:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: zz1989 (Signed) · Date: 27/05/09 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

Another interesting story.

Reviewer: rahne (Signed) · Date: 30/09/08 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

The ideas are good, but I'm afraid your sentences lack any structure or cohesion, and your punctuation needs a great deal of work. Just reading several well written books over the next few years will get you going in the right direction. You might consider a creative writing or journalism class. You want to be able to communicate your ideas well, since they are worth hearing.

Reviewer: supernatgrl13 (Signed) · Date: 25/06/08 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 1

it's good. nice chick-flick moment!!

Author's Response: Thanks glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, this was really good for a first attempt. I know how you feel I'm on my first attempt too, but this was really good, glad I stumbled on it.
*Schelz*

Author's Response: Thanks and glad you liked it good luck on your story

Reviewer: sammarinade (Signed) · Date: 17/09/07 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this! Randomly found it and enjoyed, thanks for the read!

Author's Response: Thanks and glad you liked it

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 27/08/07 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

Haha...term papers will do that to a person. This is great, zeros! I like how you ended it...with the "Yes, sir." Makes it seem like Bobby's sort of becoming their surrogate father. This was very emotional--and yes, chick-flicky. But hey! You got it out and it stayed true to the boys and their feelings. I don't know if they would actually do that, but it makes sense how you wrote it. Very nice!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and glad you liked it

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 21/06/07 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice insight into the boys. Very well written nice foray back into writing.

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 21/06/07 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 1

Really good job.....Gave a true read on both boys' feelings.........I can't wait to see where Season 3 will go with the YED recognition by Mary.....

Author's Response:
Thanks, me also I hope they make it something good and juicy to last the whole season about what mary really knew

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 20/06/07 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

Term papers suck! Good job with the story.

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: rebecca (Signed) · Date: 20/06/07 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

dont' worry !!
to be u 1 story u did it great!!!!!
keep going!

Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement

Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 20/06/07 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great story! I'm glad that Sam decided to tell Dean about that night in his nursery. Nice job!
~Kayla

Author's Response: Thanks I wasn't sure where i was going to take the story it just sort of wrote its self.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 20/06/07 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very nice job, makes the wait for the new season seem a little more bearable...K

Author's Response: Thank you

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