Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 11/10/11 07:07 AM · On: Meet the New Boss...Worse than the Old Boss
Very good, brings back those latter moments of that episode...needed a refresher. Thanks for sharing. Jacq
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I know it doesn't match what happens in the next episode, but what I wrote is closer to the actual lore. Hopefully the boys find a way to kill the unkillable soon!
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 30/09/11 11:01 AM · On: Meet the New Boss...Worse than the Old Boss
I can totally see this happening! I love the dialogue between Dean and LeviathanCas going down like this... and you did an excellent job of weaving some good mythology in there too. I love how the Leviathan has a bit of an axe to grind with God and how he's playing on Dean's history to try to get him to help him hunt God down for a bit of revenge. Too bad Dean just doesn't give a damn... I also loved that end line about the staring contest between them and who blinked... Nice touch! Great tag! Tree
Author's Response: Thanks for your thoughtful feedback! I'm glad that you got the bit about Dean claiming a stalemate in a staring contest. I wasn't sure if that would be misinterpreted as Dean not knowing the rules about such contests...so it's good to have confirmation that someone understood :) Thanks again for your kind review! -Armaita
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