:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: TrippleP (Signed) · Date: 10/09/11 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 9

The story is very well written, but Dean went to hell and wasn't this broken.

Author's Response:
Hey there!
You make a fair point, but my stories tend to be AU and don't take into account the main story arc of the series. I used the faerie abduction in 6.09 simply because it was a good starting point for this story.
Faerie lore is some of the darkest, most sinister lore out there, and is littered with stories of people being scared to death, fading away of a broken heart or simply losing their minds, and this was what I was looking to convey in this story - as well as just indulging my vulnerable Dean/protective Sam preference.
Really appreciate you taking the time to read and review :)

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/11 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 13

Sorry this took me a bit to get back to. I actually read this story ( devoured would be the appropriate word) in one sitting a couple of days ago- but life got in the way and I didnt have the chance to review.
I loved that you wove in so many nuances from the original episode- little details like the bit about Tom being a first born son- made it even more delightful to read. The description of where Dean was being held- made it beautiful and yet all the more frightning. I kept waiting for him to either get lost in the place or get tricked into drinking or something likewise- and be stuck there. I hated the princess so much it was seething as I read.
Even at the end- I was still worried that Dean was going to be lost to them.... the king's vengence the last straw that he wouldnt be able to survive.
All in all just a wonderful tale... and you surprised me that the little bit about what the princess did to him managed to be revealed to Sam - even more so that he show a tiny bit of weakness and revelation to his brother. That was nice!
Great story... of course!
Tree

Author's Response:
Wow, what an awesome review, thank you so much! I was a bit worried about this one because it was without a doubt the darkest thing I have ever written, but I wanted to get as far away from the pink sparkly puke-bug faeries as possible.
So glad you enjoyed it, and I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know!!
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Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 06/09/11 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 2

Loved your description of the alternative place Dean's is in. The way you describe the trees and the setting is vivid and beautiful Your writing is wonderful, like a full colour picture, and your characterisation is so well thouht through. Wonderful touches like the detail about Dean's freckles and Sam's stab of jealousy over Dean responding to Tom but not to him lend weight to your story.
Outstanding work, I've read a couple of your one shots and thought you were talented and really creative, I had no idea just HOW talented - Dude your awesome!!!! LOL.

Author's Response:
Ah, thank you for your kind words, it's so encouraging to hear comments like that. I'm really glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 06/09/11 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

What a start! Intrigued and on the edge of my seat... I am so greatful to you for posting this story in its entirity, as I have a feeling it's a good one and the suspence would kill me!!! LOL.
I love the easy lifestyle you draw here, the boys being well guys with such convincing touches as the "present" in the bathroom gag that I can easily see happening between the brothers!! LOL. I have two brothers, and this scene made me smile ear to ear.
Great work. Abi.

Author's Response:
Thank you again - really appreciate you taking the time to read and review, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as much!
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