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Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 19/12/11 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 4

I'm relieved that Sam found Dean. With Dean in so bad shape and  confused, I'm wondering how Sam'll get him out of that hole. 

Reviewer: snseriesfan (Signed) · Date: 17/12/11 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 5

Tree: I love your stories.  Always watch for them.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

Author's Response:

Sheri

Thank you so much! I've been out of it for a bit- but I'm hoping the muse coorperates and I can be less of a ghost from now on! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review! Happy Holidays!

Tree

Reviewer: skysurferin (Signed) · Date: 17/12/11 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

There are only five words I can say about this: I love it! Please more! :D

Author's Response:

Sonya

5 VERY appreciated words!!! Thanks so much! Next chapter is up! Hope you like it!

Tree

Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 16/12/11 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 5

I am loving it! Just love that hurt Dean, must be the nurse in me wanting to make it all better. ;-).

Thanks for such a fun ride!
Vikki



Author's Response:

Vikki

We're kindred spirits - the nurse in me- (sickly) loves to hurt him so I can gush over getting him better... although- sadly- I will admit - there is little C to the H/C in this fic! Sorry! But sooo glad you are enjoying it and thank you for taking the time to stop and leave a review. More up on Sunday! :)

Tree

Reviewer: Micaiah (Signed) · Date: 13/12/11 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 5

I'd be more than happy to give Dean a sponge bath if you'd ever get him out of this hole!  LOL

I love how Dean has his snarky attitude, even with all the pain he is in.



Author's Response:

The line forms behind ME!

Its always a toss up as to which Dean I love more ... HurtDean, SmartassDean, SnarkyDean, HeroDean ... so maybe that's why I kinda combine them a bit... :) Or - maybe thats just what's so appealing about him periord!

T

Reviewer: ucat42 (Signed) · Date: 13/12/11 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 3

I'm breathless....geez, I can't get my thoughts together!!!

 Wish I had more time to compose a better review, but then, that would take time away from reading the next chapter....



Author's Response:

I consider this payback for all the times you've left me the same way! LOL

Tree

Reviewer: Pandora Jazz (Signed) · Date: 13/12/11 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 5

I realize I'm late reviewing on your story, but I just wanted to say thanks for sharing it with us.

I'll admit I do have trouble sometimes reading about Sam leaving for college, but I like how you wrote Dean as he discussed it with his little brother and offering to help. 

You have filled your story with some wonderful tense moments.  I felt sorry for Dean as Sam will be leaving in the spring and in his concussed state he thinks his little brother has already left.  You did a great job of describing Dean's injuries.  Plus if Dean didn't hate rats before, he should now as they tried to eat him after falling through the floor. 

I'm glad that Sam found a way to get to Dean, but curious how Sam will get his brother out of the hole.

I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter and some other stories on this site.  I'm sorry it has been awhile since I visited. 

Until next time, take care.



Author's Response:

Lori

Thank YOU for taking the time to read and review! I'm glad you like and are enjoying the story. I really love pre-series time frame- and delving into Dean's POV when Sam left is one of my favorite.

The injuries plus Dean's concussed brain mixing up reality from delusion when it comes to his brother leaving - was a scenario just too good to pass up. As for the rats- well, I'm just sick that way! LOL

As for how they will get out... you've a couple more chapters to wait...

Thanks again- great to see you!

Tree

Reviewer: ange (Signed) · Date: 12/12/11 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 5

WOW! Every chapter is a little golden nuget and I apologise for being lazy and not reviewing since chapter 1. but please be assured i think this is great. I am reading the new SN novel Night Terrors at the moment and i can honestly say i love this story more. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Angie... wow! I'm nearly speechless... Truly humbled by your praise! Night Terrors is a pretty darn good story and the characterizations are actually spot on for one of the SPN books. But truly... thanks so much for even mentioning this story in the same sentence. I'm glad you're enjoying it and really appreciative that you took a moment to review! THANKYOU!

Tree

Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 12/12/11 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 5

Oh no, you are sure putting both boys, but especially Dean through the wringer in this story, aren't you? It always makes me feel like a bad girl that I enjoy reading stories in which it gets from bad to worse and then some more for the boys. Great job, look forward to chapter 6!

Author's Response:

Guilty pleasures!!! Dont feel bad... you enjoy reading it... I enjoy writing it! There's more to come- pain and angst! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing... it makes me feel really good to know there are others out there that enjoy the H/C too!

Tree

Reviewer: ucat42 (Signed) · Date: 12/12/11 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 2

Stay calm…don’t panic… just breathe…

You know me..I love a cliffie!!!

 Might take me a couple days to read more, but I can't wait!!!

Reviewer: ucat42 (Signed) · Date: 12/12/11 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

Okay, I been waiting till I had enough time to start reading...turns out that aint gonna happen, so I just started anyway.  I gotta say...Gosh...I was waiting for something to jump out any minute!

You are such a talented weaver of the tale that I bow humbly in your presence, knowing I can never match the glorious way you spin a story...



Author's Response:

Caroline - you are simply too kind with your words. I'm glad you liked the tension... I tried to make the setting as ominious and oppressive as possible to suit the way Dean was feeling... it only gets worse! LOL

And I doubt you have ANYTHING to worry about. You manage QUITE NICELY to spin your own tales- as clearly evidenced by the phenomenal stories you've posted lately!!!

T

Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 11/12/11 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 5

will be waiting for more cant wait great story!!!!



