Reviewer: saber (Signed) · Date: 22/01/12 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 2
I just read your story from beginning to end in just one sitting. Your story really captured my attention. Poor Dean! I didn't think his suffering would ever end (I loved every minute of it). Thanks for the time and effort it took to write this. I most certainly will read your other works.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I look forward to more reviews, then, as feedback is what makes this all worth while!
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 21/01/12 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 22
Caroline Angel, Another Great Story. You really kicked Dean's Butt in this one. love hurt Dean and protective Sam. Bobby was the awesome father figure as always. I love how you wrote Sherry-Anne tough and strong. Always making sure Sam drank the holy water. she had me wondering if that is what a sister would have been like if they had one. Dean keeping his eyes open when Sam told him there was a cheerleader. So what Dean would do.
Dean and Mark had me laughing. Dean was so out of it he didn't even catch on. Again great story and I look forward to another. Renee
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This was such a long story, much longer than I had initially anticipated, thank you for reading then taking the time to review!
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 20/01/12 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 22
I dont know where to start - but I'll give it a go... First, I just love the continuation of nearly dead Dean- delirious, still stuck in his delusions of Hell and staggering on. What a wonderful vision... I adore the hero triumphing through adversity... but you EXCELLED in my book by then giving me Dean thinking he was seeing his MOM... if there's anything that tugs at the heartstrings more- its that image... *sighs* You could have ended it there and I would have been a much satisfied camper... However, I love that you had the happy ending with Mark, otherDean, Sam, Bobby and even Sherry-Anne (thought for sure she was Zaltychow there for a while) all coming together and to rally round our hero. I like how they sort of wrapped it up for Sally and that she even remembered Dean from town way back. She was pretty calm for all the revelations thrown at her.. but I like how she was all "Married to a ranger- no big deal" about it. I truly love Dean confused humor with Sally too- There was a professor and a cheerleader and... I was almost humming the theme to Gilligans Island for a minute... the poor guy! But nothing was more priceless yet soooo IN CHARACTER as the very end. I loved the double entendre of "pipes clear" "tongue in cheek" "Blow out any blockage" Just gotta love when Bobby and Sam tease Dean... He's so adorable when he's flustered! Once again, I cannot tell you how much I am humbled and appreciative of your generosity in creating this story. I have enjoyed EVERY SINGLE minute of it... and I while I'm sad to see it end- it only means you're starting another one. Thanks again and until next time! Tree
Author's Response: I don't think I can ever do you justice.... and I have read your work, I felt a bit embarrassed to think I could possible write for someone as tellented as you, so I really, really appreciate your feedback! I tried to hurt Dean a lot for you...(that is so sick, I know), but still make him our brave warrior! Yes, I've started (and posted) a new story, but may be a bit slower on this one. It is summer here, after all!!! Talk soon...and much thanks, again, to you!!!
Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 19/01/12 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 22
Just loved it! Thanks so much for sharing with all of us. I anxiously await your next story. Thanks again! Vikki
Author's Response: Well, thanks again for your fantastic feedback. I've started the next story. Poor you, I've done something terrible to you!
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 19/01/12 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 22
Nice ending to a good story. Glad Sherrie-Anne made it out alive..I liked her..spunky little thing..lol..Glad Prof Dean got his memory back when he saw Sally..I'll have to check out your next story..Is it going to have Angie in it? Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for flowing this story! Angie is getting her own story... An original, but I would like her to come back and visit the boys, so I guess the story after this will have her in it. I think, too, I'll write you into it! I'll PM you when I'm ready to start...
Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 18/01/12 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 21
Fantastic chapter! I just love that Dean's the hero. And then him wandering out into the snow! Just great!
To be honest, I'm glad it's not over yet. This has been such a fun ride!
Waiting (im)patiently for more! Vikki
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 17/01/12 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 21
Very good update..and woo hoo Dean saved the day again..wonder where he has wondered off to..Looking forward to more..Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 16/01/12 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 21
EVIL woman! LOL. Okay- I'll be nice since after all- you made Dean the hero. I adore heroes that just battle back against all odds, fighting against wounds and weakness and just manage to save the day. Thanks for feeding my need! hahahaa! I'm a voracious creatures. Okay- so we obviously are gonna get another chapter of them having to find Dean.... but then do we get a little of the C of the H/C? *looks hopefully* T
Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 13/01/12 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 20
Well you've done it again, and I'm still hanging on for more!
I loved the conversation comparing Dean and the professor, it was great! Sorry it took me so long to review this time, sick kids and busy at work. I 'm on the edge of my seat waiting for more!
More please!
Vikki ps I'd love to be in one of your stories! But as what kind of character? Hmm... any at all would be fantastic!
Author's Response: Aaaaahhhh...something evil, then.....
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/12 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 20
I have this strange Buffy/ Ripley mental image going on right now! Sherry-Anne picked up the unlit flame thrower. "Maybe I can use this?" she asked Sam, and he quickly lit it and showed her how to use it, already respecting the spunky little girl's hardened resolve. Oh and I sooo wish this story had pictures cause I can just so see the illustration of Dean - collapsed unconscious with Mark on one side and Sherry-Anne (with Flame thrower) standing watch over him. I'll be back later for a proper review- but I just HAD to comment on those two jems! Tree
Author's Response: Funny little Sherry-Anne. I may bring her back later, in another story (probably not, though) she was never meant to last the whole way. Shows she's got the stuff, even in my imagination!
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 10/01/12 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 20
I think its pretty interesting..lol..I just don't ever have much to say in reviews..Looking forward to more..thanks for writing..
