

I promise you you are going to get your freak shoe accident. I am so excited about how that one's going to happen and I can't wait until it comes up!

YIKES! Very cool. I'm thinking that Dean is going to surf the site 'cuz they know his time of death and therefore, they can see how accurate the site is....?

Author's Response:

Thanks, lam!

That's a very good assumption, but of course, I can't tell you if you're right or not!

Another update soon!

nice solid chapter...just enough angst....looking forward to more of the same quality.

Author's Response:

Thanks, jude!

I'm trying to make sure I have a fair mixture of angst, action, humor, and everything else so I'm glad you are liking it!

Thanks a lot!

yeah, good... Dean's own countdown perfectly fits in the story. I wonder if you're going to put his name on that site to see what it says. And loved the parallel you made between both brothers feelings. And what the hell did he do with that waitress ??!!

Author's Response:

Thanks fredo!

I think Dean won't be able to stop himself from seeing what the countdown would say. I loved writing the thoughts for Dean and Sam, so I like that you enjoyed it.

We'll find out what Dean did with the waitress before story'e end!

Like that it's set after AHBL...I'll be interested to see how their dealing (or not in Dean's case)  thanks for the read - K

Author's Response:

Thanks kwater!

It's fun to take this one form where AHBL left off...so much angst material I am only too happy to use it to my benefit!

You can really feel the boys' closeness in this chapter  sam - all they can think about is each other's pain. It's such a horrible situation to be in, and we're all going to be on angst overload about it I'm sure. How could we not? Update again soon - Dean's so dangerous when he's mischievous!

Author's Response:

Thanks ciel!

It means so much to me that you think I am doing good by expressing the brothers' feelings. They just have all of this pent up emotions that's begging to burst out.

And yep...Dean is very dangerous when he's up to something!

Lovin' this! 

And still not doing it!  Hehehehehe

Great job Steph!

Author's Response:

Thanks, Laura!

I just don't get it...what is it going to take for me to get you to post on yours faster? I mean I kiss your ass any chance I get!

Seriously, thanks for your hard work and I'm happy you are lovin' this!

Hey read this earlier and didn't have time to review..Just wanted to tell you it's a great opening...Thanks for the read....K

Author's Response:

Thanks, kwater!

I'm happy you enjoyed the opening and continue to enjoy the rest!

I really hate those freak shoe accidents!

 Great start.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Laura!

You know...now I really gotta work on this freak shoe accident and make it a good one...

Thanks again for your work and support, sweetie!

  yes yes yes, so exciting !!! A first chapter without a Winchester in sight and you already got me hooked, pretty good sign ! But, hum, any chance we learn more about what a freak shoe accident can be ?!...

Author's Response:

Thanks, fredo!

So happy you enjoyed this first chapter! As for the freak show accident...we're gonna have to work on that one! I needed something so ridiculous and that was the first thing that popped into my head. I sometimes worry about me...

Thanks again!