Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 19/07/07 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 5
Dean's hair is PINK, lol. Sam succeeded to piss off his brother. Sam is very good at this game. Hmmm...What'll be Dean's counterattack. Now it's Monica turn to die. Hope Dean and Sam'll figure out soon who's doing this before there're more deaths. I enjoy very much this story so far, great work Stephanie, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks, Oceane! Sammy is very good at this game, isn't he? You would never know by looking at him. And don't worry...Dean will have some payback for it! I think the boys better figure out something and fast!
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 19/07/07 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 5
Sam went on as if he didn’t hear him. “No, seriously. Most men couldn’t pull it off, but you do it very well.” Ha! He could pull off pink, green, blue, hell even purple *laugh* Poor Dean. And how Monica died...sheesh! Great work. -SJ
Author's Response: Thanks again, SJ! Yes, Dean could pull off any color and before I wrote that I spoke to my beta and we both agreed pink would suit him just fine! And Monica...poor girl...all I can say is that I am a very twisted individual...
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 19/07/07 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 4
I really like how you addressed Dean's resignation to his year left. Really creepy that he wasn't the least bit taken by this web site knowing about his deal. Poor guy. And Sam...what is he up to? *goes to read next chapter* -SJ
Author's Response: Thanks SJ! I really love getting into Dean's emotions...he's just so much fun to play with! He is just bursting with emotion, but needs a little poking every now and then!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 19/07/07 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 5
awesome chapter Steph, loved it ! Pink hair and green hat, friggin' excellent ! And i'm never again gonna go in a shoe store without thinking at this story ! Ang god i love shoe stores... So Ben now, a beautiful woman, yeah, think it's so not gonna happen how he thinks it would...
Author's Response: Thanks Fredo! I thought the green hat would go well with the pink hair...lol! I told ya'll the shoe accident was going to be good and if it now freaks you out to go into a shoe store, then I did it right!
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 18/07/07 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 5
I loved the pink hair! And the shoe thing was great. Fabulous chapter Stephanie! Laura
Author's Response: Thanks, Laura! You know how excited I was about both those things...I'm so happy it's finally out there now! Thanks again for your hard work! Much appreciated!
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 18/07/07 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 5
I can't tell if that would be a good way to die or not. I mean...I would be amongst some of my most favorite things in the world. but haveing a stiletto heel going through my temple would probably put a crimp in the day. Great update! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks, Kayla! Yes, I love shoes as well and I wouldn't want to be killed by any of them, though I have a few that could do some pretty good damage! Glad you are liking this!
Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 4
is cool!! especially w/ prank games!!! is funny!!!! good job! i will love that dean told sam how he really feel!! and what normal stuff dean wanna do before u knoww .........???...
Author's Response: Thanks, Rebecca! I am thrilled you are enjoying this! I like Dean surprising you guys every now and then. You just never know what will come from him!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 4
Dean tested the website, that's so him, things he would do to protect Sam. What Sam put in Dean shampoo, can't wait to know, lol. That was great Stephanie, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, Oceane! Yes, it is amazing what Dean would do to protect Sam. As for what Sam put in his shampoo, it will be revealed in the next chapter!
Reviewer: Ice54 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 4
Yay, a new chapter. Why did Dean this? Stupid. Hope Sammy find this out. i like this story :-)
Author's Response: Thanks, Ice! Dean did this because he's just being his normal self. Sam will find out soon enough! Thanks for reviewing and I'm happy you are liking this!
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 14/07/07 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 4
Why did Dean test the site!!! noo!!!! This can't be good. Lovely update! Seriously, I need another update and soon! :) ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks, Kayla! Dean tested the site because he's, well...Dean! Another update will be coming at you shortly!
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 14/07/07 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter, loved that Dean signed on to the website in case Sam did it later and put himself in danger. And this is a terrific line:
It seemed to Dean everyone had his name as of late. But he supposed that was the life and curse of being a Winchester—when it rains, it really does pour.
Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks, ciel! That line seems to be really popular among everyone! But it really is the truth if we just stop and take a look at our boys! Dean's going to protect Sam no matter what and no matter how mad Sam may get. Glad you enjoyed this and thanks again!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 14/07/07 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 4
that site is super creepy !!! Sure thing, when you're a Winchester, when it rains, it really does pour, no doubt. Loved your exploration of Dean's feelings, about his death to come, about Sam, about the life time he had left... But the important point now is that it's high time for Dean to go take a shower and wash his hair...