Author's Response: The fact that you review is the main thing. I am hopeless at giving reviews, I try to at least say i've dropped by, which you do, so that makes my day!
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/12 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 19
Sorry- was gone for several days.... between having a cold and then just being out of town... I'm playing "catch-up" with a bunch of stories. To start- how great to see this all coming together... I'm not sure which I loved more- the pieces falling into place or the fact that Dean managed to save the day. I honestly wasnt expecting that. Guess I was kinda hoping for it- but just not expecting it considering how messed up he was and how everyone else seemed to be rallying to the cause. I have to pay you the proper kudos (although this isnt exactly a news flash) but once again- your story telling/crafting and mythology is just awesome!!!!! While I would have happily devoured pretty much any old plot line you would have conjured up... the sheer magic with which you've put this Lithuanian/Zaltys/Tricksterish... lore together just makes me stand in awe. I must also say that I love that Sherry Anne is still kicking ass and semi-taking-names... even if its as a cheerleader! I truly cannot wait to read this entire story in a sitting once its all done. Thanks again hun! I know you havent wrapped it up yet and heaven knows whats still in store... but its been an incredible ride! Tree
Author's Response: We're nearly at the end... this was all for you, and I hope I did you justice...
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 05/01/12 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 19
woo hoo Dean saved the day..so now we know who is controlling the Zaltys..I liked Alec..now he's gone...you hafta let Sherrie-Anne live..lol...wondering why she is screaming..looking forward to more. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Sorry I'm so late getting back to you, I do love your reviews, and I really appreciate them...another chapter is up soon...
Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 04/01/12 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 19
Oh how I hate (love) the cliffies!!! This was great! What a fantastic story. You know my mantra... more please, more please please. please. PLEASE!
Thanks, Vikki
Author's Response: I think I'm gonna have to write you into my next story...who would you like to be? A victim, a heroine, or a monster????
Reviewer: latlk (Signed) · Date: 04/01/12 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 19
Another great chapter. I loved it when Dean saved the day! And I think it's great that all the people they're trying to save are now helping save the boys and Bobby. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! Please feel free to make it a habit!!!
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 03/01/12 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 18
Great update..another cliffehanger..lol..who in the heck has showed up? Kind of sad about Erma I liked her..Glad Sam told Mark..lol..Looking forward to more. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you even more for reviewing!!!
Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 02/01/12 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 18
So the brothers are back together, good, but NOW who shows up???? It's great, keep it coming!
Vikki
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you had a good time while you were away, have a very happy new year!
Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 02/01/12 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 17
Yes, I'm still loving it. Sorry I was away for a while. Looking forward to more! More please! Vikki
Author's Response: Well, there's twenty two chapters all together...there'll be more!
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 30/12/11 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 17
Great update..glad bobby was able to find Dean and Mark...Poor Erma...Looking forward to more..Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! This is a rather long story, so I appreciate you staying for the long haul!
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 29/12/11 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 16
Great update..So now we have babies to deal with..just can't catch a break..lol..Looking forward to more..thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thanks, again, for your review, you make my day!
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 27/12/11 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 15
Holy Crap! I'm not sure if this is a Christmas present or not - sadistic woman that you are! LOL. Hurt, separated... and I think I'm confused as hell! LOL... okay- not really, I just have to remember who everyone is. I think I need a cast list! hahahaha. At least everyone is sorta together... well, almost. They're kinda in one place - the Zalty's cave- if not in different chambers and beat to hell!. I was kinda thinking maybe Bobby would save the day... but considering he got his ass tossed too- I'm doubtful. Its not looking promising for Sam OR Dean... so um... hmmm. And last we saw- Sherry Anne wasnt looking so hot either. You never did say if that this wansnt a Death Fic- lol... I almost feel sorry for Mark... for deluded guy! Course- you never said this wasnt a Slash fic either- but since we're not into that here on UnGen- I think I'm safe! LOL I think I gotta go back reread this chapter... lots of delicious hurt! Nice Christmas present hun! Hope you're feeling better! Tree
Author's Response: Feeling better, thanks... You know I like a twist and a turn, especialy in a cave! Poor Dean...hmm...poor Dean. I hope you were not attached to my 'other characters'. Well, not too attached, anyway. Slash? I don't write it. But I can play with the notion... New chapter very soon, today or tomorrow...
Reviewer: moncitymom (Signed) · Date: 27/12/11 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 15
Thanks for another chapter! This story has me sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next! What a cliffhanger, please don't leave us hanging for long! Lovin the hurt Dean and you hurt him so well :)
Author's Response: I won't, it's written, I just have to bypass a few firewalls and install a proxy to publish at work...something I am NOT supposed to do. If everyone will stop hanging around my desk, I can have it up today...
Reviewer: VBEDELL (Signed) · Date: 27/12/11 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 15
Thanks so much for this wonderful Christmas present. I'm still loving this story, you weave such a fantastic tale. This review is my Christmas present to you, hope you like it!
Vikki
Author's Response: Best. Christmas. Present. Ever!
Reviewer: moncitymom (Signed) · Date: 25/12/11 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 14
Ok, so its Christmas morning and I thought I would check to see if I got my christmas wish...and I did, I new chapter! Thank you! Now you know what would make my new year.... :) I hope you are having a great Christmas and thanks again for sharing your amazing talent and giving us a new chapter!
Author's Response: You are most welcome, hey, I even gave you another one!
Reviewer: dreamlitnight (Signed) · Date: 23/12/11 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 14
This story is sooo good! Dean snuggling with Mark was cute. I cannot wait to see what happens next. There is so much going on and the monsters are scary! Thanks for sharing this.
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! Reviews DO really encourage me to write, I wasn't joking!!
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