Author's Response:

Sundays have become my day for posting... so you wont have to wait tooo long! I'm so glad you like the story and I can't tell you thanks enough- for always leaving a review!

Tree

Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 11/12/11 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 5

Omg! Yet again you've got me hooked! I'm sure there's more Dean -angst to come! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Author's Response:

Of course there's more angst to come... and more Sam- and more Dean pain... and just MAYBE--- I'll let them get rescued too!  LOL.

Thanks so much for leaving a review! They make me smile!

Tree

Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 08/12/11 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 4

cant wait for more!!!

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 06/12/11 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 4

great update, Glad Sams found Dean but how are they going to get out now? looking forward to next chapter.  P.S. thanks for the break in the evil cliffies I've just been diagnosed with high blood pressue!

Author's Response:

I took pity on what was left of your finger nails.... LOL I'm not sure if there are many evil cliffies left in the upcoming chapters- but I make no promises! I do promise lots of brotherly angst though! That and pain... always lots of pain...

As for getting out- who EVER said they'd get out- in one piece- together... heehee!!!

Thanks as always for stopping by and leaving a review! I really appreciate it!

Tree

Reviewer: zuimar (Signed) · Date: 06/12/11 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 4

Awesome update! Though I'm glad Sam has found Dean, now you got me worried how on earth he's going to get the two of them out of that hole. Looking forward to more to come!

Author's Response:

There's the big secret!!! It wont be easy- but that's the point isnt it? Next chapter up this weekend! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Tree

Reviewer: Micaiah (Signed) · Date: 05/12/11 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 4

Mmm.....Dean whumpage.  'Nuff said.  LOL

 



Author's Response: Heehee! I know what you love..... :)

Reviewer: Cricket04 (Signed) · Date: 05/12/11 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

Such a great story! I cannot wait for more!


Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter. There's much more coming!

Tree

Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 04/12/11 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 4

Yay! Love it! Update soon please, can't wait for the next one! :D

Author's Response: Thanks Meg - Glad you're enjoying it! Next update this weekend... and more angst and pain to come!

Reviewer: Micaiah (Signed) · Date: 30/11/11 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 3

I didn't realized you had posted the next chapter of this.  Just had time to pop over yesterday and check out the challenge when you mentioned it.  Didn't even look at what had been posted.  Decided to give it a quick look today and now here I am, sneaking and reading when I should be working.  LOL

Sam and Dean's self loathing and guilt kill me!  That is one of the reasons for so many misunderstandings between them.  They assume because of the way they feel, it's the way the other one feels, when it couldn't be farther from the truth.  Sam doesn't hate Dean and Dean doesn't want to just ditch Sam but because of their own personal issues they make themselves believe that.

Sammy needs to hurry up and get Dean out of there!  And don't rats carry rabies?  Not good!

Okay, where's the next chapter?  LOL



Author's Response:

I just sneak up on you that way!!! LOL... I promise I wont tell your boss that you're reading SN fic on the side... after all- it shouldnt be against the rules- but a work requirement to get through a day!

As for the self-loathing and misunderstanding... well- I have to assume it didnt start after Stanford- but found it roots much earlier on - at least for Dean. And I'm sorta sure that Sam too- with his relationship with John (alluded to) spent a fair amount of time dealing with self-doubt and wondering what his family thought about him. I'm sure they carried that for years on...

As for rabies? Hmm- actually hadn't thought about that.... but they definately have myriads of disease... nasty critters!

Next chapter? Is it Sunday yet? LOL

Thanks as always hun! I totally appreciate the support! Would LOVE to return the same- HINT... HINT!

T

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 29/11/11 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 3

It was very interesting reading Dean and Sam's thoughts while they're apart . Poor Dean, he's in pretty bad shape hope Sam'll find him sooner than later. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

As always--- THANKYOU so much Oceane!!! You make my heart glad to see a review. I'm happy that you're enjoying the story and while I can't apologize for the rats or hurt- (you know you love it too!) I can promise that Sam WILL find Dean - well, sooner or later! LOL

Thanks again for stopping by!

Tree

Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 29/11/11 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 2

OMG!Injured Dean is trapped with rats, lot of rats, not good, not good at all.

Reviewer: pendays (Signed) · Date: 28/11/11 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 3

cant wait for more!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks much for the review. You wont have to wait toooo long. The next chapter should be up soon!

Tree

Reviewer: snseriesfan (Signed) · Date: 28/11/11 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 3

These rats are creepy. I hate those little rodents.  Poor Dean. What a mess he is in.  Can't wait for the next chapter, and I hope Sam is there for the rescue.  Good story, and I'm enjoying it.

Author's Response:

Thanks Sheri!!!

So glad you're enjoying the story- even if you're not fond of the rats. They aren't the main focus -believe it or not! Much more hurt and angst to come... and the rescue- well, sorta... is in sight.

Thanks much for taking the time to read and leave such a nice review! Next chapter will be up shortly!

Tree

Reviewer: amethyst (Signed) · Date: 28/11/11 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 3

fantastic story. No nails left on my right hand,  now starting on my left! Please save Dean from those damn rats soon. Awesome job.

Author's Response:

I guess I'm going to owe you a manicure- or maybe a set of artificial nails- LOL. I'd say I was sorry- but I'm not- and I doubt you really mind after all? Hahahaha! 

As for the rats... hmmm- I'll see what I can do- or maybe what Sam can do? Next chapter will be up in a couple days... or at least before you start in on your toes?????

Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Tree

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