Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 18/10/07 02:16 PM · On: Epilogue
Good beginning that set it up like a real episode of SN. You had the teaser in the beginning that started the story & kind of let you let you know what the case may be. Then you transitioned to the brothers in the next chapter. Great interpretation of Sam’s feelings, emotions & thoughts during the end scene of AHBL2 (chapter 2). Very real conversation between the two brothers (especially the last scene when talking about the deal. That a is tricky conversation b/c you can't make it too emotional & mushy b/c that's not them but you can't have it be impersonal & stoic b/c that's not them either, you found a good balance between the two & did that scene justice. You seemed to really get them into both their head’s. You created a clear picture due to your writing. Nice original idea & it kept me hooked throughout the whole thing. You also had good original characters that seemed real & helped develop & progress the story.
Author's Response: Thanks Kumaproogey! I really love for my fics to read like episodes because I really try to stay true to what Kripke and Co. have done. I'm thrilled you loved my idea and you thought my scenes with the boys enjoyable. I love writing their scenes and I really try to stick to their personalities as I write them. I'm also happy you liked my OCs--that's the thing that always throws me because I'm not sure if people will like them or not. You really don't want them to steal the spotlight from the boys, so I try my best not to do that. Thanks again!
Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 27/08/07 04:57 PM · On: Epilogue
Absolutely fabulous!!! Loved the plot and you really portrayed the boys' relationship to a 'T'. You make it look so easy with such a fantastic piece of work Well done!!! Bxxxx
Author's Response: Thanks buttercup! Wow, I'm extremely flattered by this review! I am so happy you loved this and think it's great! That really touches me so deeply...thank you so much!
Reviewer: malay (Signed) · Date: 12/08/07 04:56 AM · On: Epilogue
At last this story end. The pranks were cool. Well done. They made me laugh. The boys managed to solve the case as usual. Perfect score. I already printed it out for my collections. You are a humorist, you know that don't you?
Author's Response: Thanks malay! I am really happy you enjoyed this story as I had a lot of fun writing it. And yes, I do love to do the humor because I feel I can bring some of my personality into the story. I feel I've done it right if I was able to make you laugh! Again, thank you so much for your kind words!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 11/08/07 08:02 PM · On: Epilogue
Been reading this on ff.net---Great Ending!!!!!!!:) Not talking about the prank (which was cute and a good way to soften the seriousness) but the final conversation from "we need to talk" to "thank you Dean".
Author's Response: Thanks GotTheShining! I am happy you enjoyed this, especially the conversation. I love doing those moments between the brothers and I am glad it is appreciated. Thanks again for letting me know what you think!
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 11/08/07 06:57 PM · On: Epilogue
Terrific story from start to finish sam. I loved it that they had the "talk", and you lightened it up very well with the prank at the end. Well done, you!
Author's Response: Thanks ciel! I had to end the story on a light note and I couldn't think of a better way than that prank! Thanks for all of your wonderful support...it means the world to me!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 11/08/07 06:20 PM · On: Epilogue
Great ending. I loved the heart to heart conversation between the brothers. Sam messing with Dean's car, he won thr prank war big time, lol. You did a wonderful work with this story Stephanie. I'm looking forward for your next one.
Author's Response: Thanks, Oceane! I am thrilled you liked this story! You have been such a big supporter of mine and I appreciate every single word you have left me. I also look forward to seeing you for my next story!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 11/08/07 12:35 PM · On: Epilogue
This wa a great little story, Steph....I really looked forward to each and every chapter.....Thank you...
Author's Response: Thanks Jude! I am so happy you enjoyed it and all of your kind words you left me. And you are quite welcome...it was my privelege!
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 11/08/07 08:25 AM · On: Epilogue
>>Sam looked away but not before Dean saw a tear trail down his cheek. “Dean, you had to know when you made the deal, you did it for the both of us.” Dean shook his head vehemently. “You better not be saying what I think you are, Sam.” Sam shrugged. “What makes you think I’ll be able to go on when you’re gone, Dean? Like you said, there would be no point.” Dean looked at Sam angrily. “God dammit, Sam…” Good for Sam. I do believe that Dean's deal was a beautiful and sad and huge sacrifice. But I will admit I was peeved at him, just because he knew what that felt like. He knew where Sam would stand after this. So glad you touched on that. >> Dean wasn’t hearing any of it. “You messed with my damn car!” Hee! Very nice way to end this, SNSam! Looking forward to more of your stories! -SJ
Author's Response: Thanks, SJ! I really do think Sam may be playing with that thought in the back of his mind. And I think there is a ring of truth to it...when Dean made the deal, he made it for the both of them. And yeah, Sam had to pull one more on Dean and what better way than to strike the Impala. Here's hoping Sam will be around for the next one... Thanks again!
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 09:30 PM · On: Epilogue
Although I'm sad that this is the end of the story, I couldn't have hoped for a better ending. It was perfect. Thank you for sharing this! ~kayla
Author's Response: Thanks, Kayla! It really was my honor to share this with you guys! I had so much fun writing it and I am so happy you enjoyed it! Thanks again for all of your wonderful words and support!
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 06:02 PM · On: Epilogue
I loved the talk...and the crossed wires! Great story.
Author's Response: Thanks Laura! I love chick-flick moments between the boys as much as the next person, so I had to include one in this! And yes, had to let Sam have the last laugh...until Dean kills him, that is! Thanks again for your hard work!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 02:23 PM · On: Epilogue
very nice epilogue Steph, the parallel thoughts, the talk, the prank... Great story. Will be there for the next one !
