Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 17/11/11 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 15

Sorry... been a little behind in reviewing but this is just an awesome story. I just adore VacationDean... he's so adorable... a side to him that we never see (probably never will) And poor Bobby, trying so hard to kick back and relax, but in true hunter fashion- always prepared, and then getting pulled into a hunt right there in paradise.

I was seriously suspicious about Leylani... figured for sure Dean had hooked up with the succubus... so I was pretty happy/surprised that she turned out to be a hunter too. I figured she had poisioned him or worse...

Nice bit there at the end - her flashing in to save the day... I can just picture the scene!

Now I think Bobby has some "'esplainin' to do!" LOL  Do we get more shirtless boys on the beach? Surely the room is still paid for?

Great story!

Tree

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying, i've now posted the rest of the chapters, so I hope you like them just as much x

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 08/11/11 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 2

I've read a TON of stories- I'm not sure I've read ANY that began like this... But I can tell you I'm certainly looking forward to this one. Not sure if there's going to be humor, angst, or heaven knows what those three will run into IF and WHEN they make it to Hawaii... hell, now that I think of it- ANYTHING could happen on the flight there... *considers S1 Phantom Traveler - LOL* 

I'm settling in for the ride!

Tree

Author's Response: Thank you, hope you enjoy now I've posted the whole story :)