Author's Response: Thank, fredo! I loved getting into Dean's feelings and glad you enjoyed it! Dean is jumping in the shower now as we speak...
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 13/07/07 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 4
Another great and wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, Laura! Thank you again so much for your help! Much appreciated!
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 13/07/07 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter. Really like how you handle Dean's feelings over the deal. Fav. line: "curse of being a Winchester - when it rains it really does pour." Can't wait to see what's in the shampoo - pink hair maybe? We know he can carry off blue....! That website is SUPER creepy!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, lam! So happy you are enjoying this. I wanted to get into Dean's feelings with this deal, about how it's affecting him. The prank will be revealed in the next chapter!!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 13/07/07 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 4
Well, we know it wouldn't be Nair or any other Hair remover ..... because that was done to death in the episode 'Hell House'....coming up blank on the hair treatment tube.... more than a little scared of that website....especially with Dean's name on it ....
Author's Response: Thanks, jude! Sam's prank will be revealed in the next chapter and rest assurred, it is not Nair or any other hair removal. And yeah, the site is freaky...we'll just have to see what happens with Dean!
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/07 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 3
They better not go to that site...*sigh* But I know they will. :) "Let the games begin..." Heck yes! *rubs hands together* More please. -SJ
Author's Response: Thanks again, SJ! You've been a busy girl today! And you know the boys have to check that site...they are Winchesters, after all! And yes, the games are about to begin....Dean has thrown down the gauntlet!
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/07 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 2
Hit by a bus...*shiver* Final Destination just went through my head. *sigh* That is seriously no way to go. Good work, I'm off to read more. -SJ
Author's Response: Thanks, SJ! I tried to make this death I guess as gruesome as I could, but leaving enough for your imagination...I am evil! I was never a fan of Final Destination...never could get finished with that movie!
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/07 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
"Dean wasn’t stupid. He didn’t fall out of a stupid tree and hit every branch on the way down." I laughed so hard at that. Angst all over the place, and Dean's just trying to have some fun before he...yeah...the thing we shall not speak of. Great work! -SJ
Author's Response: Thanks, SJ! I love that line as well as did my beta. And I am trying to balance out the angst and humor in this one and I am glad you are enjoying this!
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/07 08:37 AM · On: Prologue
Oooo. New story! I laughed at the freak shoe accident. I wanted to compliment you on your style. I really like how you're confident enough to open a story without the aid of the brothers. Seriously. People avoid the show's format when writting stories because they're afraid that no one will read if the boys don't make an appearance right away. Bt SNSam I love that you start out this way. Makes it feel more like the show and shows your ability to create characters that hold our attention. :) Anyway, I'm done yapping, off to chapter 2.
Author's Response: Thanks, SJ! This review means so much to me, you just have no idea. For you to say this to me is just incredible and I am only happy I can give you something you enjoy! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 3
I love when they do this! Practical jokes are always so funny! Nice update! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks Kayla! Yes, the pranks are always fun! Now I just got to go grab me a few of them for the boys!
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 3
Really enjoyed this chapter too sam. Great dialogue: Dean getting distracted all the time and Sam trying to get him to focus is completely true-to-type...... although I have often suspected that Dean does that to wind Sam up! Well done. See you again soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, ciel! Your kind words mean the world to me and I am thrilled you are enjoying this! And I think you may be right about Dean...he sure does love to push Sam's buttons and he knows how to do it well!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 3
Prank's war, bring it on. Can't wait to know what'll happen when they'll look at this website. Captivating story so far.
Author's Response: Thanks, Oceane! They will log on to the website very soon and Sam will have a little fun of his own...
Reviewer: Ice54 (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 3
I'm excited! That is an interesting Story! I like it so far :-)
Author's Response: Thanks, Ice! I am so glad you are enjoying this so far!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 3
oh yes let's the game begin... You're so good at that ! Loved the survivor cell phone. And love this story plot, can't wait to see what they gonna do when checking out the website... More more more...
Author's Response: Thanks, fredo! I am so happy you are enjoying this! And thank you so much for your kind words!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 07/07/07 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh yeah, the pranksters return....love it.....really good story so far......love the survivor cell phone.....they certainly must go thru them like water...........really good dialogue
Author's Response: Thanks Jude! I love snary, funny Winchesters and I love doing my part with them! The cell phone bit hit me all of a sudden and I had to put it in there! Thanks again!
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