Author's Response: Thanks, Fredo! I really wanted to get these emotions out in this last chapter and I am happy you liked it! And of course, I had to do one more prank! Next chapter will be up soon! Thank you so much for sticking with me like you have!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 9
alright, Sam.....now for the Demon ????what's next....how will it end??
Author's Response: Thanks again, Jude! Yes, Sam's got one down, one major one to go! Next chapter is now posted!
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 8
why is Sam so argumentative and mean.......he's never like that??? pms
Author's Response: Thanks, jude! I don't mean for Sam to be like that...I guess we can attribute it to PMS...he's suffering or I am... Hope you're not upset by this chapter!
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 9
A great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks Laura! You have been such a great help to me and I truly appreciate everything you've done for me! You rock!
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 08/08/07 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 9
I had to copy this whole section because it made me laugh out loud! “Let me see if I have this right, Sammy—you are going to turn a spirit onto another human being?” “If it gets you out of this, you bet your ass I will.” “Doesn’t that go against your entire code of ethics, every fiber of your being?” “Dean, do you want me to do this or not?” “Oh, hell yes, I want you to do it, it’s just…” Dean’s voice trailed off. “What is it, Dean?” “Hell, Sammy…I’ve never been more proud of you in my life.” Dean’s face broke into a cocky grin. “Shut up Terrific stuff! I'll be sad to see the story end too, it's been a great ride! Many thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks ciel! yeah, that section makes me laugh, too! Like I said, I love mixing in the humor right in the middle with all the seriousness. Makes it more fun for me! Thanks again for all of your wonderful support! Last chapter up very soon!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 9
Sammy's idea worked, thank god. Terrific chapter, can't wait to know how the story'll end.
Author's Response: Thanks, Oceane! Sammy is a clever one, isn't he? The last chapter will hopefully be up tonight!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 9
haha, love it when Sam's playing dirty !
Author's Response: Thanks Fredo! Yes, our Sammy sure can play dirty with the best of them...Don't let the innocent face fool you!
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 9
Oh my...So glad to see that Dean wasn't taken too early. Just hope that Sam really can figure out something to save Dean before his year is up. Great way to start bringing this story to an end! But with all ends of your stories I get sad... -SJ
Author's Response: Thanks SJ! Yes, our Dean couldn't be taken too early...I would never do that to our boys! And yes, it's coming to an end and I'm sad about it, too! Just one more chapter left...*runs off to cry*
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 9
Uh, this was a close call! I really liked this chapter. Very well written. So Dean has been saved by the bell - for now... I'm curious where you will take us in the final chapter. By the way, thanks for your cute comment :)
Author's Response: Thanks Soennelchen! I am very happy you are enjoying this! And yep, Sam has managed to get Dean out of this fine mess he got himself into... As for the next chapter...I'm wrapping things up and may have a tiny bit more fun...
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 9
yay, I'm so glad you got this chapter up so soon. Another splendid chapter to add to the rest. ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks Kayla! That is so sweet and it means so much to me. I am so happy you have enjoyed this story! Thanks for all of your wonderful and kind words!
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 8
I was wondering if Dean was ever going to catch on that he could just re-dye his hair. *laugh* Their banter got a little heated this round and poor Sam doesn't know how much he can take... And then that end! It's coming for them...or maybe just Dean...Since he's the one who decided a website names "Time of Death" would be oodles of fun to check out. *laugh* Great work! Eagerly awaiting the next installment! -SJ
Author's Response: Thanks, SJ! I had to have Sam point that out to Dean, mostly because everyone kept pointing it out to me! I odn't know why Dean or I never thought about it before! And yes, it's coming for them...these boys just can't seem to stay out of trouble! Another update very soon!
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 06/08/07 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 8
Oh dear, I am afraid Sam just read Dean's "time of death" on the screen... Not good. Great chapter, at least they saved Bean. I love the tension between the boys. Can't wait what's up next.
Great work so far!
Author's Response: Thanks Soennelchen! First of all, very interesting name! Secondly, thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! I am so happy you are enjoying this--it means so much to me! Another update coming very soon!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 04/08/07 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 8
Great, they saved Ben's life. lot of tension between Dean and Sam. The way Sam reacted at the end I think he just learned what his brother did. Great chapter, can,t wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks, Oceane! I had to have the boys at least save one person! And yeah, I love creating the tension between the brothers...almost as much fun as the pranks. And yes, Sam found out about Dean...uh-oh, this can't be good...
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 03/08/07 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 8
oooh, another cliffie? Please update again soon! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Thanks Kayla! Yes, another cliffie. Apparently I've been told by many people that I have a problem by leaving you with so many of them... Another update soon!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 03/08/07 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 8
OHOH, not good... But i'm hesitating, is it a "son of a bitch", the damn thing is after my adored big brother, or a "son on a bitch", Dean, wasn't the sombrero enough you had to do something more and to my adored laptop... Well well, i'm also wondering how they gonna convince Wally to destroy the talisman himself. Anyway, i can only like a chapter starting by "Sam was a malor pain in the ass." and ending by "Son of a bitch !". And yes, i'm proud of you.
Author's Response: Thanks fredo! I just love the reviews you love me...they are always such a great read! And thanks for being proud of me...it brings a smile to my face!
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